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๐Ÿ˜Š Kelasi yil Ramazoniga ofiyatda iymon bilan yetishimizni muvaffaq qilsin! Omin.
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๐Ÿ“Š IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Academic Vocabulary In Use

โœ… Vocabulary

โ‡๏ธ Going Up
โ€ข Rise(rose)
โ€ข Go up(went up)
โ€ข Increase(increased)
โ€ข Grow(Grew)
โ€ข Shoot up (shot up)
โ€ข Surge(surged)
โ€ข Rocket (rocketed)

โ‡๏ธ Going Down
โ€ข Decrease (decreased)
โ€ข Fall (fell)
โ€ข Drop (fell)
โ€ข Decline (declined)
โ€ข Go down (went down)
โ€ข Plunge (plunged)
โ€ข Plummet

โ‡๏ธ No Change
โ€ข stay the same
โ€ข remain constant
โ€ข stabilised
โ€ข remain steady
โ€ข were unchanged
โ€ข did not change
โ€ข remain stable
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โœ… Writing time

Before starting to write an essay:

Create an outline
Before you begin your writing, create your essay outline. Jot your topic in the middle of your page, draw lines branching from the topic and write main ideas at the end of each line. From the main ideas at the end of the lines draw more lines and include your thoughts.
Another option is to use a simple outline. Write your topic at the top of your page, separate your essay into introduction, body, and conclusion. For a five paragraph essay, have an introduction, at least three main ideas, and a conclusion. Leave spaces under each idea to enable you to list smaller ideas supporting the main idea. The โ€˜skeletonโ€™ will enable you to write a more organized essay.

Sample outline:
๐Ÿ”ฑIntroduction paragraph

๐Ÿ“ŒFirst sentence
๐Ÿ“ŒThesis statement

๐Ÿ”ฑBody paragraph

๐Ÿ“ŒGive statistics
๐Ÿ“ŒInformation on the subject
๐Ÿ“ŒResearch on the topic
๐Ÿ“ŒRelevant data if any

๐Ÿ”ฑConclusion paragraph

๐Ÿ“ŒRestate your thesis statement
๐Ÿ“ŒSupport arguments
๐Ÿ“Œwrite a call to action
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Academic Task 1 vocabulary ๐Ÿงฎ

Proportions:

โœ… 2% = A tiny portion, a very small proportion.
โœ… 4% = An insignificant minority, an insignificant proportion.
โœ… 16% = A small minority, a small portion.
โœ… 70% = A large proportion.
โœ… 72% = A significant majority, A significant proportion.89% = A very large proportion.
โœ… 89% = A very large proportion.

#IELTS #writingtask1 #vocabulary ๐Ÿ“‰
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๐ŸŒ How do we avoid informal vocabulary in writing?

That's a difficult question to answer, but there are a few common mistakes to avoid.

๐ŸŽฏ Firstly, try to avoid using the word 'get'. Usually, it feels a bit informal and there are always more precise options that show better depth in your understanding of collocation.

๐ŸŽฏ Secondly, don't use 'and / but / so' to start sentences. It's considered informal by some strict English teachers - and potentially examiners - so just use alternatives like 'Also / However / Thus'.

๐ŸŽฏ Third, try to avoid idioms, proverbs and sayings. Idiomatic vocabulary and idioms are not exactly the same thing by IELTS standards. Idiomatic vocab is just nice collocations / phrasal verbs etc. A lot of people think saying things like 'every coin has two sides' is a good idiom. It is not; it is just informal and awkward.

๐ŸŽฏ Fourth, don't use expressions like 'ie / eg / etc' - these abbreviations are too informal for essays.

๐ŸŽฏ Fifth, avoid the following words completely: "really / totally / humongous / kids".

๐ŸŽฏ Lastly, avoid contractions. Don't say 'can't / don't / won't'. Say 'cannot / do not / will not'.

These little changes should really help you keep your essays at the appropriate formal/academic tone. If you have any queries about other idioms, phrasal verbs or expressions that you aren't sure are informal or not, please ask in the comments.
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๐Ÿ“In an agreement/ disagreement type essay, you will often need to express whether you agree/ disagree or partially agree with a given statement or opinion. The following vocabulary would be helpful to express your agreement with something.

โ€ข I quite agree that......

โ€ข I strongly agree......

โ€ข I completely agree that......

โ€ข I totally agree with the given idea that......

โ€ข I agree with the opinion that......

โ€ข I am quite inclined to the opinion that......

โ€ข I could not agree more......

โ€ข I concur with the group who believe that......

โ€ขI accept that......

โ€ข I accept the fact that......

โ€ข I approve of the idea......

โ€ขI am in agreement......

โ€ข I consent that......
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#Essay #Writing #Task2

โ˜˜๏ธ Two-way question

โœ… Q:
Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong.
Why are universities becoming more competitive?
Is this a positive or negative development?

๐Ÿ’ก Answer:

In recent decades, there has been a rise in competitive admission rates for universities. In my opinion, this is largely due to improving income equality and is a positive trend on the whole.

The main cause of this phenomenon is a growth in the global middle class. In developed countries, education levels have been rising steadily since the beginning of the 20th century with diminishing returns as countries reach 90% and above. Therefore, the most significant increases now come from the developing world. In particular, Asian and Middle Eastern nations such as Vietnam, Malaysia, and the UAE have seen dramatic growth in per capita income, enabling families to send their children to university domestically or abroad. Coupled with increased tax revenue this allows governments to fund state schools and offer scholarships and grants to less privileged segments of the population. Larger applicant pools from around the world are concomitant with increased competition.

Despite the risk that less affluent families will be left behind, fiercer competition is an overwhelming positive. When a large number of applicants compete for limited number of spots, this motivates each individual to excel. For example, a student applying to Harvard University in the 1950s was competing against a limited number of other applications and could likely rely on wealth and social status to gain acceptance. Nowadays, the acceptance rate is below 5% as students from all over the world strive for a place at Harvard. This means students must work harder to differentiate themselves by taking on more meaningful extracurriculars, receiving higher grades, and writing more insightful college essays. All this hard work in the aggregate translates to personal growth even if they must settle for a lesser university.

In conclusion, rising incomes globally are responsible for increased competitiveness for university education and this clearly benefits both individuals and society. However, it is also important that governments and families mitigate the potentially negative effects of competition.

โœ๏ธ Total words: 320

๐Ÿ“Band: 7.0+
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#Essay #Writing #Task2 โ˜˜๏ธ Two-way question โœ… Q: Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development? ๐Ÿ’ก Answer: In recent decades, there has been aโ€ฆ
๐Ÿ”— Vocabulary of #Essay

โ™ป๏ธ recent decades - the last 20 or 30 years
โ™ป๏ธ rise - growth
โ™ป๏ธ competitive admission rates - harder to get into
โ™ป๏ธ largely due to - mostly because of
โ™ป๏ธ improving income equality - people earning more money
โ™ป๏ธ positive trend on the whole - good overall
โ™ป๏ธ phenomenon - trend
โ™ป๏ธ growth - increase
โ™ป๏ธ global middle class - people around the world earning decent salaries
โ™ป๏ธ developed countries - rich nations
โ™ป๏ธ education levels - how much schooling someone has
โ™ป๏ธ steadily - at regular intervals
โ™ป๏ธ 20th century - 1900-2000
โ™ป๏ธ diminishing returns - the rates of growth slow
โ™ป๏ธ reach 90% and above - between 90 and 100%
โ™ป๏ธ significant - meaningful
โ™ป๏ธ developing world - poorer parts of the world
โ™ป๏ธ seen dramatic growth - undergone a lot of positive change
โ™ป๏ธ per capita income - the amount earned per person
โ™ป๏ธ enabling - allowing for
โ™ป๏ธ domestically - in oneโ€™s country
โ™ป๏ธ abroad - in other countries
โ™ป๏ธ coupled with - combined with
โ™ป๏ธ tax revenue - money people pay the government
โ™ป๏ธ fund state schools - give money to government schools
โ™ป๏ธ scholarships - money for academic excellence
โ™ป๏ธ grants - money the government gives students that they donโ€™t have to pay back
โ™ป๏ธ less privileged segments of the population - poorer people
โ™ป๏ธ larger applicant pools - more total people applying
โ™ป๏ธ are concomitant with - happen at the same time as a result
โ™ป๏ธ despite - regardless of
โ™ป๏ธ risk - threat
โ™ป๏ธ less affluent families - poorer families
โ™ป๏ธ left behind - neglected
โ™ป๏ธ fiercer - more intense
โ™ป๏ธ applicants - people who apply
โ™ป๏ธ motivates - encourages
โ™ป๏ธ excel - do really well
โ™ป๏ธ limited - contained
โ™ป๏ธ applications - what you send to apply
โ™ป๏ธ rely on - depend on
โ™ป๏ธ wealth - money
โ™ป๏ธ social status - standing in society
โ™ป๏ธ gain acceptance - get into
โ™ป๏ธ acceptance rate - number of people admitted
โ™ป๏ธ differentiate - separate yourself
โ™ป๏ธ taking on - join
โ™ป๏ธ meaningful extracurriculars - good activities outside school
โ™ป๏ธ insightful - meaningful, smart
โ™ป๏ธ in the aggregate - combined
โ™ป๏ธ translates to - means
โ™ป๏ธ personal growth - individual progress
โ™ป๏ธ even if - regardless of
โ™ป๏ธ settle - have to
โ™ป๏ธ lesser university - not as good school
โ™ป๏ธ responsible for - it is their duty
โ™ป๏ธ clearly benefits - definitely good for
โ™ป๏ธ mitigate - lessens the impact
โ™ป๏ธ potentially negative effects - possible downsides
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Useful Expressions for Writing Essays in IELTS ๐Ÿ˜Ž

๐Ÿ‡ฌ๐Ÿ‡ง It has long been my belief that โ€ฆ

๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ฟ Anchadan beri shu narsaga ishonib kelamanki โ€ฆ
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๐Ÿ‡ฌ๐Ÿ‡ง It has become apparent in recent years that ...

๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ฟ Oxirgi yillarda shu narsa koโ€™zga tutilyaptiki โ€ฆ
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๐Ÿ‡ฌ๐Ÿ‡ง There is no precise evidence to refute that fact that โ€ฆ

๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ฟ Bu narsani rad etishga hech qanday asos yoโ€™q โ€ฆ
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๐Ÿ‡ฌ๐Ÿ‡ง It is highly likely to argue that โ€ฆ

๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ฟ Bu borada baxslashish ayni muddao boโ€™lar edi โ€ฆ
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๐Ÿ‡ฌ๐Ÿ‡ง It is highly unlikely to argue that โ€ฆ

๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ฟ Bu borada baxslashish maqsadga muvofiq emas
โ€ฆ

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โœ…Guruh predloglarโ—๏ธโ—๏ธ

๐Ÿงจaccording to- ga muvofiq, ko'ra, binoan

๐Ÿงจapart from -ni hisobga olmaganda; -dan tashqari

๐Ÿงจas to (as for)- -ga kelsak

๐Ÿงจbecause of- tufayli

๐Ÿงจbut for- ... bo'lmaganda

๐Ÿงจby means of- vositasida, yordamida

๐Ÿงจin accordance with - ga muvofiq, -ga ko'ra

๐Ÿงจin addition to- ga qo'shimcha

๐Ÿงจin case of- sodir bo'lganda, yuz berganda; bo'lsa, holda

๐Ÿงจas compared with (in
comparison with)-
bilan taqqoslaganda

๐Ÿงจin conformity with - ga ko'ra

๐Ÿงจin consequence of- ning natijasida, oqibatida

๐Ÿงจin favour of - ...ning foydasiga, nomiga

๐Ÿงจin spite of- ga qaramasdan

๐Ÿงจinstead of- ...ning o'rniga

๐Ÿงจon the event of- agar, mabodo, ... sa

๐Ÿงจin view of- sababli, boisdan, sharofati bilan

๐Ÿงจowing to- sababli, tufayli, vajdan

๐Ÿงจon behalf of, in the name of- ...ning nomidan

๐Ÿงจsubject to- ... bo'lsa, sharti bilan, holda

๐Ÿงจthanks to- tufayli, sababli, sharofati bilan

๐Ÿงจwith a view to- maqsadida, maqsadi bilan

๐Ÿงจwith (in) regard to, with (in) respect to- xususida, haqida,to'g'risida, nisbatan

๐Ÿงจin front of- qarshisida, ro'parasida
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