IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
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Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev - an IELTS instructor with more than 5 years of teaching experience and more than 10 000 students in online and offline courses alike.

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Recognition and rewards = increased motivation, commitment to work, and job satisfaction = encourage employees to fulfill their work obligations, meet deadlines, and excel in their job environment
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📝 Employee morale and productivity

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The charts under consideration illustrate the historical commuting habits of London residents and the average traffic speeds in the city between the years 1970 and 2010.

Overall, a noticeable shift away from traditional modes of transportation, such as cars and buses, towards alternative options can be observed. Of particular note is the subway, which emerged as the leading mode of travel at the end of the period after surpassing car usage. The second graph indicates a consistent decline in the average traffic speeds of locally managed roads in London.

In terms of commuting patterns, just over 40% of Londoners commuted to work by car in 1970. Although this percentage saw a gradual increase reaching an all-time peak of 48% by 1990, it then fell continually to close to 35% in 2010. Subway usage is negatively correlated. While about 32% of London commuters opted for subway in 1970, this figure dropped to 27% in 1990 but rebounded to 37% in 2010, overtaking car usage. Bus transportation experienced a minimal decrease from a high of 23% in the first year to approximately 18% by 1990, remaining relatively stable thereafter. The proportion of Londoners who travelled to work by bicycle or on foot showed modest growth, going from only 2% in 1970 to 8% and 5% in 2010, respectively.

When it comes to the second chart, there was a consistent decrease in traffic speeds on London roads over the period in question. In 1970, the average traffic speed stood at just down 25 miles per hour, steadily declining to 15 miles per hour by 2010.


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Assalomu alaykum my friends, mana bu topic 27-Aprel kuni real examda tushgan ekan.

Shunga bugun kechga soat 21:00 da birgalikda kecha tahlil qilgan articledan foydalanib 9.0 ballik essay yozsak nima deysizlar?

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Multiple perspective approach: Financial, emotional, social, individual, ……

Stuying abroad: drawbacks

From a financial perspective, studying abroad can be prohibitively expensive. …
From an emotional point of view, the influence of studying abroad is even worse. ..
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See a significant disparity in compensation = feel undervalued and unsupported = lower motivation and morale = not only refuse to perform at their best = comrpomise productivity and output | but also seek opportunities elsewhere = employee loyalty and retention!

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From an entrepreneurial perspective, when ordinary employees see a significant disparity in compensation between themselves and company directors, they may feel undervalued and unsupported, thereby leading to lower morale and decreased motivation. In response to a large pay gap, regular staff members can not only refuse to perform at their best, compromising overall productivity and output, but also seek opportunities elsewhere, hampering employee loyalty and retention.
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On a broader societal scale, the influence of high executive wages is even more pronounced. With widespread disparities in compensation often come income inequality and social unrest. If normal employees do not make as much money as company managers, irrespective of their hard work and commitment, they are likely to experience feelings of unfairness and disenfranchisement. In a world where individuals can barely afford their basic necessities, let alone enjoy a comfortable lifestyle, financial disparities might exacerbate social tensions.

On a societal scale, [income inequality and social unrest = feelings of unfairness and disenfranchisement = rising living expenses ]
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I teach and make a livelihood online, but I don’t spend more than 5 hours on the phone daily. I watch the latest and important interviews, read books, write essays, practice language skills and teach online. Most of you guys (not all of you fortunately)…
Avvallari mana bunga o’xshagan uzun postlar tashlab turardim: hozir ham bunaqa postlarni o’zim uchun yozaman lekin kanalga ulashmayman.

Chunki endi ko’pchilikka yordam berishni iloji yuq: avval biror bir xabar orqali jahlingizni chiqarib biroz o’ylashga va harakat qilishga undagan bo’lsam endi 90% odam uzun postni hatto oxirigacha o’qimaydi, ovozli xabarni hatto eshitmaydi.

Axir Tik Tok yoke Instagramda hayotini odamlarni e’tibori uchun sotib bo’lgan qullar sizni kunglingizni olish uchun “Hali hammasi yaxshi bo’ladi, sening ham kuning keladi, ayrim gullar biroz kechroq gullaydi” kabi xabarlar turganda kim ham hayotini shuncha qismini aslida yashamasdan shunchaki tirik bo’libgina o’tkazvorganini bilgisi keladi.

Ajoyib!!!


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Hozirgi Writing kursni atigi 100 ming sum qilganimni sababi, yana natijani oshirishga kafolat berganim sababi, odamlar hech narsani yuqotmasligini bilib qo’shilib ko’rsin degan edim.

Agar men kursni narxini sifatiga qarab qo’yganimda edi boshqa hamma kursdan qimmat qilgan bo’lardim. Chunki deyarli hech qaysi instructor uslublari tug’ri yoke notug’riligini bilish uchun har oy examga kirib experiment qilib chiqmaydi: har bir uslubni o’zi ishlab chiqmaydi: har bir articleni o’zi tuzib chiqmaydi: kursdagi har bir darsga faol qatnashsangiz darajangizni har oy 1 ballga oshirish kafolatini bermaydi!

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Assalomu alaykum my friends, mana bu topic 27-Aprel kuni real examda tushgan ekan. Shunga bugun kechga soat 21:00 da birgalikda kecha tahlil qilgan articledan foydalanib 9.0 ballik essay yozsak nima deysizlar? @WRITING_T
In our current capitalist society, it has become increasingly commonplace for business executives to command much larger compensation packages compared to regular employees, particularly in developed countries. While there are valid concerns about such high salaries, I am in favor of them.

Critics of substantial director wages cite entrepreneurial and social justifications for their stance. On an entrepreneurial level, when ordinary employees see a significant diparity in compensation between themselves and company directors, they might feel undervalued and unsupported, leading to lower morale and decreased motivation. In response to such a wide pay gap, regular staff members not only may refuse to perform at their best, ultimately compromising overall productivity and output, but also may seek opportunities elsewhere, resulting in diminished loyalty and retention.

On a broader societal scale, the implications of such remuneration are even more profound. With widespread disparities in compensation can come income inequality and social unrest. If normal workers are not adequately compensated compared to company managers, regardless of their hard work and dedication, they are likely to experience feelings of unfairness and disenfranchisement. In a world where individuals struggle to afford even their basic necessities, let alone enjoy a comfortable standard of living, heightened financial disparities can exacerbate social tensions.

Despite these arguments against high executive salaries, I am supportive of them. For one thing, such remuneration is essential to attract and retain top talent. Company directors are usually required to make critical decisions, solve complex problems, and nurture a positive work culture, all of which significantly impact the sustainability and success of an organization. Therefore, it is imperative to offer competitive wages to lure individuals with the necessary expertise and experience.

For another, the burden of responsibilities and pressures that come with being a director of
large organizations justifies the high compensation they receive. In fact, company managers are notorious for their long working hours, heavy workloads, and compromised work-life balance, all of which collectively take a toll on their psychological and physical well-being. The greater range of obligations one had, the greater their earnings should be.

In conclusion, while providing company executives with larger compensation packages than ordinary employees can potentially result in compromised workplace productivity and social cohesion, I believe that this practice ultimately does more good than harm. Only through high salaries can companies attract and reward their directors.


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