IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Task 2!
Although health professionals stress the importance of daily exercise to promote good health, many elderly individuals refuse to exercise regularly. While this issue can be attributed to the confluence of practical and emotional factors, I believe that governments and individuals can take effective measures to come to grips with it.
The lack of exercise among elderly members of society revolves around pragmatic and sentimental considerations. From a pragmatic perspective, many areas, especially those on the outskirts of cities, lack adequate sports facilities such as gyms, workout spaces, and swimming pools. Given this poor infrastructure, not only senior citizens but people of all ages also feel reluctant to commute to lengthy distances to exercise. From a sentimental standpoint, deeply entrenched social norms usually discourage older people from actively participating in physical exercise. Expected to spend their retirement in a conventional way by caregiving for grandchildren, socializing with peers, and relaxing at home, elderly members of society feel pressured to conform to familial and societal expectations. A good case in point is my country of Uzbekistan, where deviating from cultural norms and pursuing regular physical activity as a senior member of family often invite criticism from immediate family members, extended relatives, and neighbors.
Addressing this problem requires a collaborative approach from various stakeholders. On a governmental level, countries must take responsibility for providing convenient access to sports facilities for senior citizens. By increasing the number of conveniently-located and well-equipped recreational centers, it is possible to encourage people, regardless of their age, to engage in regular exercise. On an individual scale, it is crucial for elderly individuals to assume accountability for taking care of their own well-being. Rather than adhering to social standards and leading a sedentary lifestyle, they should exercise on a consistent basis and maintain an active way of life to increase their life expectancy and quality of life.
In conclusion, the lack of physical exercise among elderly populations has to do with a dearth of accessible sporting amenities and deeply ingrained social norms. It is through a joint effort from governmental bodies and individual members of society that progress can be made in promoting routine exercise among senior citizens.
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The lack of exercise among elderly members of society revolves around pragmatic and sentimental considerations. From a pragmatic perspective, many areas, especially those on the outskirts of cities, lack adequate sports facilities such as gyms, workout spaces, and swimming pools. Given this poor infrastructure, not only senior citizens but people of all ages also feel reluctant to commute to lengthy distances to exercise. From a sentimental standpoint, deeply entrenched social norms usually discourage older people from actively participating in physical exercise. Expected to spend their retirement in a conventional way by caregiving for grandchildren, socializing with peers, and relaxing at home, elderly members of society feel pressured to conform to familial and societal expectations. A good case in point is my country of Uzbekistan, where deviating from cultural norms and pursuing regular physical activity as a senior member of family often invite criticism from immediate family members, extended relatives, and neighbors.
Addressing this problem requires a collaborative approach from various stakeholders. On a governmental level, countries must take responsibility for providing convenient access to sports facilities for senior citizens. By increasing the number of conveniently-located and well-equipped recreational centers, it is possible to encourage people, regardless of their age, to engage in regular exercise. On an individual scale, it is crucial for elderly individuals to assume accountability for taking care of their own well-being. Rather than adhering to social standards and leading a sedentary lifestyle, they should exercise on a consistent basis and maintain an active way of life to increase their life expectancy and quality of life.
In conclusion, the lack of physical exercise among elderly populations has to do with a dearth of accessible sporting amenities and deeply ingrained social norms. It is through a joint effort from governmental bodies and individual members of society that progress can be made in promoting routine exercise among senior citizens.
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✅WRITING TASK 2 PRACTICE
🥇From a pragmatic perspective
🥇From a sentimental standpoint
🥈On an individual level
🥈On a governmental scale
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🥇From a pragmatic perspective
🥇From a sentimental standpoint
🥈On an individual level
🥈On a governmental scale
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When are you going to pull off your desired score?
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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
✅WRITING TASK 2 PRACTICE 🥇From a pragmatic perspective 🥇From a sentimental standpoint 🥈On an individual level 🥈On a governmental scale @WRITING_T
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🥇Stress the importance of something when it comes to something= consider something to be important.
📊 Educationalists often stress the importance of effective time management and critical-thinking skills when it comes to academic excellence.
📊 Parents usually stress the importance of university qualifications when it comes to building a successful career.
📊 Although I always stress the significance of hard work and determination when it comes to achieving a high score in IELTS, most of my students keep slacking off🥲😢!
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🥇Stress the importance of something when it comes to something= consider something to be important.
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🔥C3 VOCABULARY😁🔥 🥇Stress the importance of something when it comes to something= consider something to be important. 📊 Educationalists often stress the importance of effective time management and critical-thinking skills when it comes to academic excellence.…
🔥C4 VOCABULARY😁🔥
📊 Downplay the significance of something in terms of something = underestimate the value or role of something.
🥇Companies should not downplay the significance of positive colleague relationships in terms of cultivating a healthy work environment.
🥈IELTS candidates often downplay the role of Task 1 in terms of achieving a high overall score in Writing.
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🥇Companies should not downplay the significance of positive colleague relationships in terms of cultivating a healthy work environment.
🥈IELTS candidates often downplay the role of Task 1 in terms of achieving a high overall score in Writing.
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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
📊TASK 1: 8 8 7 7
📊TASK 2: 9 9 8 9
📝Task 1 was a process, and Task 2 turned out to be an opinion essay!
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🔥A band 8.5 essay in 30 minutes 🥇Public transportation versus private vehicles @WRITING_T
In today's major cities, the escalating levels of traffic gridlock and air contamination are inextricably intertwined with our increased dependency on private vehicles. Mitigating this issue requires a transition from private cars to efficient public transport networks, a viewpoint to which I totally subscribe.
Opponents of private car usage cite various reasons to support their stance. They point out the proliferation of personal vehicles that have led to severe traffic congestion in urban centers, particularly during rush hours. Due to massive traffic jams, not only do commuters waste time, but the whole economy also suffers from increased fuel consumption and compromised productivity. From an environmental perspective, the negative impact of private transportation is even more pronounced. The excessive release of carbon emissions from car engines has resulted in a surge in harmful pollutants, thereby exacerbating air pollution and intensifying the greenhouse effect. This, in turn, can give impetus to an upsurge in chronic health conditions, such as respiratory and cardiovascular ailments.
Given the adverse effects of personal vehicle use, it is crucial to encourage individuals to use public transit more frequently. As a single public transport vehicle can carry a larger number of passengers compared to individual cars, the promotion of public transportation can ameliorate traffic snarls. A by-product of this reduced congestion is a reduction in air pollution and greenhouse gas emissions, thus fostering a cleaner and healthier environment. Moreover, public transportation is more cost-effective in comparison with personal cars, as it eliminates the expenses associated with maintenance costs, fuel prices, parking fees, and insurance. A good case in point is my country of Uzbekistan, where financially savvy individuals take public transport rather than drive their own cars to reduce their transportation expenditure.
In conclusion, the rise in private car numbers in urban areas has caused a host of issues, ranging from traffic congestion to environmental degradation. To address this problem, taking measures to minimize private car usage and champion public transport as the main mode of travel is essential. Only through efficient and popular public transport systems can strides be made in improving the quality of life for city dwellers and promoting environmental sustainability.
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🥇Financial stability
🥈Economic hardships
🥉A strong work ethic
🏅Put in the necessary effort
🎖Push your limits
🏅In the face of adversity
🏅Overcome obstacles
🎖Navigate life’s challenges
🏅Maintain a positive outlook
🎖Bounce back from failures
🏅Garner recognition
🎖Pivot in response to unforeseen circumstances
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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
In recent times, it has become increasingly popular for individuals to opt for self-employment as opposed to working for established corporations, particularly in developed countries. This shift can be attributed to the confluence of practical and emotional factors, yet it is important to recognize the potential challenges that self-employment presents.
The rise in self-employment is driven by a combination of practical and emotional considerations. From a practical perspective, the latest advancements in technology and globalization have intensified competition in the job market, prompting both small and large businesses to raise their hiring standards and impose demanding work conditions on employees. In response to long working hours and heavy workloads across various sectors, individuals now prefer to set up their private companies so as to enjoy flexible working schedules, greater autonomy, and a healthy work-life balance. Emotionally, self-employed individuals usually pursue positive feelings of independence, freedom, and flexibility, all of which can come from working for oneself. A good case in point is my country of Uzbekistan, where self-employment is often associated with heightened career satisfaction and enhanced mental well-being.
Despite the multifaceted benefits of self-employment, difficulties exist. On an individual level, self-employed workers are subject to frequent income fluctuations, especially during the early stages of their entrepreneurial journey. The absence of a stable salary makes it increasingly challenging to meet their financial obligations, such as covering operational expenses and supporting their families. On top of this financial instability, individuals who work for themselves bear the burden of making critical decisions, solving complex problems, and competing against larger corporations on their own, which can give impetus to stress and mental health struggles. On a broader societal scale, self-employment emphasizes individualism and personal gain over cocollective responsibility, in some cases, eroding essential social values like empathy and teamwork and compromising social cohesion and camaraderie.
In conclusion, while the appeal of self-employment lies in improved working conditions and job fulfillment, it is essential to acknowledge its potential repercussions on individuals and society as a whole. Only through careful planning and strategic thinking can individuals navigate the complexities of being self-employed.
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Ilohim 2024 yil hayotimdagi eng qiyin, eng og’ir, eng azobli yil bo’lsin. Qiyinchiliklar, muammolar shaxsiyatimni yaxshilashga, xarakterimni qurishga yordam bersin. Men qiynalay, tashvishga tushay-ki ota-onam va yaqinlarim bahtli, hotirjam hayotda yashasin.…
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