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Public celebrations such as national days and festivals are held in most countries. There are often quite expensive and some people say that government should spend money on more useful things.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Public celebrations like national days or festivals are took take place in many countries, this condition requires lots of money. Therefore, according to the some group of people's opinions, a lot of money should be spent on far more useful things by the authorities. This approach seems sensible to me as such celebrations bring much expenditure and the government should focus on the public facilities like education and libraries.

Admittedly, A dramatic growth was the case in the figure for public celebrations over the last years. More and more countries tend to give lots of money to such celebrations. Although the national days, as well as festivals can contribute for development of the countries, it is not good approach to reach progress, I think. If an excessive amount of money is spent on such celebrations, the consequences of this situation may turn out to shrink the budget of the countries. According to the research was carried out by the scientists at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology ( MIT) in 2015, 26 percent income of the Egypt was spent to take place on public celebrations.

Instead of spending money on public celebrations, governments should give more attention to constructing new public facilities like libraries which may turn out to be beneficial for young people who can expand their horizond by reading a books, for example. Besides this, at this point , it is good idea to spend money on building educational facilities such as schools and colleges as well.

To conclude, public celebrations lead to be high outgoings. Moreover, public facilities should be built by the government as much as possible. This abovegiven facts made me agree with this statement.
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At present you run an education center in your town and some students are asking about your center's working process, courses you offer and payment for each individual type of course.
You should give information related to your education centre.

Dear Madam/Sir
I am blissfully happy to write about my education centre which is well-known throughout the Uzbekistan. And now I am going to dedicate all of my time to introduce the working processes of it.

My education centre is located in the heart of the city called Everest which consists of lots of professional teachers who are very young but intelligence enough. There are all kind of subjects but especially you can enhance your English skill such as listening, reading, writing and speaking.
It possesses own available course for students and if you just follow them, you will reach all of your goals. By the way, although it is considered well-known, the cost is absolutely cheaper than other education centres. But there are not individual courses.

I feel free to provide thorough data about my education centre. If you want to know any more details, please write to me again.
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Too much money is spent on looking after and repairing old buildings. Some people think that these buildings should be knocked down and modern buildings should be built instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

A number of money are given to reconstruct and look after the old buildings. This kind of buildings ought to be demolished and instead of them, cutting edge new premises should be constructed. Although it requires a lot of time and recourses, this approach seems sensible to me. As old buildings are a risk to people's lifestyle and new ones are important for us.

Truth be told, the aspects of old buildings may turn out to be dangerous for individuals. However, more and more countries opt for re-building old buildings that should be demolished, I think. As such buildings were built for a long time ago and no one knew how it constructed and weather safety rules are counted or not. All too often, as a result of natural disasters such as earthquakes and hurricanes, many such buildings are being knocked down and this conditions are leading to the death of people. According to the research was carried out by scientists of the UAE, owing to these old buildings and disases almost 675000 people died last year.

Abovementioned facts urges us to demolish the old premises and new ones should be constructed instead of them, I think. As the index for the quality of the constructors who can build new premises are increasing substantially nowadays and they already know safety rules thoroughly. Therefore, process of construction is much quicker and it is considered absolutely safe for people. Not only safe but also up-to-date buildings are full of facilities. Besides this they are considered towering skyscraper premises as well.

To conclude, old buildings may bring unpleasant consequences for people's lifestyle. Moreover, it is important to construct new ones instead of reconstructing them, in my view. These two facts have persuaded me to agree with this.

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The line graph illustrates that the indication for waste manufactured by thee undefined companies from 2000 till 2015. The data is provided in tonnes.

Overall, throughtout the entire span, company C produced much more in contrast to the beginning of the period while other two companies such as Company A and B lost their frequency of production.

A dramatic ascend was the case in the index for Company C from 2000 till 2015 ( the former-well above 3 and the latter approximately 9 ).

Reversely, the figure of company B reached a summit at about 9 in 2005. This was followed by a substantial reduction towards sharp 3. In a similar manner , A sharp decrease was the case in the index for Company A throughout the mentioned period, despite becoming dominant when period commenced.
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Some people say that parents should places restriction on the hours their children spend watching TV and playing computer games, and encourage them to spent this time reading books instead.
Do you agree or disagree ?

According to the some groups of people's opinions, playing computer games, as well as watching TV are banned for children by the parents. Instead of them, parents should urge their children to spend their quality time on reading books. This approach seems sensible to me as playing such games, together with watching TV are time-consuming processes and Reading books far more effective to their mind and future lifestyle.

Admittedly, nowadays more and more young generations tend to playing computer games which may lead to
fritter away children's valuable time. By these games, attention to their study may be lost and this situation might turn out to be negative effect their knowledge, for instance. Besides this, watching TV may lead to behaviour change as well. This is because, children who want to be as an actor watch different kind of films from it, for example. Therefore such games and TV should be restricted by the parents. According to the recent poll was carried out by the scientists at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT) in 2018, much more than 1 mln parents belived that these conditions should be banned.

I believe that instead of the watching TV, as well as playing computer games, it is good approach to read the books which can contribute to expand children's horizon. Moreover, by reading the books, children posses lots of knowledge and it is a good way to reach personal development as well. If children get rid of the time-consuming processes like computer games, they will become a successful person in the future. Otherwise, they might shatter all of their dreams and goals if they continue playing or watching.

To conclude, playing and watching ( computer games and TV, respectively ) are non-necessary processes for juveniles. Moreover, children should read the books as much as possible. These thee mentioned facts made me agree with this notion.

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