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Aug 31 CDI Exam.pdf
#grouping #DataSeparation #TaskOne

There’s no single correct approach, but you should always aim for the easiest and most logical one.

If you find yourself needing to explain your grouping to someone, it’s probably not the optimal way.

For this particular table, I’d recommend writing three detailed paragraphs, each focusing on one column: female-dominant, first language not English, and born outside Australia. This approach ensures that the examiner can easily follow the logic of your grouping.
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#TaskTwo #AgreeDisagree

Here is a challenging Task 2 question:

Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earnings between the richest and the poorest members.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?


What do you think makes this question relatively harder for many candidates myself included?
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Forwarded from BM | IELTS 9.0
Here’s what the former writing examiner commented regarding the updated public band descriptors: as anticipated, they’ve eased the minimum requirements, particularly for bands 8.0 and 9.0.

I had a look at the grading criteria for band nine and it's definitely softer than what it was. I've circled in blue some of the new wording that they have introduced. It's probably partly due to a realisation that some people actually need band nine and in the past... It was almost this kind of sacred cow that you don't give band nine unless you thought it was good enough to be a native writer. I haven't had a chance to go through all of it though.
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Here is one of the recent Task 1 diagrams.

How would you write the introduction and the overview?
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T2_ How to deal with Two-Part-Question Essays.pdf
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I’m excited to share this PDF I’ve prepared as part of our ongoing Writing Marathon!

This week, we’re diving into two-part question essays for Task 2. In this comprehensive guide, I’ve chosen a Task 2 question that holds special meaning for me. It’s the same question I received in 2017, the year I scored my first 8.0 in Writing (and the model answer included here is an improved version of the essay I wrote back then).

Personally, I’ve always found two-part question essays easier to manage because the structure feels more straightforward when it comes to paragraphing.
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Task 1 Process

Can you spot some useful language to describe the process of raising chicken for consumption?
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What if I were to offer a new Writing Essay Correction Service to a limited number of people?
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#EssayCorrection

We provide both Task 1 and Task 2 questions, allowing you to practice with authentic IELTS prompts. πŸ“

Each submission is carefully reviewed by two experts: BM and a former IELTS Writing Examiner. You’ll receive a comprehensive assessment and personalized feedback to help you improve your writing and reach your desired band score!

⚠️ Important:

Only 5 spots are available each day, so make sure to secure yours early!

A payment is required for each submission.
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Alright, I'm drawing up the instructions and the application form. Who is interested?
Stay tuned!
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Sep 1, 2024 with Feedback.pdf
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This is the type of feedback and assessment you can expect.
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By the way, the first few days have already been filled. Very unexpected. By this rate, pretty soon you won't even be able to book a slot in the next week or so.
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Imagine getting this for your Task 1 Writing πŸ€”πŸ€£
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Hello everyone!

Maybe we should organize another WRITING CHALLENGE?!

Let me know if you are interested.
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Forwarded from BM | IELTS 9.0
Good morning, everyone,

If you’ve taken the real IELTS test, please share your results by voting in the poll. Your input will help me tailor the upcoming Writing Marathon to better meet your needs!
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BM | IELTS 9.0
Good morning, everyone,

If you’ve taken the real IELTS test, please share your results by voting in the poll. Your input will help me tailor the upcoming Writing Marathon to better meet your needs!
It should be your actual writing scores, not overall scores, and definitely not scores from your mock test.
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πŸ‘‹ Hello everyone!

It's been over 500 days since last time we posted on this channel!

Ko'pchilik IELTS imtixonini topshirib, allaqachon focus ni boshqa joyga qaratgan bo'lsa kerak. Kelinglar bitta poll qivoramiz.

Kimlarga haliyam IELTS Writing bo'yicha maslaxat olib turish qiziq?
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