The new schedule of Essay Course will be announced by evening today.

PS.
A) I want to take a webinar for those who are writing mains this year to discuss how one should plan the next phase of preparation. I believe many serious aspirants commit avoidable mistakes and thus are caught in the Mains chakravyuh again and again.

To mera man hai ki kam se kam ham un mistakes ko avoid karen. This will be open to everyone writing mains (whether you want to /have joined my prog or not.

Please let me know, Kab kia jae webinar?

B) will take a similar webinar for those who didn't make it after few days.

Courage

The ability to do something with strength despite fear, hostility, pain etc.

Example: Army team conducting surgical strike, Fireman entering the building on fire while everyone else come out


Humility
Humility is the quality of being humble

Examples:
1. On his exile for 14years, Lord Rama had half eaten berries by Shabari.

2. In a humble gesture towards a physically challenged man who was unable to sit on a chair, Osmanabad district collector Kaustubh Diwegaonkar sat along with him on the floor in his chamber to listen to his grievances

3. Humble Personalities like Rahul Dravid, Mother Teresa, APJ Abdul Kalam

🔥Are you still using PESTEL template in the philosophical essays?

🔥Are you still not able to maintain flow in your essay?

🔥Are you still "proving" philosophical essay in multiple dimensions? 

🫵Don't allow Essay to become your Achilles' heel! 


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Course Deliverables

🔸 5 Workshops on Essay Writing Skills ( How to structure philosophical essays, how to maintain continuity, what are the structural components of Introduction and Conclusion)

🔸 Learning by Doing Approach - Impromptu Brainstorming, Ad Hoc Writing of the differential Essay parts, Working on specific writing lacunas in class among others 

🔸  Content Enrichment Notes with Anecdotes, Poems, Quotes, Facts, Case studies etc

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Ethics Marks Maximizer

Fortitude: courage in pain or adversity

Example: Tukaram Omble, during 26/11 terror attack in Mumbai, stood in front of Ajmal Kasab and held on to the barrel of Kasab’s rifle, thus preventing the bullets from hitting anyone else but him. The rest of the team managed to overpower and apprehend Kasab. Omble took over 40 bullets from an Ak-47 at point blank range and accepted martyrdom


Lessons from the Lives of leaders

Example:

Kalam took great care of his colleagues.

A co-worker had promised his kids that he would take them to the science museum after returning from work, and obtained the prior permission of Mr. Kalam to leave early. The colleague was so engrossed in his work that it was well into the evening when he realised that he had made a promise to his kids.

On rushing back home, he came to know from his wife that Mr. Kalam had come earlier and taken his kids to the museum.

Dear students,

Peeyush Sir, MK Yadav sir and India Bhai will be taking a webinar for those who are writing mains this year.

Date: Today, 15th June, 2023
Time : 9 PM

अक्सर अंतिम परिणाम की चकाचोंध में, अथक श्रम, तमाम सुविधाओं का त्याग कर अभ्यर्थी द्वारा, परिणाम की अनिश्चिता और समाज के तानों के पाटों के बीच लिखी गयी ये कहानियां अनसुनी रह जाती हैं

दोस्तों, तुम्हारी लगन और पुरुषार्थ को सलाम

दिनकर कहते हैं

खम ठोक ठेलता है जब नर, पर्वत के जाते पाँव उखड़,
मानव जब ज़ोर लगाता है, पत्थर पानी बन जाता है

Thank you so much dosto for inspiring me with your grit and determination. You are true champions. Cheers!

Ethical Lessons from the life of administrators is an important topic. However you must quote specific instances of the administrators which reflect ethical values instead of merely dumping various values.

This will also help in writing great anecdotes in the philosophical essays.

Please watch the following video and also share among your friends. I hope you have subscribed the youtube channel. Lots of value addition content in coming month.

https://youtu.be/jq2k417J-pg

Please note the updated schedule of the core batch.

It contains

🔥 5 Essay Workshops and 5 Essay tests

🔥 24 MMP Sessions (all 4 GS Papers) to improve qualitative aspects of Answer writing before you test your self in test series

🔥INDIA BHAI CMP ( 8 sectional tests + 4 Full Length Test, all 12 tests of 3 hours) plus regular webinars by India Bhai

Register below 👇

https://theiashub.com/course/mains-core-batch-2023

Anecdote on perseverance, Will power and attitude

Attitude Determines Altitude

Once, a young school boy was caught in a fire accident in his school and was assumed that he would not live. His mother was told that he was sure to die, for the terrible fire had devastated the lower half of his body. Even if he were to survive, he would be a cripple throughout his life.

But the brave boy did not want to die nor did he want to be a cripple. ATTITUDE. His determination to walk was indomitable and his persistence finally paid off. He began to walk to school, then run to school, to run for the sheer joy of running. Later in college he made the track team.

In February 1934, in New York City’s famed Madison Square Garden, this young man who was not expected to survive, who would surely never walk, who could never hope to run – this determined young man, Dr. Glenn Cunningham, ran the world’s fastest mile. (ALTITUDE)

#You may also observe how the story is narrated. First the context is set then his journey is narrated beautifully with specifics (events, dates, place etc) and delineating his attitude explicitly. So whenever you write an anecdote in an Essay, try to write like this. A badly written anecdote will not fetch you marks. Even though the story is interesting yet it needs to be told in an interesting manner to generate interest.

#ESSAY Marks Maximizer

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Dear students,

At Delhi Cantt Railway station, I noticed the citizen charter of Indian Railway.

Please note following important points from this

1. Services offered are specifically identified with the time limit

2. Single Window Agency is identified and dedicated for the non compliance.

3. Grievance Redressal Mechanism with time limits for the disposal of the complainants.

4. Expected duties from the citizens

These are important pillors for any citizen charter and can be used as case study in GS Paper_2, Ethics Paper and Public administration.

However can you identify any lacuna in this charter? Please do comment.


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Messages like these give meaning to what I do.

Koshish karunga aur behtar kar sakun aapke lie kuch. Thank you so much for the love and continued support. Means a lot to me. Grateful 🙏😊

PS. To those appearing in mains 2023, please come to theiashub at 2.30 PM today (19.06.23)and write a mini test on Section A of Ethics for one hour. Discussion will follow at 3.30 PM. Today's session is open to all who are giving mains this year. Hope to help you have right perspective towards Section A.

Following questions carries 10 Marks each.

1) It is believed that adherence to ethics in human actions would ensure in smooth functioning of an organization/system If so, what does ethics seek to promote in human life? How do ethical values assist in the resolution of conflicts faced by him in his day-to-day functioning? (2022) (10 marks)

2) “Ethics is knowing the difference between what you have the right to do and what is right to do” (2022) (10 marks)

3) The current internet expansion has instilled a different set of cultural values which are in conflict with traditional values. Discuss. (2020) (10 marks)

4) “A man is usually the average of five people closest to him”. Examine the role of family and friends in the value inculcation of an individual. (10 marks)

5) “Weakness of attitude becomes weakness of character”. Explain the statement with suitable. (10 marks)

6) What do you mean by Ethical Management? How is it different from Management of Ethics? (10 Marks)

7) Media ethics seems to be declining in present times. Highlight the ethical issues that plague Indian journalism. (10 marks)

8) What do you understand by the following terms in the context of public service? (2013)
a) Integrity
b) Perseverance
c) Spirit of service
d) Courage of conviction

Will post the discussion video soon

Have got tremendous feedback from the students who attended this session in offline mode today. thank you dear students. Aur mehnat karunga !

Please watch the discussion of these questions to understand how you can write better answers in Section A of the Ethics Paper.Do not neglect the Section A of the ethics paper at any cost. Because of the high variability of the quality of the answers, you can beat your competition here.

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Anecdote on positive attitude

Thomas Edison and his attitude towards Failures

On 10th December 1914, there was a massive explosion in West Orange, New Jersey, USA. The legendary inventor who owned 10 buildings in a factory was engulfed by flames. Six to eight fire departments rushed to the scene but, could not curb the chemical inferno. After having tried all that he could, Edison calmly stood there watching the fire destroy, his entire life’s hard work.

His 24 year old son Charles came over and stood next to him. In a child like voice, Edison said to his son “Charlie, go and get your mother and friends. They will never be able to see a spectacular fire like this in their entire life. Astonished and shocked by his father’s response, Charles asked Edison, Our entire factory is being burnt down to ashes dad.” Thomas Edison replied with complete composure “Yes, Our factory is being burnt down to ashes, all the mistakes we have made so far in the factory also are burnt down to ashes too. We will start all over again, tomorrow.”
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I have not summarized it as it will be easier for you to remember it like a story..

In exam, you may write elaborately if writing an essay anecdote or just use it briefly as a supporting example in ethics paper

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