In our online writing intensive course yesterday, we discussed the use of fake statistics in IELTS essays. Here’s the key takeaway: any statistics you include—whether real or fake—tends to sound fake to the examiner.

For instance:
"According to statistics, 58% of people who consume fast food regularly become obese within three years."

While the examiners won’t fact-check your numbers, common sense tells them it’s unlikely that students can recall precise statistics under exam pressure. As a result, such claims often appear fabricated, which can your essay less credible.

So, what’s the solution?
Avoid using specific numbers altogether. Instead, focus on presenting the general idea. For example:
"Many studies have linked regular fast food consumption to a range of health issues, such as obesity."

This approach is just as effective and sounds much more natural and believable.
Remember, your goal is to present a well-argued essay, not to impress with precise data.

Can you rephrase this fake sounding statistics to make it more natural:

"According to recent research, 72% of people who drink sugary beverages daily develop diabetes within five years."


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People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times.

Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that people today have a higher quality of life than in the past. While modern life has its problems, people are living much better life than in previous times.

One main threat we face today is environmental disasters. Due to factors such as rapid industrialization, deforestation, and increased production, air pollution and global warming have become major problems. These human-induced issues have resulted in the loss of biodiversity and emergence of several health issues, affecting millions of people around the world. In the past, however, people tended to enjoy richer biodiversity and cleaner environment.

Despite these problems, life today is much better for the majority. Firstly, recent years have seen major advancements in medicine. Some of the recent breakthroughs in this field include antibiotics, vaccines, and technologies that allow for effective diagnosis. Thanks to these developments, many deadly diseases, such as smallpox, measles, and polio have been eliminated, which resulted in healthier life and longer life expectancy in many parts of the world.

A better work-life balance is another factor that contributes to happier life. Technological revolution now means that people are less physically involved in their jobs and house-chores as well as having more opportunities for entertainment. Reduced physical workload, easy access to leisure activities, and increased connectivity have significantly improved the quality of life for many people.

In conclusion, life today is not without its drawbacks. However, the problems are insignificant compared to the comforts of modern life thanks to developments in medicine and technology.

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People these days store information and knowledge on the internet not in books.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?


Digital storage of information and knowledge is becoming common due to the internet. While there are certain drawbacks, they are outweighed by the benefits.

One downside of storing information online is the spread of misinformation. When information is stored in a particular website, it is easy to edit it while downloading or copying. Wikipedia can be a good case in point, where users can alter information without any restrictions. Because of this, it is considered an unreliable source of information. The reliance on technology is another disadvantage. Using and storing information becomes impossible unless(if not) there is stable internet connection, not to mention viruses and other malware. Readers do not usually face such problems with physical books.

Despite these disadvantages, the advantages are far greater. One major benefit of digital storage is the accessibility of information. This means that people can use information at their own convenience regardless of their geographical location. For example, students preparing for exams can make use of materials unavailable in their local libraries. The fact that online libraries offer unlimited copies of books can be a further advantage. Physical libraries are inferior(=weak) in this respect as they usually have limited number of materials. So, if a library runs out of a particular book, it can be impossible for other people to access it; however, with the internet, this is not the case.

In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages to keeping information and knowledge on the internet, they are not as significant as the advantages.

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Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world.
What are the causes of this problem?
What measures can be taken to solve this?

Food waste has become a growing problem in many countries, perpetuating food insecurity for millions of people. While this can be attributed to strict food aesthetic standards and consumer behavior, the problem can be addressed by redistributing food surplus and taking advantage of mobile apps.

One major factor contributing to food waste is the high standards of perfection for the appearance of food. These standards often prioritize visual appeal, focusing on factors such as size, shape, color, and texture, which can result in perfectly edible food being thrown away simply because it does not meet the ideal appearance criteria. Korzinka, one of the well-known supermarket chains in Uzbekistan, recently faced criticism from the government and the public due to its careless attitude toward handling food. Unfortunately, despite such backlash, food waste remains a persistent problem. However, the public is not without fault either. Residential food waste is actually the most significant contributor to what is sent to landfills. This usually happens when people over-purchase or cook large portions that are not consumed, which often results from poor planning or lack of awareness.

However complex the problem might be, there are a number of ways by which it can be addressed. One effective measure would be to establish food redistribution programs. Such programs should collaborate with supermarkets and communities, particularly in areas where food insecurity is a widespread challenge, to ensure that perfectly edible yet aesthetically flawed food is not wasted. This action can have a two-fold impact by reducing the environmental impact of food waste while also alleviating food insecurity for many people.

Another approach, one that would complement the first, is to use food waste mobile apps. Such apps help users track what food items they have at home, preventing unnecessary purchases during shopping. These apps also send reminders about expiration dates or alerts when certain foods are close to spoiling, which can encourage people to use them before they become inedible. One such mobile application is ‘NoWaste’ which received overwhelmingly positive reviews among users.

In conclusion, the main reasons behind food waste are strict aesthetic standards for food and consumer behavior, such as over-purchasing and poor planning. However, this issue can be effectively tackled through measures like food redistribution programs and the use of innovative mobile apps.

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