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๐Ÿ“น7 Steps to help you reach a Band 7: IELTS Writing Task 2

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HOW TO WRITE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES ESSAYS

1โƒฃFIRST LESSON

๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐ŸซThe problem is that there are 3 different types of advantages and disadvantages essay and they each require a different approach. If you answer them in a different way then you risk losing lots of easy marks.

Question 1

โ—ผ๏ธIn some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

โ˜‘๏ธDiscuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

โ˜‘๏ธQuestion 1 simply asks us to discuss the advantages and disadvantages. It does not ask for our opinion or say which side is better or worse, so we should not include this information in our answer.

This requires a simple structure in which the student will look at the advantages in one paragraph and the disadvantages in the other.

Introduction

Sentence 1- Paraphrase question
Sentence 2- Outline sentence
Supporting Paragraph 1

Main Body 1 (Advantage 1)
Sentence 3- Topic sentence (advantage)
Sentence 4- Explain how this is an advantage
Sentence 5- Example

Main Body 2 (disadvantage)
Sentence 6- Topic sentence (Disadvantage 1)
Sentence 7- Explain how this is a disadvantage
Sentence 8- Example

Conclusion
Sentence 9- Summary of main points


Question 1 Example:

Before embarking on college many young people are advised that a year working or travelling may be a good option. This essay will suggest that saving money is the biggest advantage of this and a reduced motivation to study is the primary disadvantage.

Third level education is very expensive and lots of students decide to work for 12 months and save up money before they begin their studies. This allows them to pay for their living costs, tuition fees and accommodation and focus on their studies, rather than struggle financially or have to get a part time job on top of their academic work. The Times recently reported that the average student at a UK university requires over $12,000 per annum just to survive and many drop out because they cannot afford to stay.

Despite these advantages, many students often get used to working or travelling and donโ€™t want to return to a life of study after a year off. This short term view can cause some to bypass university altogether and go straight into a job that is beneath their capabilities or may not offer the same prospects their future career might have done. For instance, a recent survey by the British Government found that 26% of students who take a gap-year never enter tertiary education.

In conclusion, taking a break from studies can be advantageous if it allows people to gather up savings, however, they should also be careful that it does not lead to disillusionment with education altogether.

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1) Fikr insholari ( Opinion essays )
2) Muhokama insholari ( Discussion essays )
3) Muammolarni hal qilish boสปyicha insholar(Problem Solution Essays )
4) Afzalliklar va kamchiliklar Insholar ( advantages & Disadvantages essays)
5) Ikki savolli insholar ( Double Questions Essays )



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โœ”๏ธBirinchidan, 2-topshiriq insholarida foydalanishni tavsiya etuvchi asosiy 4 qismli tuzilma:


1.Kirish ( Introduction)
2) Asosiy qism 1-band ( Main body 1)
3) Asosiy qism 2-band ( Main body 2)
4) Xulosaโ€Œโ€Œ ( Conclusion)


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SYNONYMS FOR PARAPHRASING ( Part 1)

๐Ÿ’  Enough: to be sufficient, to be adequate

๐Ÿ’  Not enough: to be insufficient, to be inadequate, a shortage ofโ€ฆ, a lack ofโ€ฆ.

๐Ÿ’  Many: numerous, various, a variety of, large number of, a range of, an increasing number/ amount, countless

๐Ÿ’  Things: objects, matters, issues, sectors, items, concern

๐Ÿ’  Big: tremendous, significant, considerable, substantial, immense, vast, profound

๐Ÿ’  Important: principal, crucial, major, essential, critical, vital

๐Ÿ’  Get: obtain, receive, acquire, gain

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๐Ÿ“• 9 band score IELTS essays Task 2

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โœ… Subject + Verb/(to be) + too + adjective/adverb + (for someone) + to do something: ๐Ÿ‘‰ more than is acceptable or possible for someone to do something.
Example ๐Ÿ”ฅ The IELTS
Writing Task 2 topic is too easy for me to get a band 7 score.
She plays too well for me to beat her.
โœ… Subject 1 + Verb/(to be) + so + adjective/adverb + that + Subject 2 + Verb: ๐Ÿ‘‰more than is acceptable or possible for someone, and they can not afford it, or they have to
do something else to get it.
Example ๐Ÿ”ฅ This house is so expensive that I have to sell my car to buy it.
The math test is so difficult that I can not do anything.
โœ… It + (to be) + such + (a/an) +Noun(s) + that + Subject + Verb: ๐Ÿ‘‰more than is acceptable or possible for someone, and they can not afford it, or they have to 
do something else to get it.
Example ๐Ÿ”ฅ It is such an interesting show that I can not shut it down.
It is such a heavy box that I can not lift it up.
โœ… Subject + Verb + adjective/adverb + enough + (for someone) + to do something: ๐Ÿ‘‰have the degree that is necessary or wanted.
Example ๐Ÿ”ฅ He is tall enough to apply for this job.
She studies hard enough to pass the exam.
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โœ… It + to be + time + Subject + Verb past tense ( It + to be + time + for someone + to do something ) ๐Ÿ‘‰ Time when you have to do something
Example ๐Ÿ”ฅ
It is time you went to bed.
Itโ€™s time for me to leave.
โœ… It + takes/took+ someone + amount of time + to do something ๐Ÿ‘‰ spend how much time to do something
Example ๐Ÿ”ฅ
It takes me two hours to finish my report.
It took my mother 20 minutes to do lunch for my family

Can you all make a sentence for these grammar structures in the comment below ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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Vocabulary phrases for connecting two ideas

โœ… Moreover
โœ… Furthermore
โœ… Additionally
โœ… In addition to
โœ… Furthermore,
โœ… Not only..., but also...
โœ… Likewise
โœ… Similarly
โœ… On the other hand
โœ… However
โœ… Nevertheless
โœ… Nonetheless
โœ… In contrast to
โœ… Conversely
โœ… In spite of
โœ… Despite this
โœ… Although
โœ… Whereas
โœ… While
โœ… Unlike
โœ… Furthermore, it is worth noting that
โœ… In the same vein
โœ… Equally important
โœ… Consequently
โœ… Correspondingly

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๐Ÿ” Discuss both views

โœ… Q: Some feel executives in large companies should receive high salaries while others think they are paid too much compared to ordinary workers.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

๐Ÿ’กAnswer:

Many believe that high-ranking executive positions deserve their exorbitant salaries, while others feel they earn disproportionately compared to normal workers. In my opinion, outsized compensation is unreasonable in a vacuum but makes sense given market dictates.

Detractors often argue the ratios defy justification. Recent publications have quoted figures showing executive positions, and CEOs in particular, makes hundreds of times what the average worker does. This includes their various remuneration packages and bonuses. It is hard to claim this money is deserved. Many CEOs work longer hours and graduated from top schools but their tangible impact can be marginal relative to the key driving forces behind product development and the many hard-working employees required for a business to thrive. Even the most ardent supporters of these practices would not claim their output is hundreds of times higher than a normal employee.

Nonetheless, this practice follows basic principles of supply and demand. The simple fact is that there is a nearly endless supply of average individuals to staff entry-level positions but capable executives are rarer. These high-ranking jobs require an extraordinary commitment in terms of hours that most are unwilling to invest and exceptional character qualities ranging from leadership skills to raw intelligence. Since the top positions in a company are hard to fill and the company has the finances to pay premium wages, it is logical that executive salaries outrage many workers and their bonuses that appear unjust. In fact, these payments have little relationship with justice and more to do with the economic realities of capitalism.

In conclusion, though their salaries seem outlandish, executives are more difficult to replace and deserve higher pay. This is an uncomfortable, but crucial, truth for the average person to accept.

โœ๏ธ Total words: 286

๐ŸŽ‰Band: 7.5+

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๐Ÿ” Discuss both views

โœ… Q: Some feel executives in large companies should receive high salaries while others think they are paid too much compared to ordinary workers.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

๐Ÿ’กAnswer:

Many believe that high-ranking executive positions deserve their exorbitant salaries, while others feel they earn disproportionately compared to normal workers. In my opinion, outsized compensation is unreasonable in a vacuum but makes sense given market dictates.

Detractors often argue the ratios defy justification. Recent publications have quoted figures showing executive positions, and CEOs in particular, makes hundreds of times what the average worker does. This includes their various remuneration packages and bonuses. It is hard to claim this money is deserved. Many CEOs work longer hours and graduated from top schools but their tangible impact can be marginal relative to the key driving forces behind product development and the many hard-working employees required for a business to thrive. Even the most ardent supporters of these practices would not claim their output is hundreds of times higher than a normal employee.

Nonetheless, this practice follows basic principles of supply and demand. The simple fact is that there is a nearly endless supply of average individuals to staff entry-level positions but capable executives are rarer. These high-ranking jobs require an extraordinary commitment in terms of hours that most are unwilling to invest and exceptional character qualities ranging from leadership skills to raw intelligence. Since the top positions in a company are hard to fill and the company has the finances to pay premium wages, it is logical that executive salaries outrage many workers and their bonuses that appear unjust. In fact, these payments have little relationship with justice and more to do with the economic realities of capitalism.

In conclusion, though their salaries seem outlandish, executives are more difficult to replace and deserve higher pay. This is an uncomfortable, but crucial, truth for the average person to accept.

โœ๏ธ Total words: 286

๐ŸŽ‰Band: 7.5+

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โšก๏ธBand 7+ Vocabulary for IELTS

Informal           Formal

โŒ Ask for           โœ…Request (so'ramoq) 

โŒLook into        โœ… Investigate (taftish qilmoq)

โŒ Hungry           โœ… Famished (och qolgan)

โŒ But                  โœ… However (ammo)

โŒ Mad                โœ… Insane (aqldan ozgan)

โŒ Let                  โœ… Allow (ruxsat bermoq)

โŒ Worse            โœ… Inferior (yomonroq)

โŒ Keep              โœ… Preserve (saqlamoq)

โŒ Dim                โœ… Indistinct (noaniq)

โŒ Death             โœ… Demise (o'lim)

โŒ Job                 โœ… Occupation (kasb)

โŒ Dad                โœ… Father (ota)

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๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ USEFUL PHRASES ๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ

๐Ÿ˜ŽSynonyms for "I THINK"
โ€ข As far I am concerned...
โ€ข From my point of view...
โ€ข It seems to me that...
โ€ข In my opinion...
โ€ข I believe that...


๐Ÿ˜ŽSynonyms for "FOR EXAMPLE"
โ€ข As a case in point...
โ€ข Take for example....
โ€ข As an example...
โ€ข In other words...
โ€ข Such as...


๐Ÿ˜ŽSynonyms for "IN ADDITION"
โ€ข Not only... but also...
โ€ข On top of that...
โ€ข What is more...
โ€ข Moreover...
โ€ข Besides...


๐Ÿ˜ŽSynonyms for "BUT"
โ€ข On the one/other hand...
โ€ข On the contrary...
โ€ข Nevertheless....
โ€ข Nonetheless...
โ€ข Meanwhile...
โ€ข However...


๐Ÿ˜ŽSynonyms for "BECAUSE"
โ€ข Because of the fact that...
โ€ข Owing to the fact that...
โ€ข Due to the fact that...
โ€ข The reason is...
โ€ข Thanks to...
โ€ข Since...

๐Ÿ˜ŽSynonyms for "OF COURSE"
โ€ข Undoubtedly...
โ€ข Absolutely...
โ€ข Obviously...
โ€ข Definitely...
โ€ข Certainly...
โ€ข Surely
...

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๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ธ Make a favourable impression on smn
๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ฟ Biror kishida yaxshi taassurot qoldirmoq

โžซ The girl who I met yesterday made a favourable impression on me ๐Ÿ˜‰
โžซ Kecha tanishgan qizim menda yaxshi taassurot qoldirdi.

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