Nice ones, bro 👍 Both are clear, but we can polish them a bit for natural IELTS style. Here’s a quick review:

Sentence 1

The pie charts demonstrate how people in three different countries learned English in three ways in 2010 and 2015.

✅ Clear meaning
⚠️ Slight repetition of “three” and a bit awkward at the end

🔹 Improved version:

The pie charts illustrate how people in three different countries learned English in 2010 and 2015 using three methods.

Sentence 2

The pie charts compare three different ways people used to learn English in three countries in 2010 and 2015.

✅ Very good overall
⚠️ “used to learn” can sound slightly informal or unclear for Task 1

🔹 Improved version (more academic):

The pie charts compare three different methods of learning English in three countries in 2010 and 2015.

⭐️ Best choice for IELTS

👉 Sentence 2 (improved version) is the strongest: clear, concise, and academic.

If you want, send your overview paragraph next and I’ll check that too 💪

1) The pie chart illustrates the percentage of the future careers of the UK nursing graduates, while the table shows how many of them worked in different branches in health sector in 2009.

2) The pie chart shows the future plans of the UK nursing graduates, along with the table giving information about the proportion of them working in different areas in health sector.

1) The pie charts show the proportion of electricity produced from different fuel sources in France in 1990 and 2010.

2) The pie charts compare the percentages of electricity which was produced by five different fuel sources in France in 1990 and 2010.

1) The charts illustrate how many students participated in education and the highest education in Singapore over a decade, from 2000 to 2010.

2) The bar chart shows how many years students spent at school on average, along with the pie chart giving information about the proportion of their educational qualifications in Singapore over a decade, from 2000 to 2010.

1) The bar chart illustrates the consumption of salt by age in the USA in 2000.

2) The bar chart provides data on salt consumption in the USA in 2000.

Done✅

#speaking_part1
#animals_and_pets 🦣🐕

Where do you prefer to keep your pet, indoors or outdoors?

Well, I prefer to keep my pets outdoors because I live in a house with a large backyard. This way, they have enough space to play and walk around. Keeping them in an open space is quite comfortable for them.

What's your favourite animal?

There are a couple of animals that I like. Horses and lions are my favourites. Horses are friendly to people, and I enjoy riding them. When it comes to lions, they are considered the kings of animals and symbolise strength and courage.

Have you ever had a pet?

Yes, I have. I used to have a black dog. I liked him very much because he was very smart and well-behaved. When I was a child, we used to play together in our yard. Unfortunately, he passed away last year due to old age.

What's the most popular animal in your country?

There is a wide variety of animals in my country. Many people keep cats and dogs as pets in their homes. On top of that, people also raise sheep and cattle, especially in rural areas, to make a living.

Topic vocabulary for "Animals" 🦮🐆

🐕Favourite (n) - a person or thing that you like more than the others of the same type

- Dogs are my favourites.
- This cartoon has become a firm favourite with children.

🐕Symbolise = represent - ifodalamoq

- The colour white symbolises peace and purity.

🐕Well-behaved - behaving in a way that other people think is polite or correct - aqlli, odobli

- Don't worry — that dog is well-behaved.

🐕Pass away = die

- My dog passed away last year.

🐕Raise - boqmoq, yetishtirmoq

- Villagers usually raise cattle in my country.

🐕Make a living - tirikchilik qilmoq

- I make a living from teaching.


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#speaking_part2
#wild_animal 🐆

Describe a wild animal you want to know more about

Curious - tiger
Never seen in person
Seen many times in films
Find fascinating
Main features - largest members cat family
Bodies - strong, muscular
Powerful legs, sharp claws
Excellent hunters - run fast short distances
Night vision - help hunt in dark
Another reason - beauty, skin color
Orange fur black stripes - set apart
Visit zoos - seeing with own eyes - understand behavior, interesting qualities better
Threatened with extinction - habitat loss, illegal hunting, more interested

Describe a wild animal you want to know more about