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IELTS maydonidagi eng "go'shtli" darslar kanaliga xush kelibsiz.

O'zim haqimda:

— Michael, 16 yoshda IELTS 8.5
— 2,500+ o'quvchi IELTS olishiga yordam berganman
— 2 yildan beri ustozlik qilaman
— TESOL/TEFL Certified Teacher

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Q: Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree? A: The question of how governments must punish juvenile offenders remains contentious, and some suggest that they should receive a punishment…
This is my response to the Set 4 Task 2 question of Bekzod Mirahmedov's ongoing writing marathon. I wrote it under exam conditions in about 40 minutes, and I can tell it looks gooood 😁. I would say one of the best essays by me so far. Here's the plan, it took about 7 minutes:


Introduction
Position - zor, yaxshi, malades, but I disagree

Body 1
ts - there are reasons why "gangsta kids" should receive the same punishment
explain - a crime is a crime, regardless of age
explain a lil more - severity of the crime and the consequences must determine the punishment.
example - a murder

Body 2
ts - juvenile offenders should not be punished in the same manner
explain - many are unaware of their actions and have the potential for rehabilitation.
explain - kids don't comprehend the consequences and lack impulse control
example - no time for it

conclusion
summarise

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looks good to me
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You know I like to play around with filenames 😂)

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A friend of mine just got his score breakdown. His overall score was 7.0 with W 7.5

I had the same writing score and turns out we have the same breakdown as well.

Guess who that is

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I mean you are asking who that person was and at the same time putting his name right in there
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judayam attentive bolamanda. There's a name and I'm asking to guess it 🙂

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I've heard he had a high rating but witnessing it myself is something different!

Just for clarification, he has played more than 10k games, has a 1700 ELO rating, which is pretty close to International Master + he has been playing since 2010.

Truly impressive!

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Today, right now, a person very close to me is leaving to America for the sake of his future.

You see there are 4 children in my family - 3 of my sisters and me. And I neither had a younger nor an older brother before, although I've always wanted to.

But now I have three brothers and I'm infinitely glad about that. I owe most of my achievements to these guys, because I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be able to become who I am now without 'em.

Oq yol brother, as if o'lgani ketyotkanday dramatic qivordim, anyways... enjoy the life, I'm happy for you 🙂.

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I wish I could find everything as entertaining as sitting and just drinking water
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I, I don't care what anybody else thinks, lies (haha)
I do not need nobody to help me, lies
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The audience hasn't been growing for the past week, you gotta share the channel coz we gon' have something truly exciting this week.

Spread the link and invite your friends, I'm sure you gon' like the content to come 🙂

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4 months, IELTS and SAT. I wish I could have this level of optimism and confidence.

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