Here's a book with about 10-15 topics, each presenting different ideas and perspectives.

At the beginning, you'll find a paragraph that serves as an example, demonstrating how these ideas can be used. During my preparation, I found it really helpful to write several paragraphs where I connected these ideas together. This method helps in expressing your thoughts more effectively in your essay.

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My next attempt for writing 8.5 I'm making with BC, solely for that cool envelope 😁

Guess which certificates these are

The first, orange one - my own 8.5
The second, white one - my band 8.0
The third, red one - 6.5 of one of my students

I remember a couple of guys were asking me about opinion (agree/disagree) essays in my DMs.

Here's a full explanation of them and a verified band 9.0 paragraph structure.

Feel free to share it with your friends since it's written by a band 9.0 holder Chris Pell, and I personally use it for my task 2 opinion essays. (I got 8.0 for task 2)

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I'm still happy for her though

Congratulations to the first lady who got nine in Uzbekistan🥳🥳🥳🥳

Turns out she's been speaking English more than I've been breathing.

"san bir yil yashab kel 11.5 olasan"

Le maman

this sounds so good

Exactly 18 years older than me

Hech shu task 1 practice qilishni boshlolmayaрmanda....

"Фотогеничный" жиянладан битаси

Q: Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults.

Do you agree or disagree?


A: The question of how governments must punish juvenile offenders remains contentious, and some suggest that they should receive a punishment comparable to that of adults. Despite a few valid justifications for equal punishment, I disagree with the provided statement and believe that states need to develop different measures to deal with youngsters.

There are several reasons why young criminals must undergo similar punitive measures as adults when it comes to serious crimes. Firstly, any form of illegal action remains illegal, no matter how old the offender is. Therefore, some believe governments need to stick to the fundamental principle that a violation of the law still carries repercussions. They say the severity and consequences of the wrongdoing must be the determining factors for the final sentence. For instance, a murder is still a murder regardless of the age of the convict, and the fact that a human being has been killed must dictate the punishment.

However, I am of the opinion that underage criminals must not be punished in the same manner as their older counterparts. Apparently, many youngsters are unaware of their actions, fail to comprehend the consequences, or perhaps lack impulse control over their behavior. This may be the core reason behind the violation of the law. Additionally, due to the fact that their brains are still developing, they have the potential for rehabilitation. A child may have committed a single crime unintentionally, and, given the appropriate environment, these offenders may potentially be re-educated and reintegrated into society. Therefore, I believe governments must think of other measures for younger lawbreakers.

In conclusion, in spite of some justifications for equal measures, I believe offenders of young age should not receive the same treatment as those of older age. Considering the limited understanding and the rehabilitation potential, alternative approaches may be more effective. By addressing the cause rather than the effect, governments can secure a better society for future generations.

(319 words)

#task2 #bymichael #2amessays

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