The influence of youngsters on each other is one of mostly debated topics. When some advocate its importance - competitive atmosphere and strong social bonds, I think its drawbacks to the youth - sense of discouragement as well as bad habits are paramount.
Admittedly, young people may be at advantage of their peers. Firstly, individuals of the same age are prone to have sense of competing with each other in various realms of life. This natural feeling can have some positivities such as encouraging them to attain the same achievements and boosting willpower. This, in turn, can lead to a person’s boosted productivity and constant readiness to try themselves in variety of fields.
Furthermore, juveniles might achieve tight social bonds with others due to peer pressure. It is a common fact that individuals at this age are highly likely to isolate themselves so as to avoid meeting strangers. The primary reason behind it could be lack of time spent in crowded places. Having closer communication with their mates can be a trial for them to combat against unsociable character. As a result, the youth may be able to socialize easily.
In contrast, I opine that peer effect can bring about several detriments. The primary one is low motivation. Young people might get discouraged if their classmates score higher at a competition. Incapability to assess their weak points and find proper solutions are as a whole may decrease youngster’s self-esteem. It may arise barriers such as inability to take risks in further stages of life.
The second concerning point of peer influence might be forming bad habits. Youngsters may be in group of peers who have detrimental habits to society. Clear examples are bandits, bulliers and drug-consumers. Being influenced inexperienced juveniles are likely to adapt the same lifestyle as their surroundings. This, in turn, can cause to the increase of criminal cases in society.
In conclusion, peer pressure might have some benefits to enhance one’s assurance and social cycle, however, the disadvantages of it including negative encouragement and damaging behavior to society
are more significant,I think.
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Admittedly, young people may be at advantage of their peers. Firstly, individuals of the same age are prone to have sense of competing with each other in various realms of life. This natural feeling can have some positivities such as encouraging them to attain the same achievements and boosting willpower. This, in turn, can lead to a person’s boosted productivity and constant readiness to try themselves in variety of fields.
Furthermore, juveniles might achieve tight social bonds with others due to peer pressure. It is a common fact that individuals at this age are highly likely to isolate themselves so as to avoid meeting strangers. The primary reason behind it could be lack of time spent in crowded places. Having closer communication with their mates can be a trial for them to combat against unsociable character. As a result, the youth may be able to socialize easily.
In contrast, I opine that peer effect can bring about several detriments. The primary one is low motivation. Young people might get discouraged if their classmates score higher at a competition. Incapability to assess their weak points and find proper solutions are as a whole may decrease youngster’s self-esteem. It may arise barriers such as inability to take risks in further stages of life.
The second concerning point of peer influence might be forming bad habits. Youngsters may be in group of peers who have detrimental habits to society. Clear examples are bandits, bulliers and drug-consumers. Being influenced inexperienced juveniles are likely to adapt the same lifestyle as their surroundings. This, in turn, can cause to the increase of criminal cases in society.
In conclusion, peer pressure might have some benefits to enhance one’s assurance and social cycle, however, the disadvantages of it including negative encouragement and damaging behavior to society
are more significant,I think.
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The line graph gives data about bachelor students in four European countries: Sweden, Spain, Greece, and Austria, starting in 1995. All numbers are given in thousands.
Overall, it is noteworthy that in all given countries, people showed more interest in having an undergraduate degree, albeit in Sweden. In spite of being dominant initially, Sweden found having a high degree less appealing. In contrast, the Spanish people took dominance at the end of the period.
Starting with all the increased rates, the Spanish index for undergraduate students started the period at roughly 265. Having peaked at 350 in 2010, this figure witnessed a slight decrease of 50 until 2015. There was undergone a significant ascent in the number of Austrian students between 1995 (about 240) and 2015 (around 280). As for Greeks, the number of university students demonstrated remarkable growth from 1995 to 2015 (around 90 and 170 respectively).
Considering the single-dropped figure, Sweden had more than 350 students when the period began. This quantity went down dramatically to 200. However, during a 5-year period ending in 2010, the Sweden student index stayed unchanged at 300.
WORD COUNT: 192 words
TIME: around 25 minutes
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Overall, it is noteworthy that in all given countries, people showed more interest in having an undergraduate degree, albeit in Sweden. In spite of being dominant initially, Sweden found having a high degree less appealing. In contrast, the Spanish people took dominance at the end of the period.
Starting with all the increased rates, the Spanish index for undergraduate students started the period at roughly 265. Having peaked at 350 in 2010, this figure witnessed a slight decrease of 50 until 2015. There was undergone a significant ascent in the number of Austrian students between 1995 (about 240) and 2015 (around 280). As for Greeks, the number of university students demonstrated remarkable growth from 1995 to 2015 (around 90 and 170 respectively).
Considering the single-dropped figure, Sweden had more than 350 students when the period began. This quantity went down dramatically to 200. However, during a 5-year period ending in 2010, the Sweden student index stayed unchanged at 300.
WORD COUNT: 192 words
TIME: around 25 minutes
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The bar charts compare the minutes spent on four types of social media within 4 years until 2020. Overall, all given platforms showed a considerable growth in the number of minutes spent in moderation, with the exception of Facebook. Its users started to be less active, whereas Twitter became dominant in 2020, with Instagram and Snapchat peaking in two different years.
Looking first of all at rise trends, the index of minutes spent by Twitter users witnessed a significant growth during 4 years, reaching a huge 45 from initially accounting for just over 20 in 2016, making it the most popular social media. Whereas the figure for Instagram went up significantly, with it reaching a peak of about 40 in 2017, between 2016 and 2020 (around 25 and 40, respectively). As for Snapchat, it started the period with just 10, a figure that then rose considerably to 45 in 2019, but this was followed by a dramatic decrease to roughly 15 in the final year.
By contrast, Facebook lost its initial popularity during all those years. Its users spent around 25 minutes on average in 2016; however, this data dropped significantly to well under 5 at the end of the span.
WORD: 201
time: around 30 minutes
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Looking first of all at rise trends, the index of minutes spent by Twitter users witnessed a significant growth during 4 years, reaching a huge 45 from initially accounting for just over 20 in 2016, making it the most popular social media. Whereas the figure for Instagram went up significantly, with it reaching a peak of about 40 in 2017, between 2016 and 2020 (around 25 and 40, respectively). As for Snapchat, it started the period with just 10, a figure that then rose considerably to 45 in 2019, but this was followed by a dramatic decrease to roughly 15 in the final year.
By contrast, Facebook lost its initial popularity during all those years. Its users spent around 25 minutes on average in 2016; however, this data dropped significantly to well under 5 at the end of the span.
WORD: 201
time: around 30 minutes
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#task1 Pie chart gives data about the sales of 6 distinct types of services and products.
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Sample: The traffic congestion is a common problem across the world.
How can this be solved ?
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How can this be solved ?
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The pie charts compare how much household outcome did Japanese and Malaysian people have on five various purposes namely :Housing, Transport, Food , Health care and other goods and services in 2010.
Overall, Japanese people allocated the biggest share of money to other goods and services while the most common choice of Malaysians was housing. However, spending money on healthcare was the least common option in both countries.
Focusing on details, the Japanese spent considerable 29% of average outcome on other goods and services. By making up just under a fourth, food became the second biggest expense of Japanese people. There was a negligible 1% point discrepancy in the expenditure indications between housing-21% and transport when the larger figure belonged to the former. The lowest rate was witnessed in the figure of healthcare.
Regarding Malaysia, the expenditure proportions in the mix was considerably different. For example, that of housing was on top of the list with a whopping 34%. An inconsiderable 1 % separated the expenditure percentiles of Other goods and services (26%) from food when the latter had higher proportion. Malaysians directed 10% of average outcome to transport, while Healthcare took the last position.
195 words
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Overall, Japanese people allocated the biggest share of money to other goods and services while the most common choice of Malaysians was housing. However, spending money on healthcare was the least common option in both countries.
Focusing on details, the Japanese spent considerable 29% of average outcome on other goods and services. By making up just under a fourth, food became the second biggest expense of Japanese people. There was a negligible 1% point discrepancy in the expenditure indications between housing-21% and transport when the larger figure belonged to the former. The lowest rate was witnessed in the figure of healthcare.
Regarding Malaysia, the expenditure proportions in the mix was considerably different. For example, that of housing was on top of the list with a whopping 34%. An inconsiderable 1 % separated the expenditure percentiles of Other goods and services (26%) from food when the latter had higher proportion. Malaysians directed 10% of average outcome to transport, while Healthcare took the last position.
195 words
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Today family members eat fewer meals together. Is this a positive or negative trend?
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Let’s see one more essay: It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Cross-cultural support is an all-time companion of global community. There is a notion that helping all individuals on the planet is impossible, meaning governments responsibility to take care of their citizens more. Although foreign aid could serve to deal with certain issues on global scale, I agree more with the given notion.
Global support can be advocated due to its several benefits including ways to address several problems. For example,countries with economic strains may have challenges to minimize the post-effects of either natural and man-made disasters such as earthquakes, floods and terrorism. Afghanistan can be a case in point with its severe losses during a devastating earthquake in 2023. Considering the financial condition of the state, the UN and other developed countries offered their reliefsupports in the form of nutrients, medical aid and reconstruction of shelters.
Nevertheless, I, personally, think that governments should turn their attention more to their inhabitants, allocating more funds to domestic issues and national development in parallel. I want to start with the governmental duties on the process of combating local challenges such as inflation and housing. The combination of these issues can lead to national crisis, as the former is likely to increase the costs of products in the markets, the latter can result in the increased rate of homeless people. Considering it, listing the necessity of supporting other countries above the aforementioned issues in the fiscal policy cannot be a moral decision.
As for national progress, there is more state accountability to provide its consistency and safety . For instance, government officials can provide economic stability, healthcare and educational development within the country by using financial resources. Financial stability has always been of possibility by opening new employment facilities for citizens, while responsible officials can enhance the internal welfare with the help of modernizing the whole system, refurbishing hospitals as well as multiplying their numbers. Lastly, enhancing the quality of all educational institutions starting from kindergarten to tertiary education has also a lot to do with how state officials distribute public funds.
In conclusion, despite the fact that international aid programs are crucial to a certain extent, I am more inclined to say that governments may have more advantages concentrating more to local affairs.
372 words
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Global support can be advocated due to its several benefits including ways to address several problems. For example,countries with economic strains may have challenges to minimize the post-effects of either natural and man-made disasters such as earthquakes, floods and terrorism. Afghanistan can be a case in point with its severe losses during a devastating earthquake in 2023. Considering the financial condition of the state, the UN and other developed countries offered their reliefsupports in the form of nutrients, medical aid and reconstruction of shelters.
Nevertheless, I, personally, think that governments should turn their attention more to their inhabitants, allocating more funds to domestic issues and national development in parallel. I want to start with the governmental duties on the process of combating local challenges such as inflation and housing. The combination of these issues can lead to national crisis, as the former is likely to increase the costs of products in the markets, the latter can result in the increased rate of homeless people. Considering it, listing the necessity of supporting other countries above the aforementioned issues in the fiscal policy cannot be a moral decision.
As for national progress, there is more state accountability to provide its consistency and safety . For instance, government officials can provide economic stability, healthcare and educational development within the country by using financial resources. Financial stability has always been of possibility by opening new employment facilities for citizens, while responsible officials can enhance the internal welfare with the help of modernizing the whole system, refurbishing hospitals as well as multiplying their numbers. Lastly, enhancing the quality of all educational institutions starting from kindergarten to tertiary education has also a lot to do with how state officials distribute public funds.
In conclusion, despite the fact that international aid programs are crucial to a certain extent, I am more inclined to say that governments may have more advantages concentrating more to local affairs.
372 words
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The line graph shows the percentage of American seniors on the basis of their participation to five different types of entertainment activities between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that watching TV was dominant for the better part of period which was replaced by hiking in 2010s. On the other hand, the percentage of old Americans who opted for reading and surfing the internet showed an upward trend, whereas the reverse was witnessed in the case of visiting theaters.
Seniors in the US spent more of their downtime in hiking and watching TV during the timeframe. At the beginning of the period, sixty percent old people used to watch TV in their free time. After hitting a peak of 70% in 2000s, this figure stood at roughly 65% towards the end of the period. Relatively, a fifth of the elderly allocated their leisure time for hiking, which then climbed continuously to its peak at 80% throughout the period.
The percentage of those who chose surfing on the Internet and Reading as their leisure activities saw a significant increase. That of reading had experienced ups and downs between 40% and 20% by 2000s. This figure showed a steady rise by 40% to 2010s. Less than 10% of seniors would surf on the Internet initially. However, this rate went up consistently to around 15% in the mid-2000s, which was followed by a dramatic rise to 50% in the last decade.
Lastly, even though a half of the elderly was inclined to go to theaters at the beginning of the period, this percentage declined to 30% in 1980s. In contrast, by 2010s, there had been a 15% increase in their rate.
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Overall, it is clear that watching TV was dominant for the better part of period which was replaced by hiking in 2010s. On the other hand, the percentage of old Americans who opted for reading and surfing the internet showed an upward trend, whereas the reverse was witnessed in the case of visiting theaters.
Seniors in the US spent more of their downtime in hiking and watching TV during the timeframe. At the beginning of the period, sixty percent old people used to watch TV in their free time. After hitting a peak of 70% in 2000s, this figure stood at roughly 65% towards the end of the period. Relatively, a fifth of the elderly allocated their leisure time for hiking, which then climbed continuously to its peak at 80% throughout the period.
The percentage of those who chose surfing on the Internet and Reading as their leisure activities saw a significant increase. That of reading had experienced ups and downs between 40% and 20% by 2000s. This figure showed a steady rise by 40% to 2010s. Less than 10% of seniors would surf on the Internet initially. However, this rate went up consistently to around 15% in the mid-2000s, which was followed by a dramatic rise to 50% in the last decade.
Lastly, even though a half of the elderly was inclined to go to theaters at the beginning of the period, this percentage declined to 30% in 1980s. In contrast, by 2010s, there had been a 15% increase in their rate.
278 words
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