Nodirjon's IELTSmates
10.2K subscribers
2.67K photos
858 videos
524 files
1.81K links
Owner: @NodirjonEgamberdiev (Overall 8.5)
IELTS Instructor at Everest Amir Temur (@EverestOfficial)
Teaching since 2018


Projects:
@UzIELTSbot - IELTS is easy with us!
(Almost all preparation materials)

📍 Everest Amir Temur
📞 +99895 144 90 40
Download Telegram
#essay #task2 #sample #opinion #balanced
Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft, should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some
education experts believe that arts subjects should be mandatory in high school due to the benefits they provide to academic outcomes. Although this approach may not be ideal every case, I am of the opinion that arts subjects should generally be a required part of the school program.

There are a number of issues associated with making arts subjects mandatory. First of all, not all schools have the resources to provide this kind of an education. In the case of schools in poor countries or on tight budgets, attention must be given to subjects that the students will need for a financially successful future as a priority. Furthermore, it is true that certain arts subjects are not a perfect match for every student. Many students are introverted and shy, so to force them to take classes like drama and performance may be counterproductive.

However, in most cases, requiring students to have at least a certain amount of exposure to arts-based subjects is the right decision. Research has shown that learning a range of skills has a positive impact on cognitive ability and intelligence. For example, when Finland began to focus their education on exposing their students to a wider variety of subjects, the academic performance of their children rose to the best in the world. In addition, arts subjects have obvious benefits beyond academics. Arts subjects have the potential to introduce young people to activities, such as playing an instrument, that they may enjoy for the rest of their lives.

In conclusion, providing extensive arts programs is not realistic for every school, and not all students should not be forced to do every kind of art class. However, I do believe that whenever realistically possible, it should be mandatory for students to have some involvement in the arts.

Šī¸ Beyden Dingle(Overall 9.0, W:8.5)

Join and share đŸ”Ŋ
@IELTSmates_Uz
Please open Telegram to view this post
VIEW IN TELEGRAM