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Nowadays people live longer after they retire. How does this affect individuals and society? What can be done about this?

Effects - work problems - unemployment, homeless - residential areas/nursing homes, pension, OAP, budget deficiency, healthcare needs, psychological issues

Solutions - set a higher age for pension, high pension to reduce unemployment, encourage youngsters to live with their parents, special courses to gather


With the advent of breakthroughs on medical grounds, people are living much longer even after retirement these days. While this phenomenon is bound to have fiscal strains to the government, and ageism within groups, I believe that with a proper law policy, it can effectively be tackled.

When people live longer, a number of detrimental effects may arise. In a smaller scale, senior citizens might get alienated after they reach a particular age, say, around 70. Having no children residing with them - a common practice in most western countries - their isolation can trigger severe psychological traumas for the elderly, especially when they cannot perform a day-to-day activity such as going for a shop. Working class of these elderly can face ageism at work, particularly if there are more young workers, further fueling their loneliness. In a bigger picture, it can cost a lot for the government to look after old citizens. To avoid mishaps at home, the government has to found nursing homes, recruit caretakers, expend funds for their overall well-being. Pensions, given for all OAPs, make the government’s situation even worse, potentially leading to economical problems in the long run.

To solve this ever-increasing issue, governments should introduce special laws concerning the family ties. As stated in the previous body, seniors may feel isolated, and to prevent this from happening, children must have legal obligations to cater their parents, take special care of them. As a saying says, “of all the virtues, family duty is the first”, and this genuine truth has to be taught to younger generations. When families reunion, and start to live together again, all what governments have to do will giving pensions. They need not build residential homes, direct large sums of money for their care, since all these can be done by children, at least using pensions of their parents. To allow the elderly to spend their time more meaningfully, governments can establish gathering venues for them, where they can meet up with old friends, avoiding being leftover at home.

To conclude, I reiterate that financial problems as well as age discrimination can be attributed as negative impacts of people living longer. However, teaching kids the value of a family, especially parents, by making them live together, can be an appropriate resolution.


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