A good day usually starts with spending time with family. For example, I eat breakfast with my parents and talk about the day. After that, spending time with friends makes the day more fun. I play games and talk with my friends at the park. Finally, celebrating a special event like a birthday can make a day unforgettable. A cake is an important part of a birthday, and a gift can make the day more exciting. For example, on my last birthday, I ate a chocolate cake with my family and received a small gift that made me very happy.

In short, enjoying time with family and friends, and celebrating small moments, can make any day truly wonderful.

Some days are special not because of what we do, but because of who we spend them with and the little joys that make us smile.

Some days are special not because of what we do, but because of who we spend them with and the little joys that make us smile.
A good day usually starts with spending time with family. For example, I eat breakfast with my parents and talk about the day. After that, spending time with friends makes the day more fun. I play games and talk with my friends at the park. Finally, celebrating a special event like a birthday can make a day unforgettable. A cake is an important part of a birthday, and a gift can make the day more exciting. For example, on my last birthday, I ate a chocolate cake with my family and received a small gift that made me very happy.
In short, enjoying time with family and friends, and celebrating small moments, can make any day truly wonderful.

A Good Day
Some days are special not because of what we do, but because of who we spend them with and the little joys that make us smile. A good day usually starts with family. For example, I eat breakfast with my parents and talk about our plans for the day. Then, spending time with friends makes the day even more fun. I play games and chat with my friends at the park, which always makes me happy. Finally, celebrating a special event, like a birthday, can make a day unforgettable. A delicious cake is an important part of the celebration, and a thoughtful little gift can make it even more exciting. For instance, on my last birthday, I enjoyed a chocolate cake with my family and received a small gift that truly delighted me.
In short, enjoying time with family and friends and celebrating small moments can make any day wonderful.

فرمت پاراگراف اصولی چیه؟

Topic sentence:
Nowadays, X is an important issue in our society.
Support:
First, it affects people’s lives in many ways.
Example / explanation:
For example, many people experience problems because of it.
Conclusion:
For these reasons, X should be taken seriously.

اگر امتحان پاراگراف رو داده بود و گفته بود براش topic sentence/ conclusion sentence بنویسید چیکار کنم؟

موفق باشید❤️
امیدوارم توی این شرایط حداقل این نکات یه باری از دوشتون برداره و نخواید براش پول به کلاس های الکی و بیخود بدید

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سلام استاد چقد خوشحال شدم صداتونو دوباره شنیدم. من خودم تیچر زبانم میشه یه توصیه به ماها کنی؟

سلام متشکرم
از این مدل پیاما زیاد میگیرم گفتم یه جا پیام بدم.
نکته اول اینکه من ممنونم که منو قابل میدونید که بهتون توصیه کنم در حالیکه منم دارم یاد میگیرم.
ولی خوب هرسری میام درموردش صحبت کنم میگید چقد دلت پره چون واقعا دلم پره😑 کنترلمو از دست میدم
نکته دوم اینکه تنها توصیه ای که دارم چون خیلی از زبان آموزا طی کلاس های خصوصی باهاش مواجهن اینه که توروخدا تورو جان هرچی میپرستید برای زبان آموزتون شوآف نکنید طرف اومده پیشتون یاد بگیره چطور صحبت کنه.
درحال حاضر محتوای زرد بیش از هر حوزه ی دیگه ای داخل حوزه زبان زیاده. چهل و پنج اصطلاح مختلف برای «بفرمایید» یاد میدید بهش که چی بشه؟ که بفهمه شما خیلی بلدید و خودش هیچوقت یاد نمیگیره؟ حالا خودتون همشو از چت جی پی تی گرفتید ( آخه چرا مخاطب رو احمق فرض میکنید) 😑 نکنید.
تهش قراره وقتی با نیتیو حرف بزنه بگه
Here you are, after you
تنها وظیفه یک معلم از نظر من اینه که برای زبان آموز ساده سازی کنه و تا جایی که میتونه خودشو بیاره هم سطح زبان آموز کنه که طرف بتونه راحت مکالمه کنه و صحبت کنه همین. بیشترش شوآفه و تظاهر به چیزیه که نیستید.