IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
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Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev - an IELTS instructor with more than 5 years of teaching experience and more than 10 000 students in online and offline courses alike.

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Ertaga soat 19:30 jonli darschaga nima deysiz?

🥇Complex structures for Speaking and Writing
🥈Topic vocabulary for Speaking and Writing

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🥇IELTS Reading 6.0 6.5 dan 7.0 7.5 ga 7.0 7.5 dan 8.5 9.0 ga chiqish uchun eng muhim mahorat bu ...

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Some people think that children who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In a world where youth crime has reached epidemic proportions, people have different views as to whether children should face the same legal consequences as their adult counterparts when they break the law. While there are clear benefits to imposing stringent punishments on younger offenders, I believe that they should be punished in a different manner.

Proponents of penalizing children the same way as adults cite various reasons to support their stance. If law enforcement agencies hold juvenile offenders to the same standards as adults, they can send a clear message about the potential consequences of criminal conduct, which instills a strong sense of responsibility and fear into the hearts of younger generations. This approach can ultimately serve as an effective detterent for both potential and existing law-breakers, thereby mitigating the risk of juvenile delinquency. At a time when children exhibit irresponsible attitudes for their anti-social actions due to lenient laws and soft parenting methods, giving strict punishments like lengthy prison sentences can make a big difference when it comes to discouraging them from joining gangs and committing crimes.

Despite these arguments, in my view, younger offenders should be treated differently. Faced with the same penalties as adult criminals, children are likely to experience debilitating feelings of disenfranchisement, injustice, and low self-esteem due to social stigma attached to crime, which raises the risk of developing mental health disorders like depression and anxiety. As a result, they may find it difficult to make conscious decisions and control their impulses, potentially pushing them towards aggressive and even criminal behavior. The zero-tolerance approach is especially challenging for emotionally unstable children, who often struggle to regulate their feelings and cope with stressful situations effectively.

In conclusion, although punishing younger wrongdoers the same way as aduts may deter further criminal acts, I believe that its psychological toll deserves more attention. Only by introducing different punishments that fit the crime can we make strides in terms of combatting juvenile crime.


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Guys, do not waste your time typing garbage in the comments section. Your time is more valuable than that. By the way, people do not give a crap about your or my opinions: ACTIONS MATTER. Pull up your sleeves, go out, work, enjoy, leave an imprint, and conquer the world!

On social media, you see the worst people talking about good deeds, the most lost people talking about God, the most lonely people talking about relationships, and the laziest people talking about hard work. ACTIONS, RESULTS MATTER!

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Bitta to'xtovsiz 15 soatlik jonli dars qilamizmi article analyze qilish uchun?

Men jinnicha articlelarni topganmanda vocab, ideas, va structures uchun.

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I wrote a 330 word essay under 7 minutes during our offline lessons. Do you want to get a taste of it?

🥇Body 1: Ripple-effect approach
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Obesity is becoming a major problem in many parts of the world, especially in rich countries. What are the reasons and solutions?

In an era characterized by unhealthy eating habits and sedentary lifestyles, it has become increasingly common for individuals to suffer from obesity, particularly in wealthy nations. While there are clear reasons for this issue, I believe that individuals can take several measures to combat it.

The increase in obesity rates can be attributed to a variety of factors. With the intensification of competition in the international job market, along with rising living expenses and financial pressures, many individuals now work long hours and tolerate heavy workloads, which has led to the rise of busy schedules. Given these circumstances, it is not surprising to see people opting for fast food products and processed snacks while also refusing to pursue sports activities to save time, raising the risk of chronic diseases like obesity. A case in point is my home country of Uzbekistan, where a large number of citizens fail to engage in regular physical activity and eat a balanced diet due to their lack of free time.

However, there are various ways in which the problem of obesity can be addressed. On an individual level, it is essential for people to adopt and maintain a healthy lifestyle. This can be accomplished by embracing a nutritious diet with wholesome fruits and vegetables rich in essential vitamins and minerals as opposed to consuming unhealthy food options like fast food items, processed meals, and sugary drinks, and engaging in regular exercises like pull-ups and push-ups instead of doing passive activities like scrolling through social media and playing video games, as well as consulting with medical practitioners to stay away from serious health issues. In the absence of these measures, many individuals are likely to gain extra weight, which would lead to not only obesity but also other chronic health conditions like diabetes.

In conclusion, the increased vulnerability to obesity comes from our demanding schedules, but incorporating healthy living practices into our daily routines can make a big difference in terms of confronting this issue. Only by participating in regular exercise and eating a balanced diet can we manage our weight effectively.


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