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The difference between 7.0 and 8.0!
🥇Coherence and cohesion:
Referencing ✅ [ it, this, their, they ]
A central topic ✅ [ The impact of walking on physical health ]
Paraphrasing ✅ [ walking and walkers ]
Logical sequencing ✅ [ logical flow of ideas ]
Cohesive devices ❌ [ Overuse of linkers like "first", "mainly because", "as a result", and "consequently" ]
🥈Grammar range and accuracy:
No errors in punctuation and grammar ✅
A wide range of structures ❌ [ only simple sentence forms ]
Flexibility ❌ [ only basic use of common structures ]
🥇Coherence and cohesion:
Referencing ✅ [ they, their, such ]
Paraphrasing ✅ [ walking, daily walks, improve, improvements ]
Cohesive devices ✅ [ linkers do not attract attention ]
A central topic ✅ [ the impact of walking on physical health ]
Logical sequencing ✅ [ smooth flow of ideas ]
🥈Grammar range and accuracy:
No errors in punctuation and grammar ✅
A wide range of structures ✅ [ simple, complex, and uncommon ]
Flexibility ✅ [ The use of "In a world dominated by" ]
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There are several benefits to walking. First and foremost, it improves physical health. Mainly because, walkers burn sufficient calories, strengthen their muscles, and enhance their immune systems. As a result, they can maintain a healthy weight and stay away from chronic diseases like obesity. Consequently, their physical fitness and overall quality of life get better.
🥇Coherence and cohesion:
Referencing ✅ [ it, this, their, they ]
A central topic ✅ [ The impact of walking on physical health ]
Paraphrasing ✅ [ walking and walkers ]
Logical sequencing ✅ [ logical flow of ideas ]
Cohesive devices ❌ [ Overuse of linkers like "first", "mainly because", "as a result", and "consequently" ]
🥈Grammar range and accuracy:
No errors in punctuation and grammar ✅
A wide range of structures ❌ [ only simple sentence forms ]
Flexibility ❌ [ only basic use of common structures ]
There are several benefits to walking. When people integrate daily walks into their schedules, they can not only burn sufficient calories and strengthen their muscles but also boost their immune systems and cardiovascular health. Such improvements can ultimately mitigate the risk of chronic health conditions like obesity, enhancing physical fitness and overall quality of life in the process. In a world dominated by sedentary lifestyles due to technological advances and busy lifestyles, walking can make a big difference in maintaining a healthy weight and staying in shape.
🥇Coherence and cohesion:
Referencing ✅ [ they, their, such ]
Paraphrasing ✅ [ walking, daily walks, improve, improvements ]
Cohesive devices ✅ [ linkers do not attract attention ]
A central topic ✅ [ the impact of walking on physical health ]
Logical sequencing ✅ [ smooth flow of ideas ]
🥈Grammar range and accuracy:
No errors in punctuation and grammar ✅
A wide range of structures ✅ [ simple, complex, and uncommon ]
Flexibility ✅ [ The use of "In a world dominated by" ]
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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
The difference between 7.0 and 8.0! There are several benefits to walking. First and foremost, it improves physical health. Mainly because, walkers burn sufficient calories, strengthen their muscles, and enhance their immune systems. As a result, they can…
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🥇WRITING 7.5
🥈SPEAKING 7.5
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🥈SPEAKING 7.5
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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
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✔️LIFE IS A CHESS GAME!
No matter who you are, where you are, what you are going through, there is always the best move on the chess board. Do not care about what happened in the past or what might happen in the future, make the best move in the position and move on.
For example, you might have a hard time making a choice between studying abroad and entering a local university. You already know what is best for you: make the best possible decision and try your best to execute your plans. As long as you are on the right path and doing your best, do not give a fuck about what others think, say, or do!
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No matter who you are, where you are, what you are going through, there is always the best move on the chess board. Do not care about what happened in the past or what might happen in the future, make the best move in the position and move on.
For example, you might have a hard time making a choice between studying abroad and entering a local university. You already know what is best for you: make the best possible decision and try your best to execute your plans. As long as you are on the right path and doing your best, do not give a fuck about what others think, say, or do!
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🔥A BAND 9.0 INTRODUCTION🔥
In a world characterized by technological advancements and internet resources, it has become increasingly common for individuals to conduct financial transactions through virtual means, particularly in urban areas. While this trend poses serious risks to personal security, I believe that it brings much greater benefits in terms of convenience and environmental sustainability.
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In a world characterized by technological advancements and internet resources, it has become increasingly common for individuals to conduct financial transactions through virtual means, particularly in urban areas. While this trend poses serious risks to personal security, I believe that it brings much greater benefits in terms of convenience and environmental sustainability.
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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
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