IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
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Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev - an IELTS instructor with more than 5 years of teaching experience and more than 10 000 students in online and offline courses alike.

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Are you waiting for my offline courses in Samarkand?

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Fast education bilan Registon markazlarini o'rtasidan oldik, yuqsin-yuqsin degan ma'noda😁

O'zimni o'quvchilarim orasidan o'zimga yordamchi o'qituvchilar ham tanlab olaman hali.


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With shifts in social norms and family dynamics, it has become increasingly common for older people to opt for retirement communities rather than staying with their adult children, particularly in Western communities like Germany and France. While retirement facilities offer opportunities for personal growth and social interaction, I believe that this shift is ultimately detrimental when viewed through the lenses of individual well-being and cultural continuity.


Proponents of retirement communities cite various reasons to support their stance. When seniors choose to live in these facilities, they gain access to a wide range of recreational amenities, including gyms, swimming pools, and yoga classes, alongside outdoor pursuits like hiking and walking clubs. Such activities can ultimately promote physical fitness, allowing individuals to maintain a healthy weight and stay in shape, which in turn boosts their immune systems and energy levels. Apart from fostering personal development, these environments enhance social connections. By choosing retirement centers, elderly individuals have the chance to connect with peers who share similar life experiences and challenges, leading to the formation and maintenance of meaningful relationships. This offers valuable opportunities for emotional support and camaraderie, both of which can alleviate feelings of stress and stimulate overall happiness.


Despite these advantages, in my view, reliance on retirement communities presents significant personal and cultural problems. Seniors who opt for these facilities often grapple with a lack of community identity and belonging, which can contribute to debilitating feelings of loneliness, isolation, and despair. These emotional struggles, while provoking a profound sense of stress and anxiety, may raise their risk of developing chronic mental health conditions such as depression, eating disorders, and sleep disturbances. In addition to harming overall quality of life, the preference for retirement homes over cohabitation with family members poses a threat to the preservation of cultural traditions. When older generations withdraw from family life, they miss the opportunity to pass their values and insights onto younger generations, thereby hindering generational learning. This disconnect can lead to a diminished understanding of historical events, local customs, and unique family rituals, ultimately undermining the integrity of family structures and cultural traditions.


In conclusion, although residing in specialized senior facilities can facilitate personal development and social engagement, I contend that it raises serious concerns regarding psychological health and cultural heritage. Only through the establishment of closer bonds between seniors and their adult children can we make strides in terms of fostering individual well-being, social cohesion, and cultural preservation.


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Men IELTS dan hali 5.5 ham olmagan bo'lsa ham, lekin kelajagi uchun mehnat qilayotgan bollarga havasim keladi. Chunki bilaman ularni kuni kelishini, qilingan duolar, to'kilgan ko'z-yoshlar javobsiz qolmasligini bilaman.


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📝IELTS WRITING TASK 2!

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With increased dissatisfaction with traditional teaching methods, coupled with the rise of online educational resources, it has become increasingly common for parents to homeschool their children as opposed to relying on public schools, particularly in advanced countries. While this approach may enhance children's safety, I believe that it does more harm than good when viewed through the lens of social interaction.

Proponents of homeschooling cite various reasons to support their stance. When children go to public schools, as is the case in most parts of the world, they often face stressful circumstances such as conflicts with peers, derogatory comments, and even physical altercations due to a pervasive culture of competition. In contrast, parents who opt for homeschooling typically cultivate a safe and serene learning atmosphere, allowing children to concentrate solely on their academic and athletic pursuits without the interference of external distractions and threats. In a world where both minor issues like peer disputes and major problems such as gun violence and school shootings have reached epidemic proportions, home education can make a big difference in mitigating these risks.

However, the growing reliance on this educational model represents a concerning development. Without access to conventional school environments, children miss out on valuable opportunities to connect with peers from different walks of life, engage in mindful discussions, and make lifelong friends. This lack of social engagement can hinder the development of essential interpersonal skills such as cooperation, conflict resolution, and emotional intelligence, all of which are vital for forming and maintaining meaningful relationships in both personal and professional realms later in life. Given the widespread prevalence of isolated lifestyles due to technological progress and globalization, homeschooling might exacerbate the existing challenges surrounding friendship, sense of belonging, and community identity.

In conclusion, although home-schooling empowers parents to keep children safe, I contend that it raises serious concerns regarding social engagement. Only by sending children to public schools can we make strides in terms of fostering their social literacy and holistic development.


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With a growing emphasis on athleticism and longevity, it has become increasingly common for children to engage in sports activities for professional or recreational purposes, particularly in developed regions with easily accessible sports facilities. While this shift poses substantial time management difficulties, I believe that it does more good than harm when viewed through the lenses of physical and mental well-being.


Critics of sports participation cite various reasons to support their stance. When children invest a lot of time in sports activities, they may find it difficult to juggle multiple responsibilities such as school assignments, collaborative projects, and extracurricular activities, which can hinder their ability to meet deadlines and excel in standardized exams. As the workload of children increases, so does their difficulty managing time, adversely affecting their learning efficiency, morale, and overall academic performance. In a world where teenagers already struggle with immense parental pressure, constant social comparison, and fierce peer competition, consistent engagement in sports might exacerbate their challenges related to time management and productivity.


Despite these worries, in my view, the increasing popularity of sports represents a positive development. Committed to sports pursuits, whether for competitive or leisure purposes, children can not only strengthen their muscles and boost their immune systems as is widely known, but also maintain a healthy weight and improve their physical fitness. This heightened level of physical activity is instrumental in lowering the risk of chronic health conditions like obesity and diabetes, thereby promoting longevity and enhancing overall quality of life. At a time when sedentary lifestyles reign supreme due to technological advancements and busy schedules, active participation in sports can make a big difference when it comes to healthy living and effective weight management.


In addition to supporting physical growth, involvement in sports offers significant psychological benefits. Through regular exercises and training sessions, professional athletes and sports enthusiasts gain the opportunity to step out of their comfort zones and stretch their limits, leading to a deeper sense of accomplishment and satisfaction. Such experiences bolster their self-confidence and self-esteem, equipping them with the resilience needed to navigate life's challenges effectively. This feature is particularly valuable for younger generations with a lack of emotional regulation and mental fortitude, as sports serve as a tool for them to manage their impulses and build their self-image.


In conclusion, although the growing appeal of sports raises serious concerns regarding time management, I contend that its advantages associated with physical and mental health deserve greater attention. Only through active engagement in sports activities can children make strides in terms of preventing diseases and developing their self-perception.


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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🔥KETGANI KETGAAN🔥 With a growing emphasis on athleticism and longevity, it has become increasingly common for children to engage in sports activities for professional or recreational purposes, particularly in developed regions with easily accessible sports…
O'zi bu kishi 9.0 lik, lekin buni 9.5 lik qilib turgan uslub bu "Modern relevance approach"!

🥇In a world where teenagers already struggle with immense parental pressure, constant social comparison, and fierce peer competition, consistent engagement in sports might exacerbate their challenges related to time management and productivity.

🥈At a time when sedentary lifestyles reign supreme due to technological advancements and busy schedules, active participation in sports can make a big difference when it comes to healthy living and effective weight management.

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IELTS 9.0 olishni sirchasini kim xoxlaydi?😁

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