IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
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Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev - an IELTS instructor with more than 5 years of teaching experience and more than 10 000 students in online and offline courses alike.

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When individuals visit museums, they come into contact with visitors from different walks of life.
If individuals visit museums, they come into contact with visitors from different walks of life.
By visiting museums, individuals come into contact with visitors from different walks of life.
Through museum visits, individuals come into contact with visitors from different walks of life.
Individuals who visit museums come into contact with visitors from different walks of life.
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A BAND 999999 ESSAY

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I slept fro 3 hours and then taught for 4 hours 😂

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✔️ IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ✔️

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‼️A BAND 9.0 ESSAY ‼️

As competition in international sporting events intensifies, it has become increasingly common for countries to channel resources into constructing exclusive sports facilities for elite athletes, neglecting the needs of the general public. While this approach yields political and economic benefits, it ultimately poses greater challenges when viewed through the lenses of social equity and public health.


Proponents of specialized facilities cite various reasons to support their stance. By providing top athletes with state-of-the-art equipment and technology, countries enable them to refine their skills and eliminate weaknesses, thereby fostering a culture of athletic excellence. This often gives athletes, whether football players or boxers, a competitive edge on the global stage. Successful performances in international competitions enhance national pride and prestige, elevating the country's political standing in the international arena.


The economic advantages of this strategy are also profound. When accomplished athletes outcompete their rivals in tournaments due to their superior training programs, they draw an influx of tourists to their home countries. This form of tourist development generates substantial revenue and creates jobs, which ultimately contributes to economic growth and improved living standards for local communities.


However, the sole focus on top-tier athletes comes at a high price to social equity and public health. If governments prioritize the construction of training complexes exclusively for elite competitors, general members of the public, especially those from lower and middle-income brackets, may feel marginalized and disenfranchised, potentially exacerbating societal fault lines. In a world where individuals already struggle with economic inequalities and political differences, the anti-democratization of sports facilities might further undermine social cohesion and harmony.


Public health concerns also deserve considerable attention. When countries provide accessible sports amenities, citizens are more likely to engage in regular physical activity, reducing the risk of chronic health issues such as obesity and diabetes, which can subsequently lower healthcare costs. Prioritizing elite athletes at the expense of public amenities, on the other hand, creates a cycle of poor health and increased reliance on medical services, proving to be a lose-lose situation.


In conclusion, although building specialized sports facilities for elite athletes may bring political and economic gains, the implications on social dynamics and public well-being are far more significant. Only by striking a balance that addresses the needs of both top athletes and the general populace can we make progress in fostering a healthier and more inclusive society for all.


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My friends, it is a blessing to have small goals and dreams

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IELTS Listening and Reading course!

Narxi qancha bo'lsin?

Agar vazifalarni bajarib ham darajangizni oshirolmasangiz kurs to'lovi qaytarib beriladi!


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IELTS Listening and Reading course! Narxi qancha bo'lsin? Agar vazifalarni bajarib ham darajangizni oshirolmasangiz kurs to'lovi qaytarib beriladi! @WRITING_T
Boshqa hech bir kurs sizga natijani kafolatlamaydi.

Shunga sal o'ylab narx taklif qilsangiz rozi bo'lishim mumkin. Agar faqat o'zingizni o'ylasangiz, men ham faqat o'zimni o'ylayman.

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