IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
30.5K subscribers
1.13K photos
267 videos
298 files
281 links
Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev - an IELTS instructor with more than 5 years of teaching experience and more than 10 000 students in online and offline courses alike.

Admin: @ielts_admine @writing_adminn
Download Telegram
DOMINO-EFFECT
🔥30👍6🐳4
Live stream finished (1 hour)
Документ1.pdf
104.2 KB
A BAND 4.5 ESSAY

@WRITING_T
👌34😁24👍8🔥53
Mana shu oy examda tushish ehtimoli katta 5 ta mavzu bor.

Shuni bittasiga kecha essay yozdik.

Nima deysizlar ertaga yana bitta mavzuga essay yozamizmi kanalda?

@WRITING_T
👍161👌12💯10😍8🐳4
✔️IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ✔️

✈️ Air travel 🛩

@WRITING_T
30👍15😍5🌚2
With the latest advancements in technology and fierce competition in the market, it has become increasingly common for airlines to slash their ticket prices to secure a competitive edge, particularly in advanced countries. While this trend fosters accessibility and stimulates tourism, it poses greater challenges when viewed through the lenses of environmental sustainability and safety.


Proponents of reduced airfares cite various reasons to support their stance. Gone are the days when air travel was a luxury reserved for affluent families, as today's lower prices empower individuals from middle and lower-income brackets to go on international journeys. This newfound affordability not only opens doors to opportunities in higher education and employment but also facilitates personal growth. As a result, air travel becomes a vehicle for diminishing social stratification, inequality, marginalization, and disenfranchisement, thereby nurturing more integrated and inclusive communities.


In addition to promoting inclusivity, lower ticket prices have revitalized the tourism sector. As airfares decline, popular tourist destinations—such as historical landmarks—receive an influx of visitors, leading to increased revenue generation. This surge in tourism translates into job creation across various sectors, including hospitality, transportation, and public services, thereby potentially stimulating economic growth and enhancing living standards for all.


Despite these arguments, affordable air travel does more harm than good. As ticket prices decrease, an increasing number of individuals opt for air travel over other modes of transportation. This growing reliance on airplanes results in heightened carbon emissions, intensifying the greenhouse effect and accelerating the detrimental impacts of climate change. In a world where countries grapple with pressing environmental issues like air pollution, the proliferation of budget air travel may intensify the existing challenges related to sustainability.


Safety worries also come into the equation. Airlines with lower prices struggle to make as much profit as their more expensive counterparts, which can lead to insufficient investment in crucial areas such as maintenance, staff recruitment, and research and development. Take my home country of Uzbekistan, where budget airlines find it difficult to adhere to modern safety standards—such as the installation of surveillance cameras and the hiring of professional guards—thereby putting millions of lives in serious jeopardy.


In conclusion, although lower airfares enhance accessibility and boost tourism development, they come at a considerable cost to environmental integrity and service quality.


Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev
@WRITING_T
👍86🔥9641
IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Bugun 19:00 da yondiramizmi bitta essaychani? @WRITING_T
Sal ertaroq boshlaymiz vatan uchun jangni.

Bolta, ketmon, payshaxalarni tayyorlab turingizlar🫡

@WRITING_T
👌72😁18🔥9👍6🐳3
30 MINUTES!
👍15🔥51😱1🐳1
Live stream scheduled for
5 minutda boshlaymiiiz urushniii!
23👍9🔥5🐳4🕊2
With = As [ international wars and local disputes ] , individuals [ physical and mental health problems, food insecurity, and economic hardship -- [ rates of depression and suicide ] !
🔥21👍75🕊1
Live stream finished (1 hour)
Документ1.pdf
85.7 KB
A BAND 1.0 ESSAY
40👍14👌8🌚5💯5
📝IELTS WRITING TASK 2

@WRITING_T
🐳11👍6😢2🌚1
Many seniors feel a profound sense of nostalgia for their youth, raising pertinent questions as to whether life was indeed better in those times compared to the present. While there were undeniable advantages to living in the past, I firmly believe that older individuals today enjoy significantly easier and more comfortable lifestyles.


Elderly people often look back on their youth for a variety of reasons. In an era devoid of omnipresent electronic gadgets and social media, families spent quality moments together, social gatherings were commonplace, and neighbors engaged in genuine conversations, fostering a deeper sense of community and camaraderie. In contrast, the rise of sedentary lifestyles and demanding schedules has eroded these familial and communal bonds. As a result, many older adults experience increased feelings of loneliness and isolation, with their loved ones preoccupied by digital devices and virtual relationships.


However, this nostalgic view of the past can obscure its considerable challenges. Earlier generations contended with widespread wars and local conflicts, alongside various physical and mental health issues, food insecurity, and economic difficulties. Thanks to advancements in international relations, agricultural technology, and medicine, today’s generations oftan take peaceful and abundant times for granted, which have contributed to longer life expectancies. Although contemporary society still grapples with political instability, public health crises, and environmental concerns, these difficulties pale in comparison to those experienced in the last century.


Moreover, technology has fundamentally transformed various aspects of our lives. The advent of instant messaging apps, social networking platforms, and video calls enables individuals to stay in touch with loved ones across vast distances while also providing access to a wealth of information about scientific innovations, natural disasters, and social issues. Although recent technological advancements are sometimes associated with diminished face-to-face interactions and growing trust issues, they have, in reality, brought individuals from various backgrounds together.


In conclusion, while many senior citizens cherish their memories of stronger family ties and vibrant community life from their earlier years, I contend that their current lives are much better. With improved international relations, cutting-edge technological tools, and significant medical breakthroughs, we now enjoy greater peace, awareness, longevity, and an enhanced quality of life.


Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev
@WRITING_T
👍538🔥6😍6👌1