✅WRITING-6.5
📝 Unfortunately, I haven’t taught Task 1 lessons yet: otherwise, he would have probably pulled off a 7.0 in Writing. Anyways, such an impressive accomplishment!
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📝 Unfortunately, I haven’t taught Task 1 lessons yet: otherwise, he would have probably pulled off a 7.0 in Writing. Anyways, such an impressive accomplishment!
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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Why are more and more people working overtime? 📝 PLANNING: 📝 PARAGRAPHING: @WRITING_T
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Why are more and more people working overtime?
✅ PLANNING:
Work overtime [ why ] - gain a competitive advantage over other employees [ why ] - limited job opportunities and promotions [ why ] - strong competition in the job market [ why ] - technological tools and globalization!
✅ PARAGRAPHING:
There are various reasons why an increasing number of individuals are working overtime. With the successful incorporation of technological tools in business processes and the impact of globalization, competition has intensified in the international labor market, leading to limited opportunities for career progression. Given this heightened competitiveness, it comes as no surprise that many employees feel compelled to work longer hours to outperform their peers and gain a competitive edge.
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Why are more and more people working overtime?
✅ PLANNING:
Work overtime [ why ] - gain a competitive advantage over other employees [ why ] - limited job opportunities and promotions [ why ] - strong competition in the job market [ why ] - technological tools and globalization!
✅ PARAGRAPHING:
There are various reasons why an increasing number of individuals are working overtime. With the successful incorporation of technological tools in business processes and the impact of globalization, competition has intensified in the international labor market, leading to limited opportunities for career progression. Given this heightened competitiveness, it comes as no surprise that many employees feel compelled to work longer hours to outperform their peers and gain a competitive edge.
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✅ Make a big splash = become suddenly successful and garner a lot of public attention!
📝 After his videos went viral across various social media platforms, Andrew Tate has made a big splash.
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📝 After his videos went viral across various social media platforms, Andrew Tate has made a big splash.
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✅ Ahead of the curve = ahead of current thinking and trends.
📝 Large corporations like “Tesla” stay ahead of the curve due to their innovative and progressive nature.
📝 Back in high school, I was much ahead of the curve compared to my peers because of my consistent reading and writing habits.
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📝 Large corporations like “Tesla” stay ahead of the curve due to their innovative and progressive nature.
📝 Back in high school, I was much ahead of the curve compared to my peers because of my consistent reading and writing habits.
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✅ Plug away = work hard
📝 You have to be resilient enough to keep plugging away until things turn in your favor.
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📝 You have to be resilient enough to keep plugging away until things turn in your favor.
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By refusing to join my Writing course, you shot yourself in the foot, my friend 😁!
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Our Writing Course would have served as an antidote to your wounds 😢!
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Some people think that children should have activities organised for them, while others believe that they should be free to do what they want in their free time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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People have different views as to whether children should engage in structured activities or have the freedom to do whatever they want in their leisure time. While there are decided benefits to free play, I believe that it is crucial for parents to arrange the recreational pursuits of their children.
Proponents of allowing children to pursue their preferred activities highlight the benefits of free play for personal growth and development. By granting children the autonomy to participate in activities of their choice, they are likely to delve into their passions, unearth their talents, develop new skills, and cultivate a heightened sense of independence and responsibility. In a world where young people often lack fundamental traits such as discipline and self-reliance, encouraging them to make critical decisions can make a big difference in terms of their character formation and skill enrichment. Supporters of this school of thought also stress the significance of leisure time in a child's psychological progression. Without the opportunity to engage in activities they find fulfilling during their free hours, children might struggle with feelings of injustice and disenfranchisement, potentially leading to the breakdown of parent-child relationships.
In my opinion, however, the responsibility of regulating children's leisure activities falls on the shoulders of their parents. If children have unrestricted freedom in their free time, they may prioritize mindless entertainment over genuine relaxation and personal advancement due to their lack of maturity. A case in point is Uzbekistan, where many children spend long hours playing video games, binge-watching television programs, and scrolling through social media sites in lieu of meaningful face-to-face interactions and sports activities. This sedentary behavior has resulted in the erosion of vital interpersonal skills like emotional intelligence and conflict resolution, as well as the rise of chronic health conditions such as obesity and cardiovascular diseases. With the freedom to engage in their favourite activities, children are also likely to skip school and play truant in pursuit of instant gratification, ultimately compromising their academic performance.
In summary, although a large number of parents grant their children autonomy in their free time, I contend that it is essential to establish a well-organised framework for recreational pursuits. Only through the meticulous and strategic organization of leisure activities can we ensure children spend their downtime effectively.
Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev
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✅ A blessing in disguise = oxiri yaxshilikka olib kelgan yomonlik.
📝 Failing the test was a blessing in disguise, as it helped me perfect my craft.
📝 I consider being born into a poor family as a pure blessing in disguise.
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📝 Failing the test was a blessing in disguise, as it helped me perfect my craft.
📝 I consider being born into a poor family as a pure blessing in disguise.
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