IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
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Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev - an IELTS instructor with more than 5 years of teaching experience and more than 10 000 students in online and offline courses alike.

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🎯 Listening and Reading course

✔️To'liq ma'lumot

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Assalomu alaykum.

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✔️A BAND 9.0 PARAGRAPH

Limited social interaction is rooted in various factors. With the rapid advancement of technology, especially since the Covid-19 pandemic, coupled with the widespread adoption of high-speed internet, online entertainment options, digital learning resources, and remote work opportunities have become more accessible, leading to a surge in sedentary lifestyles. Given these circumstances, it comes as no surprise that many people spend long hours indoors, engrossed in electronic gadgets like smartphones, video gaming consoles, and computers, which restricts opportunities for genuine real-life interactions. Gone are the days when individuals actively engaged in social gatherings, live concerts, and community projects to forge meaningful relationships, as today's omnipresent technological devices push them to pursue solitary activities such as scrolling through social media feeds and binge-watching TV shows.


🥇Ripple-effect approach
🥈Temporal comparison approach


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🥇Parents pressure, whether direct or indirect, can take a major toll on kids' psychological well-being.


🥈Kids whose parents tease them about weight or police their eating habits are more likely to develop disordered eating and poor body image.


🥉While parents often push kids academically in hopes of motivating them, it saps their intrinstic motivation, leading to academic underperformance.


🏅When affection and approval are linked to meeting parental expectations, kids often start to hide their true feelings, avoid asking for help, and struggle to form close relationships, leading to social withdrawal.


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✔️RIPPLE-EFFECT APPROACH ✔️

🥇Automation and artificial intelliegence, immigration, and overpopulation 🔜 increased job displacement 🔜 fierce job market competition!

📝 With the successful integration of automation and artificial intelligence into industrial processes, combined with mass immigration and population growth, job displacement has reached epidemic proportions, which has led to the intensification of competition in the international job market.


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WRITING - 7.5
TASK 2 - 8.0 - 8.5
OVERALL - 8.0


✔️Shakhruz brother attended one of my Writing courses, taking advantage of its resources and strategies to take his Writing skills to the next level.


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Examinerlar tayyor tursin.

Writing Speaking kursda 8.0 8.5 ga vaxshiylarcha tayyorlanayotgan qotillar bor lekin😁

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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
✔️RIPPLE-EFFECT APPROACH ✔️ 🥇Automation and artificial intelliegence, immigration, and overpopulation 🔜 increased job displacement 🔜 fierce job market competition! 📝 With the successful integration of automation and artificial intelligence into industrial…
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The decline in work-life balance can be attributed to a variety of factors [ topic sentence]. With the successful integration of automation and artificial intelligence into industrial processes, coupled with mass immigration and population growth, job displacement has reached epidemic proportions, which has led to the intensification of competition in the international job market. Given these circumstances, it comes as no surprise that individuals now feel compelled to work long hours to gain a competitive edge in today's competitive economic landscape [ ripple-effect approach ]. A case in point is my home country of Uzbekistan, where many people push their limits in the workplace to meet rising job requirements and move up the career ladder, often at the expense of meaningful family-bonding activities, social interactions, and leisure activities [ local examplification ].


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IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🥇BODY 1: The decline in work-life balance can be attributed to a variety of factors [ topic sentence]. With the successful integration of automation and artificial intelligence into industrial processes, coupled with mass immigration and population growth…
‼️Bugun examda tushgan mavzuga men sizlarga kanalda ota-onalarni farzandlari bilan kam vaqt sarflashi haqida yozgan essayimizni to'liq Body 1 va Body 2 ni yozib hech bo'lmasa 8.0 olsangiz bolardi Writing Task 2 dan.

💯Jonli darsda aytgan edim e'tiborli bo'lingizlar: xuddi shu idealarni har doim ishlatsa boladi deb.


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🥇Why do people spend little time with kids?

✔️Fierce competition in the job market

🥈Why do people struggle to achieve a good work-life balance?

✔️Fierce competition in the job market

🥉Why do families put their elders in nursing homes?

✔️Fierce competition in the job market

🏅Why do parents put pressure on kids?

✔️Fierce competition in the job market

🎖Why do people delay parenthood?

✔️Fierce competition in the job market

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✔️WRITING - 7.0

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🥇Men yangi Writing kursga faqatgina jonli darsga 100% qatnashadiganlarni qabul qilmoqchiman.


🥈Agar bir oyda 2 marta jonli darsga faol qatnashmasangiz kursdan chiqarib yuborilasiz!


Bunga nima deysiz, qiynalib qolmaysizlarmi?

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⚡️ONLINE WRITING COURSE⚡️

📌Tutor: Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev
📌Kurs narxi: 300 000 monthly.
📌Boshlanish sanasi: 25 September
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