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This piece of writing is basically virgin, as no AI has ever touched it! Glyn's assessment: 8/8/8/8 Other examiners' assessment: from 8/8/8/7 to 8/9/9/8
This is how you take notes once you are given some feedback.

See, teeny tiny lapses stack up and then translate into a markdown.
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Forwarded from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
Lesson Plan:

β€’ Intro + Overview for 8.0+
β€’ Body components for 8.0+
β€’ Comparative and Topical laguage for 8.0+
β€’ Grammar and Punctuation for 8.0+


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The graph reveals the results of a survey conducted in Europe about what young people expect from change in five aspects of life in the ensuing 20 years.

Overall, communication is the only area where a majority of responses leaned toward an improvement. This was in contrast to the rest of the apsects, which, according to most of the respondents, are predicted to worsen, especially the quality of air in cities.

Communication between people is expected to improve as 54% of the survey participants suggested, followed by quality of food at 49%. The remaining proportions of the respondents have negative expectations for both categories.

Quality of water and health recorded even lower figures for improvement, at 40% and 42%, respectively. Thus, the other six in ten respondents said there would be a deterioration in these aspects.

Air quality, meanwhile, recorded the most pronounced gap. Whereas more than three quarters (77%) of the opinions are negative, only 23% are positive. This translates into a substantial difference of 54%, much greater in the rest of the aspects.


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Lesson: Tables

β€’ Intro + Overview (8.0+)
β€’ Body components (8.0+)
β€’ Comparative and Topical language (8.0+)
β€’ Grammar and Punctuation (8.0+)


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The bar chart shows how the percentage of people in the age group 65 and over in three nations in three different years: 1980, 2000 and the predicted year 2030.

Overall, the elderly populations of Canada and Germany are forecast to continue growing, with the latter remaining the most populous in all the years. This was in contrast to the figures for the UK, a country with the smallest population figures, saw no change until the med-period, after which the proportion is predicted to rise notably.

Germany recorded the highest 1980 figure of around 15%, a percentage that then increased sharply to about a quarter in 2000. According to the expectations, this proportion is set to reach a chart high of 30% by 2030, translating into a growth of 15%.

Canada consistently ranked second. From the initial 10%, the figure for the country doubled in 2000. By the predicted year, the forecast shows a rise to roughly a quarter, thus becoming the second highest proportion.

The UK, however, came at the lower end of the spectrum. It initially stood at about 13%, and by 2000, this proportion had remained unchanged. It is anticipated that 30 years later, seniors aged 65 and over will experience an increase in the UK to nearly 18%.

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Forwarded from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
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Forwarded from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
The lines compare the proportion of renewable energy used in the total energy consumption in six nations from 1971 to 2011, at 5-year intervals.

Overall, Finland was the leading consumer of renewable energy and also the one that dipped in the mid-period and then rebounded, similar to Denmark, which also saw declines before rising notably. France, Germany, the USA and UK, unlike those two countries, experienced less fluctuation and followed upward trends, with the UK consistently at the lower end of the spectrum.

Of the countries with more erratic trajectories, Finland witnessed the most pronounced fall, from around 24% in 1971 to its lowest at nearly 17% between 1986 and 1991. After that, however, the figure grew steadily to just below its 1971 level. A similar yet less sharp drop was observed in Denmark, where the percentage stood at 15% in 1971 before it went down to 10% by the late 1980s. By the end, this proportion had reached the second highest figure of about 18%.

The remaining countries, in stark contrast, underwent more consistent patterns. In particular, France and Germany started the period at roughly 8% and 5%, respectively. While France increased to 10% in 1976 and, after a slight dip in 1986, rose uninterruptedly to just under 15% at the end, Germany remained almost unchanged at 5% until the early 1990s, when it started rising and virtually converged with that of France.

The USA and UK recorded substantially lower renewable energy consumption. They started the time frame at about 3% and a mere 2%, yet over the course of the ensuing 40 years, they experienced a series of increments, going up to approximately 12% and 6%. Thus, the USA's usage of renewable energy was consistently twice as much as that of the UK.

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1️⃣ The most vexing problem in agricultural sector is over-use of pesticides.

2️⃣ The most vexing problem this trend leads to is persistent health issues.

3️⃣ The most vexing problem resulting from this phenomenon is undermined social health.

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Handout: Task 1 (Comparative structures)

🟒 Structures for more analytical comparison
🟒 Examples of use
🟒 Topical vocab


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πŸ’™ I know many candidates cannot understand the difference between 8.0 and 9.0 in C/Cβ€”nor can they understand how examiners score 9.0 on the criterion so effortlessly.

❀️ I shot a video on that and explained everything in great detail. Would you like to see that ?

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πŸ’™ I know many candidates cannot understand the difference between 8.0 and 9.0 in C/Cβ€”nor can they understand how examiners score 9.0 on the criterion so effortlessly. ❀️ I shot a video on that and explained everything in great detail. Would you like to see…
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Lesson: Task 1 (C/C - 9.0 by an examiner)

🟒 linking for 9.0
🟒 grouping for 9.0
🟒 paragraphing for 9.0
🟒 substitution/referencing for 9.0
🟒 data sequencing for 9.0


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1️⃣ The main implication of this trend on children is in how socially isolated they becomeβ€”or even emotionally detached.

2️⃣ The main problem associated with population growth is in how deleterious it is to local infrastructureβ€”or even how destructive it may become.

3️⃣ The main argument behind this stance is in how much time children spend on computersβ€”or even how carelessly they waste their spare time.

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1️⃣ Lack of free time for sports may be one of the causes affecting a child's mental health, partly as a result of reduced interaction with peers, resulting in children becoming socially isolated.

2️⃣ The encroachment of pristine areas for oil extraction might lead to disruption of ecosystems, partly as a result of ever more reduced habitats for wildlife, resulting in animals and plants becoming extinct.

3️⃣ The growing presence of fathers after child birth might be fundamentally important in a child's well-rounded development, partly as a result of fathers' focus on physical activites, resulting in chilren becoming more physically active.

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I'm thinking about recording a video of me assessing AI's Task 1 report, supposedly Band 9.0, so what do you think ?

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1️⃣ It is not only the individuals that are adversely affected by the lack of social interaction; it is also the society that becomes less conhesive.

2️⃣ It is not only technological advancements that will become instrumental in the future; it is also AI that will play a fundamental role in shaping society.

3️⃣ It is not only crafts children should master; it is also personality traits, such as discipline, determination, and composure, that they need to acquire.

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The chart compares salaries of workers employed in 5 different sectors in 2009, measured in pounds.

Overall, salary levels varied widely across sectors, with Finance being the one where workers outearned their counterparts in any other sector at all salary levels. This was a clear contrast to Hospitality, which offered the lowest maximum and average pay. Similarly, Construction recorded the smallest pay rate at the minimum salary level.

Of all the sectors, Finance stood out as having the highest maximum salary of 8850. This was almost twice as much as that in Transportation, where the figure was at 4580. Even lower salaries were seen in Manufacturing (3500) and Construction (3100), with Hospitality at the lowest end of the spectrum at a low of 2900.

Identical patterns were observed in average salaries. In particular, Finance was the leader at 5225, a figure nearly double that for second-ranked Transportation at 2712. Manufacturing and Construction again trailed notably behind, at 2215 and 1945, and Hospitality ranked last at 1895, substantially less than the amount Finance workers earned.

Minimum salaries, unlike those two, recorded less significant salary gaps. While Finance offered the largest salary of 1600, Manufacturing came next at 930, followed closely by Hospitality at 890. At 843, Transportation was the second lowest in terms of minimum wages, just above Construction's 790, the least amount of money registered in 2009.


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The table provides a breakdown of how much tax contributed to GDP in five nations from 1975 to 2005, at 10-year intervals, measured in percentage points.

Overall, tax became a more significant contributor to GDP in all countries over the period, especially Sweden, where it accounted for the largest portion of GDP. This was in contrast to the USA, a country that recorded the least pronounced increase.

Over the time frame between 1975 and 1985, Sweden stood out as the country with the highest tax contribution of 46% and 47% in the respective years. The growth, however, was the least marked in the USA: its percentage had climbed marginally yet gradually from 25.1% to 25.4% by 1985.

While Korea and Japan had nearly identical but comparably low figures, 15.1% and 15%, respectively, in 1975, they saw a rise of varying degrees in 1985; the former reached 27%, whereas the latter witnessed a 1-percent increase. The only country to experience a decline was Turkey, and it fell slightly from 16.4% in 1975 to 15% a decade later.

After a series of increments in tax contribution, all the nations had reached their highest figures by the final year. Sweden peaked at 70.1% (the largest figure on the graph), followed distantly behind by Japan at 32.1%. Unlike these two, the remaining countries recorded substantially smaller gaps between each other, as they went up to almost the same proportion, 27.4%, with Korea lagging behind negligibly.


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