It was predicted that in the 21st century people will have more leisure time than never before because of the improvements of technology.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
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To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
In an era defined by technological advancements, experts anticipated that people today would be more occupied with leisure time activities due to enhancements in technologies. Although this view seems reasonable in terms of time efficiency, it is largely a misconception due to increasingly frequent interactions with technologies and today’s increasingly ambitious career goals, which is why I mostly disagree with the notion.
The cutting-edge technologies people use today indeed help with spending time more productively. While at work or home, people use a wide range of devices, from computers and AI assistants to vacuum cleaners and toasters, which effectively reduces time spent on redundant tasks, such as daily reports and household chores. With such efficiency, people seemingly have more spare time for activities like climbing, painting or dancing, to name a few, whereas in the past, people used to allocate a significant part of their day to the repetitive and tedious activities at their workplaces and home.
This view, however compelling it may appear, is true only on a surface level. This is simply because smartphones, videogames, and online communication have become so widespread and actively engaged with that they often replace downtime activities. Instead of attending a gym or reading books, many nowadays spend excessive time on their devices - the reality that contrasts sharply with the forecasts for the 21st century. Such excessive screen time, popular in numerous countries, is common not only among children but also adults and seniors.
Equally preoccupying are career pursuits in today’s ever-competitive job landscape. Because many workplace operations these days are executed by AI assistants and the competition on the job market is increasingly stiff, more workers devote their free time to attend training sessions and, as a result, improve their professional expertise. This situation is particularly salient in industries like law enforcement and medicine where multi-faceted qualifications are a prerequisite for career progression.
In conclusion, while the development of technology partly justifies what was expected from the 21st century, the reality diverges from this dramatically, since more regular day-to-day interactions with modern devices and career advancements often involve much of free time people have today. For these reasons, I support this stance to a large degree.
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- the reality that contrasts sharply with the forecasts for the 21st century.
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It was predicted that in the 21st century people will have more leisure time than never before because of the improvements of technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? In an era defined by technological advancements, experts anticipated that…
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B2 - rebuttal (debunking counter-argument)
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The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer goods.
Do you agree or disagree?
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Do you agree or disagree?
The propensity to replicate sartorial as well as other consumer choices is one area where human mimicry is pronounced. Given socio-economic factors that account for this phenomenon, I fully support the view in question.
Social conformity is one powerful driver that lures millions into imitative behavior. Today, the choice of outfits is an essential element signalling one’s values, social status and culture, so to blend into a community, a person needs to imitate the lifestyle and taste in clothing of that social circle. In today’s social landscape contoured by the ever-prevalent desire to seek authenticity and uniqueness, conforming to clothing trends and the prescribed way of life may be fundamental in establishing and maintaining cohesive relationships with neighbors and friends alike. A pertinent case in point is Uzbekistan, a country where adhering to national fashion patterns provides a person with the advantage of smooth interactions and almost immediate social acceptance.
Economic gaps are another catalyst. While upper social classes are well-positioned to wear branded and luxury clothing items, cars and similar goods, ordinary people have to opt for mass produced clothes, cars, appliances and the like. This divide is a fundamental pillar of mimetic patterns among consumers, regardless of industry, country or culture. From China to the USA, the working class, let alone people below the poverty line, is attracted to identical fashion trends, such as jeans and shirts produced by Zara or H&M, for instance, because of their affordability. This is a stark contrast to the elite whose attire is more sophisticated and hence unique, with Zegna and Brunello, two high-profile clothing brands, being the primary examples.
In conclusion, because today’s architecture of fashionable consumption is shifting toward socially valorized items, as are other consumer goods, and becoming ever more expensive for ordinary people to afford, it fosters mimetic choices. For these core reasons, I completely agree with this notion.
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The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer goods. Do you agree or disagree? The propensity to replicate sartorial as well as other consumer choices is one area where human mimicry…
This topic was as hard as realizing Chimaev lost to Strickland. That's why I used some articles, yet otherwise, I'd be looking at the screen like I did not know Conor would ever be fight again. But you know, things are happening and it's wild to see all of this
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The bar graph illustrates how many jobs there were in a tourism-oriented industry in a city located in the UK from 1989 to 2009.
Overall, workforce in restaurants expanded over the years, despite a drop at the end, while that in hotels saw a fluctuation and rebounded to the original size. Sport/leisure followed a downward trend, as did travel and tour.
Focusing on higher figures first, the number of jobs in restaurants rose consistently from around 1,100 in 1989 to a chart high of 1,600 in 2004, followed by a notable decline to the final 1,300. Hotels started the period at about 1,050, a number that peaked at 1,400 in 1994, the only year when this category topped the list. Then, the figure had decreased gradually to its 1989 level by the end, ranking second again.
As for the remaining areas of employment, sport/leisure had an initial figure of nearly 900, which witnessed a decrease of 200 in 1994. After that, this number grew sharply to its highest at roughly 1,050, before steadily falling to its 1994 point. Last on the list, travel and tour stood at a low of 800 in 1989, after which there was an increase to a high of just above 1,000 in 1994 and a series of decrements to 400, the lowest on the chart, in 2009.
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The bar graph illustrates how many jobs there were in a tourism-oriented industry in a city located in the UK from 1989 to 2009. Overall, workforce in restaurants expanded over the years, despite a drop at the end, while that in hotels saw a fluctuation…
tourist-oriented, workforce expanded, rebounded to its original size, areas of employment - nice topical range
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The bar graph illustrates how many jobs there were in a tourism-oriented industry in a city located in the UK from 1989 to 2009. Overall, workforce in restaurants expanded over the years, despite a drop at the end, while that in hotels saw a fluctuation…
as did... - inversion
a number......, the only year..... - chained apposition
last on the list - adverbial fronting
a number......, the only year..... - chained apposition
last on the list - adverbial fronting
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