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The line compares the proportion of people of different ages going to the cinema from 1978 to 2008. Overall, visiting the cinema was much more common in the two youngest age ranges than in the old ones, with the patterns of change being virtually identical across the age groups. In particular, despite a dip in the first half of the timeframe, all the age brackets saw a gradual recovery in the second half.

14-24-year-olds and 25-34-year-olds, while ranking first and second on the list, recorded similar decreases from the initial 90% (an all-time high) and 80%, respectively, to roughly 75% and 60% in 1978. By 1998, both figures had gone up, with the former rebounding to its original point and the latter rising by 10%. Remaining unaltered in the following 5 years, these shares then witnessed a slight drop, albeit of varying levels: cinema-goers aged 14-24 saw a final decline to 80% (10% lower than the 1978 level), while their 25-34-year-old counterparts experienced a less notable to 65% (a 15-percent drop over the timespan).

The other two age classes also showed similar trajectories. In 1978, as many as 60% of adult cinema visitors were recorded, compared to seniors at 50 and above standing at a mere 40%. There was a 20-percent fall in both figures in 1988, which then was followed by a recovery to the initial level in 1998 and a period of stability untill 2003. From that year on, the two percentages followed different trends, as cinema attendance dwindled to 50% among the middle-aged adults. This was in stark contrast to the older cinema attendees, who caught up with the 35-39 age category at the end.


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Overall, European and African suppliers remained the principal drug suppliers, in stark contrast to their South American counterparts. While two bigger drug providers, namely Europe and Africa as well as North America, experienced a decline in figure, South America witnessed a dip yet rebounded at the end. Asia, however, was the only drug manufacturer to have seen a steady upward.


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βœ… drug output/production
βœ… contribution to the drug supply
βœ… supplied X% of drugs
βœ… a drug provision of X%
βœ… produced X% of the global drug output
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The figure dropped by 10 percent, equating to 500.000 adults βœ…

Projections suggest that this number will halve by the 2040s
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The line chart compares how much time it took for 4 different car producers in the USA to manufacture a car from 1998 to 2002. Overall, three out of four car manufacturers spent progressively less time on car production over the years, with the reduction being the most pronounced for Nissan, and the least so for DC. It was Ford, however, that followed an upward trend in the time spent manufacturing a car.

Of the car producers experiencing downward patterns, Nissan stood out as recording a chart high of roughly 37 hours per vehicle in 1998. By 2000, this number had plummeted to around 24 hours, further declining, yet less rapidly, to its lowest at nearly 21 hours by the end. This marked the shortest production period among the producers as well as the sharpest drop of 16 hours. A similar but less notable decrease was seen in GM, which saw a steady falling trajectory from its initial 32 hours to the final nearly 24 hours - three-fourths of the original figure.

With DC, the third category with an improvement in car production time, the trend was even more gradual. After the initial slight drop of about 2 hours to 30 hours in 1999, the figure for this manufacturer remained unaltered for the ensuing 2 years, after which there was another 2-hour decline to 28 hours, the highest figure as of 2002. The only car producer to have followed an increase was Ford; it is this manufacturer which witnessed no change at a low of approximately 25 hours until 1999, when the number began gradually climbing to its peak of 27 hours. This was followed by a negligible fall, so the figure finished the span at 25 hours.


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The bar graph compares how much renewable energy was generated in 3 diffrent years. Overall, Australia and Sweden, two countries with the least significant changes, registered a considerably lower output of renewable energy in comparison to Iceland, which remained at the top of the list in all the years, and Turkey.

Iceland, the leading country in renewable energy output, recorded a high of around 45%, closely followed by Turkey, the second largest renewable energy producer, at 35%. 13 years later, however, the gap between these widened significantly. Iceland's renewable energy supply surged to a chart high of 70%, substantially higher than that of the
Eastern country at just over 30%.

The remaining countries came at the other end of the spectrum. In particular, Austria declined in the contribution of renewable energy to the total supply, albeit to the smallest extent, with its figure roughly halving to the lowest at 5% by 2010. Contrary to this downward trend, Sweden's trajectory was rising, though neglig
Ibly, reaching 10% by the end, up from the initial nearly 6%.


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Many employers are employing people with good social skills as well as good qualifications.

Do you agree or disagree that good social skill
s are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job ?

In an era marked by an ever-competitive job landscape, employers are leaning more towards hiring workers with developed interpersonal skills and strong qualifications. Given the edge the combination of these skills offers, I support the idea that soft skills are as important as qualifications to professional success.

Admittedly, being professionally qualified for a job is a fundamental pillar of success. This is simply because in-depth knowledge of job essentials and profound expertise in the relevant area of employment equip one with imperative tools to understand nuances, dynamics and multi-faceted nature of their specialty, forming a set of assets that aid them in gaining career promotion and salary rises. If, for instance, Andrew Huberman, a scientist renowned worldwide thanks to his deep understanding of neuroscience, had not held such valuable qualifications in his field of specialty, he would not have been employed by Stanford University, an institution that is ranked in the top 5 among the best universities in the world. However compelling this view may sound, this notion overlooks the significance of soft skills that play an equally crucial role in professional accomplishments, even in those of Andrew Huberman.

One undeniable reason for that is higher group cohesion that social skills facilitate. Working in an office involves multiple daily interactions with colleagues and other co-workers alike, so being able to persuade, listen and show compassion to the team would create a highly cohesive working environment. Indeed, it is this atmosphere that helps workers to meet deadlines in a timely manner, execute daily tasks more efficiently and thus perform better. For this reason, companies like Apple and Facebook place huge importance not only on professional expertise a job applicant possesses but also on their interpersonal abilities.

On a managerial level, communicative and easy-going employees aid managers in being more efficient. With the ability to understand co-workers and find a common ground to resolve a conflict on their own, such employees do not often turn to their managers to complain about misunderstandings with their colleagues. This, unlike a workplace where workers make daily complaints and therefore require managers' intervention regularly, helps managers focus on more important aspects of their jobs, from monitoring workers' performance to checking project deadlines.

In conclusion, although I admit that qualifications are a powerful driver of professional growth, I believe that having interpersonal skills is just as important for two key reasons. One is a more cohesive professional environment, while the other is more efficient management in such environments.
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It was predicted that in the 21st century people will have more leisure time than never before because of the improvements of technology.

To what extent do you agree or disagree ?


In an era defined by technological advancements, experts anticipated that people today would be more occupied with leisure time activities due to enhancements in technologies. Although this view seems reasonable in terms of time efficiency, it is largely a misconception due to increasingly frequent interactions with technologies and today’s increasingly ambitious career goals, which is why I mostly disagree with the notion.

The cutting-edge technologies people use today indeed help with spending time more productively. While at work or home, people use a wide range of devices, from computers and AI assistants to vacuum cleaners and toasters, which effectively reduces time spent on redundant tasks, such as daily reports and household chores. With such efficiency, people seemingly have more spare time for activities like climbing, painting or dancing, to name a few, whereas in the past, people used to allocate a significant part of their day to the repetitive and tedious activities at their workplaces and home.

This view, however compelling it may appear, is true only on a surface level. This is simply because smartphones, videogames, and online communication have become so widespread and actively engaged with that they often replace downtime activities. Instead of attending a gym or reading books, many nowadays spend excessive time on their devices - the reality that contrasts sharply with the forecasts for the 21st century. Such excessive screen time, popular in numerous countries, is common not only among children but also adults and seniors.

Equally preoccupying are career pursuits in today’s ever-competitive job landscape. Because many workplace operations these days are executed by AI assistants and the competition on the job market is increasingly stiff, more workers devote their free time to attend training sessions and, as a result, improve their professional expertise. This situation is particularly salient in industries like law enforcement and medicine where multi-faceted qualifications are a prerequisite for career progression.

In conclusion, while the development of technology partly justifies what was expected from the 21st century, the reality diverges from this dramatically, since more regular day-to-day interactions with modern devices and career advancements often involve much of free time people have today. For these reasons, I support this stance to a large degree.



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The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer goods.

Do you agree or disagree?


The propensity to replicate sartorial as well as other consumer choices is one area where human mimicry is pronounced. Given socio-economic factors that account for this phenomenon, I fully support the view in question.

Social conformity is one powerful driver that lures millions into imitative behavior. Today, the choice of outfits is an essential element signalling one’s values, social status and culture, so to blend into a community, a person needs to imitate the lifestyle and taste in clothing of that social circle. In today’s social landscape contoured by the ever-prevalent desire to seek authenticity and uniqueness, conforming to clothing trends and the prescribed way of life may be fundamental in establishing and maintaining cohesive relationships with neighbors and friends alike. A pertinent case in point is Uzbekistan, a country where adhering to national fashion patterns provides a person with the advantage of smooth interactions and almost immediate social acceptance.

Economic gaps are another catalyst. While upper social classes are well-positioned to wear branded and luxury clothing items, cars and similar goods, ordinary people have to opt for mass produced clothes, cars, appliances and the like. This divide is a fundamental pillar of mimetic patterns among consumers, regardless of industry, country or culture. From China to the USA, the working class, let alone people below the poverty line, is attracted to identical fashion trends, such as jeans and shirts produced by Zara or H&M, for instance, because of their affordability. This is a stark contrast to the elite whose attire is more sophisticated and hence unique, with Zegna and Brunello, two high-profile clothing brands, being the primary examples.

In conclusion, because today’s architecture of fashionable consumption is shifting toward socially valorized items, as are other consumer goods, and becoming ever more expensive for ordinary people to afford, it fosters mimetic choices. For these core reasons, I completely agree with this notion.


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The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer goods. Do you agree or disagree? The propensity to replicate sartorial as well as other consumer choices is one area where human mimicry…
This topic was as hard as realizing Chimaev lost to Strickland. That's why I used some articles, yet otherwise, I'd be looking at the screen like I did not know Conor would ever be fight again. But you know, things are happening and it's wild to see all of this
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C/C - 9.0, largely because everything in the overview has been further explained in detail in the bodies.

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