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πŸ“£ Just a quick reminder

➑️ 10 lessons of the Reading Marathon are over and soon, I'll drop the feedback on it with the progress the participants have made so far

➑️ 2 weeks later, I'll open the admission for a Writing Marathon covering 30 lessons under 3 teachers' in conduct

➑️ This Sunday, I have only 1 slot left for the paid Speaking Mock at a discounted price of $25

➑️ This week, I'll drop the recordings of two Writing Checking sessions


▢️ Remember: The more reactions this post gets, the more likely I'll run 4-5 free Speaking mocks
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The chart compares the percentages of tourists using different transport means in New Zealand, in the year 2004. In general, while preferences for transport means were similar among British, German and Australian tourists, it was not the case for Japanese and Korean travellers. For the former group, travelling by coach was the most common, with ferries being the least popular choice across all the groups.


➑️ It was not the case for - It does not apply to/It's not true for
➑️ For the former group - Regarding tourists from Britain, Germany, and Australia

🚨 The difference is in the 'sophisticated control of lexis' (L/R - 9.0)

#vocab
#task1
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Statistics for British, German and Australian travellers showed that, in comparison to other means, coaches were far more widely used, with the figures at a whopping 58%, 55% and exactly 50%, respectively. Air transport came next, a transport category which roughly 42% of the British and Germans visiting the country opted for, as did a mere 25% of Australians. Third on the list, cars were even less commonly used, and the proportions stood at 35% for Germans, nearly 29% for the British, and a low of 20% for Australians. Ferry use, however, was the least significant, as the percentages did not surpass the 20-percent mark.


🚨 G/A 9.0 - uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and control

#grammar
#task1
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The illustration outlines how aluminum cans are recycled in a facility. This process starts out with initial cleaning, after which the cans proceed to a series of refining procedures to be re-formed for consumer use afterwards. Notably, while most steps are fully machinery-based, several of them are heavily reliant on human labor.


#task1
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Hard Task 1, bar.pdf
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β˜„οΈ Difficulty: hard
β˜„οΈ Score: 8.0+

βœ”οΈ Structures and chunks to learn ? - Yes
βœ”οΈ Examples in use ? - Yes
βœ”οΈ Overview, Body explanation ? - Yes

🚩 By the end of this month, I'll announce the start of an INTENSIVE WRITING COURSE, where you will find about 20 of such files.


#task1
#vocab
#under_250_masterpiece
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Forwarded from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
The course will be very simple and highly productive:

βž–Teachers: Me (W-8.5), Dilshod (T2 - 9/9/9/9), Mirxaydar (T2 - 9/9/9/8)
βž–Duration: 30 days
βž–Lessons: daily
βž–Language: English (B2-C1)


How to join ?

β€’ wait for the announcement of the course
β€’ prove your english is at least B2
β€’ possess a decent level of emotional regulation
β€’ be free for 3-5 hours every day
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⚑️ Vocab note. Take notes and if you write a body using these, I might check your work in the comment section!

#vocab
#task1
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Unlike these tourists, those from Japan and Korea showed no clear patterns. In particular, air transport was the most used by Japanese travellers, at over a whopping 50%, compared to Korean travellers at around 42% (matching the figure for their German and British counterparts). Coaches ranked second for the Japanese (at just below 50%) and third for the Korean (at well below 40%). By contrast, Korean tourists relied on cars to travel in Zealand much more than those from Japan: the former's proportion stood at a high of nearly 48%, twice as high as that of the latter. Finally, ferries were consistently much less preferred, with less than one in ten tourists from both groups travelling by this means.


C/C (9.0) - Cohesion is used in such a way that it very rarely attracts attention.

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Forwarded from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
Writing.pdf
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🚨 Please, read this first and only then contact me

#writing_marathon_1
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Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?


Private life of famous people is a matter of contention. So, some claim that these people should not make complaints on the intrusion of the public into their privacy, since they earn a decent livelihood. While I largely agree with such a notion, I also acknowledge that the extent of the intrusion depends on how transparent the life of a celebrity is.

One reason why these big names should not complain is that they may have exposed their followers to their own private matters. While streaming a podcast or being interviewed, well-known media actors often reveal details about their own life, whether it be their family issues or daily routines, especially if such information is contradictory. With such controversy, views are very likely to elevate, and this is where advertisements, such as celebrity endorsements, come into play. This goes to show how a popular person deliberately shares their personal matters with the public, often generating huge sums yet losing privacy at the same time.

This, however, is not always the case. There are some bloggers and influencers whose personal life has been unexposed as they have stringent policies, like no family photos or no online streams at home. Unlike their more transparent counterparts, they experience less encroachment on their life. Khabib Nurmagomedov, a former Mixed Martial Artist whose media presence now allows him to make profits on promoting products and services, has established his media profiles with strict schedules and without mentioning any members of his family.

In conclusion, it is apparent that, because people heavily present on media are paid massive sums, they should not turn to complaining about the public encroaching on their private life. I, to a large degree, support this view because these popular figures post on social media private matters on purpose, yet those who remain more confidential do not complain.


8/8/8/8 βœ”οΈ

#exam
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Study Plan.pdf
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🚨 2-month plan to jump by 1.5-2.0 points!

βœ”οΈ Detailed explanation
βœ”οΈ Realistic study schedule
βœ”οΈ For users from Intermediate to Advanced

P.S. Save, stick to and then leave your comments on the effectiveness.

#writing
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The table present a comparison of men and women in terms of employment statistics for six economic sectors in two years: 1993 and 2003. Over this decade, in most industries, there was an upward trajectory of various patterns recorded for both genders, with IT and service emerging as the major employers for both genders. Of all the sectors studied, IT and farming were the ones where the gender gap was the most pronounced, yet it was not the case for commerce and manufacturing.

Looking at the widest gender differences, in the IT industry, a whopping 80% of the total workforce was made up of menβ€”4 times as many as women. By 2003, however, this gap narrowed notably, with 70% of IT specialists being men in comparison to women at a mere 30%. A similar male-to-female ratio was seen in farming: in the former year, men accounted for three-fourth, which was three time the figure for their female counterparts; a decade later, men a saw a slight drop of 10% to 65%, and women witnessed a rise of the same margin to 35%, marking a less pronounced gender gap.


Drop your version of B2 in the comment section ⬇️⬇️

#task1
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Assalamu alaikum, everybody. I hope you are all doing well.

This is not a post about IELTS. Those of you who have been following my channel for a long time know that I am usually very careful about what I post here. This time around, it is a charity post, and it concerns the niece of one of my former colleagues.

I was recently informed that she (her name is Muslima) has been diagnosed with cancer at a very young age. It is a tragic situation, but there is still hope because treatment is possible. Unfortunately, the treatment is very expensive, and her family is currently trying to collect the necessary funds from different sources.

I would also like to help, and that is why I am sharing this message here. To make sure everything is transparent and credible, I have attached pictures and documentation showing that this is a real case.

The family has already traveled to Turkey because they are planning to continue the treatment there. They have also provided documentation related to the diagnosis and medical payments to confirm the situation.

Of course, any donation can help β€” even a single dollar. When many people contribute together, it can truly make a difference and help save this young girl’s life. Any support is greatly appreciated. Thank you for your attention, and thank you regardless of whether you decide to donate or not.

Cards for donations:

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Have a good day.
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Forwarded from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
The picture provides a comparison between two plans. Overall, while both plans share a set of similarities, largely identical office equipment, the arrangement differs widely. In particular, Plan A has a more spacious and simpler layout, in contrast to Plan B, which offers a more compact yet functional arrangement.

One key difference between the plans is the front section. Specifically, there is a presenter's chair, along with a computer and printer situated at the entrance. Also, all of these are next to a white board located near the entrance in Plan A, yet in Plan B, these are set in a more central location, parallel to each other. Unlike the former plan, where the morning tea area is at the rear section, the latter features this area on the right-hand side of the entrance.

Another distinction is the seating arrangement. In Plan A, tables, while occupying the centre of the room, form a U-shaped layout and a total of 10 chairs are positioned around the sides. In comparison, in Plan B, the tables are placed farther from the center and organized in clusters, two of which have a set of 3 chairs on both sides. Thus, this allows the room to accommodate more seats.


➑️Score: 8/9/8/8 πŸ”₯

#new_tape_task1
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As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems.

What are these problems for young people living in cities?
What are possible solutions for these problems?


There is a correlation between the growth of metropolitan cities and the problems they face. Indeed, this expansion affects the young immensely, resulting in not only hyper-competitive job market but also heightened crime rates. To counteract these, a more balanced distribution of resources should be established.

With ever-growing large cities, the competition in the job market is bound to become stiff, especially for young workers. This is because they cannot compete with their more experienced and skilled counterparts, since in a market where job requirements are stringent, only experts can survive. Over time, this may lead to higher levels of unemployment and limit social mobility for the less experienced. Another by-product is the rise of crime. When left without a chance to carve out a lucrative career, unlike others who have more working expertise, young employees are more likely to turn to criminal means of making a livelihood. Such big cities as London and New York, among others, are pertinent examples, with both having a vast territory as well as alarming crime rates.

These issues, however worrying they seem, can be ameliorated with government regulations. In fact, when the development of rural areas is as much prioritized as that of cities, the latter are less likely to grow at an unprecedented rate, as they do today in multiple countries. The number of businesses and factories, and even the infrastructure, would be more evenly distributed and developed, deterring disproportionate growth of urban centres. Compared to other countermeasures, from imposing limits on the population boom in cities to moving residents coercively to the countryside, these shifts are more inclusive of any vulnerable groups yet require a concerted effort by both the public and government. That is, these two parties should co-operate at national and grassroots levels by establishing two-way communication to ensure the divide between cities and rural places shrinks.

In summary, city sprawl and the issues it entails may impact the lives of young people adversely, bringing about stiff competition in the labor market and exacerbating crime problems. Yet, minimising these problems would involve collaborative action taken by both communities and authorities to allocate resources evenly across urban and rural areas.


#essay
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The diagram outlines the steps whereby a water filter is assembled. This process is dual-phased, starting out with layering materials, as a result of which potable water can be extracted. For this to take place, several raw materials and special equipment are required.

The initial stage involves the use of a cylindrical container, namely a drum. Once a certain amount of gravel, charcoal and sand are placed on top of each other to fill nearly half the drum, it is closed with a plastic lid and the filtration can be initiated. To this end, impure water is poured into the drum, permeating the layers that remove impuritiesβ€”a procedure that results in drinkable water.

Following this, the water flows through a pipe connected to the side outlet at the top of the drum into a barrel. There, the water is stored for some period and, with the help of a tap attached to the bottom that can be used to control the flow of water, mugs or cups can be filled with the drinkable water.


#report
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The infographics provide statistics on trade values between China and Australia from 1998 to 2004. In general, while both exports to and imports from China rose steadily, the latter was consistently greater. Notably, the only commodity not to have seen an increase was textiles, with telecommunication becoming the most imported to Australia by the end.

Import-to-export ratio stood stable during the entire timeframe. In particular, in 1998, Australia imported goods valued at 20 billion dollars, twice as much as it exported to the trading partner. Going up at a pace of 10 billion dollars a year, import values had doubled (40 billion dollars) and those of export tripled (30 billion dollars) by 2004. Despite this, a gap of 10 billion dollars in favor of imports sustained in all the years.

The breakdown of goods, meanwhile, revealed varying patterns. Over the period between 2003 and 2004, telecommunication and sports equipment witnessed the most pronounced growth of 5 billion dollars to 7 and 8 billion dollars, respectively, which placed them second and first on the list. Furniture and computers came next, two categories that, after a negligible rise, reached parity at 6 billion dollars in 2004. Clothing imports, remaining unaltered at 4 billion dollars, rounded out the list.


#report
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Course Description.pdf
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Details of the marathon!

#marathon
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The graph compares how many mvoies were made in 5 different contries between 2007 and 2009. Overall, countries A and B remained principal film producers, outstripping the rest of countries by a wide margin. While changes in almost all the nations were negligible, country B was the exception that recorded the only pronounced rise.


In this case, the combination of general and topical lexis deserves attention βœ…

#task1
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