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G/A 📤 (compound adjective)
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Topic sentence: The remainder of countries recorded below-average numbersBody: This growth, however, was not sustained, with 2003-2004 years seeing below-average numbers.#novelty
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Correlative conjunction (not only...but also) at its finest❗️
😎 You need it for 2 beautiful reasons. One is G/A, and the other is that your examiner will likely to call you asking about your grammar teacher.
✔️ Save, learn, practice, get 7.0+ in G/A and drop photos of your score breakdown in the comment section!
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1️⃣ Following your instructor's advice not only helps you become a better reader; it also gives you charm and sharpens your discipline.2️⃣ Following your instructor's advice not only helps you become a better reader—it also gives you charm and sharpens your discipline.3️⃣ Following your instructor's advice not only helps you become a better reader, but it also gives you charm and sharpens your discipline.
#novelty
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L/R—7.0 vs L/R—9.0
1️⃣ 7.0 - The policy also offers social benefits. (skillful use of uncommon lexis is not shown)
2️⃣ 9.0 - Co-benefits of the policy, especially social ones, are no less important. (In this case, sophisticated control of lexis is evident)
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...yet often-overlooked.... (a parenthetical expression)
1️⃣ Use it when the information you want to add is not essential, but only commentary.
❗️ In this case, I can take the expression out and the sentence still remains meaningful and complete.
2️⃣ 1-2 instances of such an expression do serve as an example of your Grammar Range
❗️ Meaning is the same but control of grammatical features is way more sophisticated
#novelty
#grammar
Another, yet often-overstated, benefit to using AI in education is the time efficiency.
Another benefit of X that people often cite is...❌
Another, and also often-cited, benefit of X is..✔️
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#grammar
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Ellipsis at its peak....
1️⃣ G/A - punctuation is accurately used ✔️
2️⃣ L/R - lexical range is flexible ✔️
🌐 Source: Cambridge Trainer 2
📌 You need such structures to show variety in both L/R and G/A in Task 1.
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#grammar
➖ The structure: In X, less/more than Z% of population/workers/respondents did/worked/slept; today, almost one in two/three in four is.
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In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research.
Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
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Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
One of the trends that has recently occurred is that the private sector now is funding and holding much of scientific research. Despite economic benefits this development offers, I believe the downsides of it are more significant, from both societal and scientific standpoints.
Private funding does lead to financial gains, however. Because companies, be it food chains or canneries, tend to prioritize efficiency gains, thus shifting focus of scientific investigations towards either streamlining production or introducing innovative technology. Such a shift can not only bolster revenues, but also reduce operation costs. On top of that, private scientific research sometimes draws more investments, as a result of which more experiments, top-notch technology and, no less importantly, high-profile experts can be involved too. These factors alone boost both productivity and efficiency of the research, yielding tangible results, like the formula for Coca Cola drinks.
Yet, I assert that the demerits are greater, for example when viewed through a social lens. When public is ill-informed on scientific breakthroughs, from nanotechnology to newly-found particles, education and overall scientific development in such a nation is likely to face hindrances. Without the laser technology, specifically, the medical industry would be challenged to proceed surgeries with as much precision—thus proving the importance of private corporations sharing science knowledge. Commercialization is another threat; it is this factor that drives company's sales when an invention is applied in production, but it also confines the scope of the research. Resultantly, delays in scientific progress are to happen—and unfortunately so.
To conclude, although there are some positives of science being sponsored by non-government companies, my conviction is that the negative aspects—both social and scientific—are more considerable.
#essay
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#tips
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The chart describes a breakdown of labor force and management, with units measured in percentage points.
In short, in Egypt, women represented the smallest portion of the workforce, compared to other countries listed. This, however, was not the case in Japan, where the opposite was true, while Australia and the USA top the list as women there comprised the largest fraction in the chart.
The share of female workers in Japan was highest, at 48%, followed closely by the USA (at 46%), Sri Lanka and Australia (both of which stood at 42%). Egypt, a country where only one in five worker is a woman, rounded out the list.
Yet much lower proportions for women were seen in managerial positions. The USA and Australia reported to have 43% of women in such positions, almost three times the figure for Japan (17%). In Egypt, though, the percentage was even smaller—one-fourth that of the leading two nations (12%), but it was female managers in Sri Lanka that recorded a chart low of 9%.
#report
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Fewer young people read books nowadays.
What are the causes of this?
What are the effects?
There is an issue prevalent in many countries—a decreasing number of the young reading books. This is largely attributable to modern reading habits and shifts in values, with potential ramifications ranging from an illiterate generation to the disappearance of reading hubs, so-called reading clubs.
Of the major reasons behind the falling number of young readers, current reading trends are the most common. Unfortunately, young readers are now more attracted to e-books, online blogs and articles and, as a result, conventional books are falling out of favor—even more so in countries, such as Uzbekistan and Kazakhstan, that have just seen their reading culture transform. Such changes are thus a byproduct of modern life, however sad it seems. The other reason, newly-adopted values, is no less important; because school and university students have to be digitally literate, they are compelled to be exposed to computer technology—so they can secure a well-paid job or achieve great academic heights, for example. Had they been given a choice to remain with job requirements of the past, which did not encompass computer literacy, reading textbooks would have definitely been more commonplace.
Shedding light on repercussions of this, now-unpopular reading print books, a less literate generation seems to be the most concerning. With textbooks left behind and habits shifted towards entertainment, binge scrolling, and video games—three of the most widespread pastime activities of the 21st century—becoming less educated is just a matter of time. American teenagers, who used to be performing well and having a good grasp of history in the early 2000s, cannot now boast the same erudition. Asian young people are not outliers too: they have also been subject to modernization of their leisure time spending habits, ones that used to be devoted to reading novels and, to a lesser extent, ancient history. If these implications are to persist, reading hubs are also at danger. These places, where young readers used to gather to share ideas, discuss scenes in books and therefore develop their reading skills, are likely to become much less often visited, or in extreme cases even empty —a mutual drawback for both the visitors themselves and the hubs.
In summary, there are two root causes explaining why readers numbers' are on the decline: technological advancements and digital literacy. Accompanying this development, however, are less knowledgeable young people and the prospective shut-down of reading hubs.
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Extract 1:
🔠 T/A—a very consistent way to compare and, at the same time, summarize.
🔠 C/C—from the largest to the smallest. Makes a lot of sense
🔠 L/R—a very natural and flexible use of lexis
🔠 G/A—4 different types of clauses in the same, not bulky sentence. All are put together accurately without impeding communication.
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#novelty
According to the census, 44.7 million Americans are currently Hispanic, more than five times higher than in 1966, while the Asian population is as large as 14.3 million, a ten-fold increase over the 1966 level.
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Human activity has a negative impact on plants and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can still be taken to improve this situation.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions on the environmental protection are divided: some contend we are late to take any action; others disagree, claiming there are still some effective approaches, which would ameliorate the issue. I, though, firmly believe the question is too individual and both parties' views are valid.
Opponents of environmental preservation may say that, given the magnitude of climate change, habitat fragmentation and other problems alike, it is worthless to put any effort into it. Weather patterns have become more unpredictable and, even worse, current technological can not allow for tackling it, nor can we persuade countries with abundant natural parks to designate them for endangered animals. This is much as in the case of the Aral Desert, previously known as the Aral Sea, that locals attempted to re-fill with water again by channeling it from a Russian river. Yet ultimately, Russian authorities declined the offer. Such a list of unsolvable challenges may go beyond these problems—to, for example, deforestation or, sadly, animal extinction.
This view, however sensible it seems, is as significant as that of supporters of environmental protection. They often put forward an idea of funding de-extinction projects to bring back some valuable species, like the Thylacine, which would probably reduce the dominance of Dingo in Australia. Channeling some funds to nations where national parks are extensive and can further be equipped with all the necessary equipment to accommodate more animals can be of great help too. In return to such a favor, these countries would receive financial rewards or gain more popularity to establish better international relations, an aspect that serves as a cornerstone of international trade, for instance.
Seen as positive as they are, the two arguments above are, however, subjective, for none of them can address worldwide issues, but only regional ones. I am, therefore, of the stance that in some cases, like habitat destruction, it is feasible, and also morally advisable, to be proactive; yet if it is not generally viable, as it is with climate change, being skeptical of protecting environment today is understandable too. So, the question of whether to put forth the preservation of nature remains case-specific, thus requiring a different set of criteria to consider across cases.
In conclusion, both those who are in support and in opposition of taking measures to counteract environmental problems have valid reasons to prove their stance. My conviction is that the case can't be generalized, because of which separately considered criteria would be necessary.
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The charts show values of trade between Australia and three nations from 2002 to 2005. Of these nations, China was the leader in terms of trade value, with the USA and Japan coming next, in that order. There were also rising trends recorded in each country, though that in China saw some fluctuation, and that in Japan was the most pronounced. Notably, export figures were larger than those for imports for all the trade partners but China.
Regarding trade with China, Australia registered an import value of roughly 4.5 units in 2002, a figure that dropped noticeably to 2.5 the following year, before recovering to the original point in 2005. Conversely, export rates followed a growing trajectory and went up from 2.5 to 4.5 units initially. Yet by the end there was a dip to below 2 units, which was followed by the final rise to 3.5.
Unlike in this country, trade values in the western country were not as varying. Rather, import and export experienced a steady growth of around half a unit to 2.7 units of exported goods and 2.2 units of imported ones. Yet there was also a gap of roughly 0.7—in favor of exports—between these two categories.
Trade with the other eastern nation showed somewhat similar patterns. Export, the figure for which stood at 2.5 units in 2005 that is 2.5 times the initial point, was again significantly larger than import that witnessed a one-unit increase to 1.75 units over the span; thus, the discrepancy between import and export sustained in this case, too.
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Many people are today using mobile (cell) phones and computers to communicate, and therefore are losing the ability to communicate with each other.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With advances in technology, the internet, instant messaging and now smartphones, there are many channels and modalities in which to interact with others. Yet this inundation of communication means has resulted in many losing their communication skills. Because of some inherent factors of online communication that limit its benefits, I believe the idea proposed is generally true.
Social media interactions, for one, are more emotionless compared to traditional face-to-face ones. This means online users, especially young ones, are more likely to have less emotional exchange, whether it be facial or physical. While such lack is not universally reported, some kids, who sit on their phones for long hours, have been seen to become less emotional and, most sadly, less communicative.
Less frequent real-life interactions do also entail a feeling of isolation. Surely, children develop digital literacy, but the price they pay for it is that they may feel left out, if they lead a home-sitting way of life. Though these young people can remain in touch with their social circles online, the physical absence of their friends is likely the catalyst of negative feelings, from depression to alienation.
In conclusion, the knock-on effects of children overusing their phones are deleterious, ranging from emotionlessness to social isolation. Based on these arguments, I contend that underage users of computers and phones are increasingly less sociable and thus less communicative.
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Band 8.0+ Series:
Bars (Import/Export)
Table (Workers)
Tables (Enrollment rates)
Bar (Means of Transport)
Bars (Precipitation)
Map (Examiner edition)
Maps (University)
Ag/Dis (communication)
Discussion (human impact)
Causes/Effects (reading books)
Advan/Disadvan (scientific research)
Advan/Disadvan (games and films)
Discussion (public health)
Ag/Dis (punishment)
Ag/Dis (punishment 2)
Ag/Dis (math; 7/9/8/9)
Discussion (uni grads)
Causes/Solutions (wasted food)
Ag/Dis (internet content; 9/9/9/9)
Discussion (sports and advertising)
Mixed (cosmetic surgery)
Ag/Dis (foreign language)
Ag/Dis (learning history)
Ag/Dis (learning history 2)
Ag/Dis (education)
Pos/Neg (International travel)
#essay
#report
#task1
Bars (Import/Export)
Table (Workers)
Tables (Enrollment rates)
Bar (Means of Transport)
Bars (Precipitation)
Map (Examiner edition)
Maps (University)
Ag/Dis (communication)
Discussion (human impact)
Causes/Effects (reading books)
Advan/Disadvan (scientific research)
Advan/Disadvan (games and films)
Discussion (public health)
Ag/Dis (punishment)
Ag/Dis (punishment 2)
Ag/Dis (math; 7/9/8/9)
Discussion (uni grads)
Causes/Solutions (wasted food)
Ag/Dis (internet content; 9/9/9/9)
Discussion (sports and advertising)
Mixed (cosmetic surgery)
Ag/Dis (foreign language)
Ag/Dis (learning history)
Ag/Dis (learning history 2)
Ag/Dis (education)
Pos/Neg (International travel)
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#report
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It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries.
Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
✔️ Estimated score: 8-9/9/9/9
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#task2
Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
With ever-increasing international connections, international travel has become more accessible. Despite repercussions of this trend, I assert that benefits, particularly economic and cultural ones, are much more significant.
Increased international travel can strain infrastructure. The higher the influx of visitors, the more likely that such facilities as hospitals, parking areas, airports and touristic destinations will be overcrowded and, potentially, overburdened. This directly affects life quality and the profile of the country as a whole, much as that of Dubai, for example.
Another by-product to consider, one that has much to do with environmental sustainability, is the deterioration of ecology. When a constantly rising number of travelers visit such places, they unintentionally yet ultimately pollute surrounding areas. In the long run, this pollution will drive the local ecosystem into setbacks. Examples in this case abound, with forested areas near Moscow standing out as the main one.
Notwithstanding the drawbacks, advantages are even more consequential, for instance economic gains. While travelling, people often make purchases, and when viewed on a national level, this contributes to the economic well-being of local businesses and communities. Samarkand and Paris, two well-known for a high level of touristic attendance cities, are pertinent cases in point, since both reap tangible monetary rewards from travellers’ purchases.
Cultural tolerance benefits too, if more and more people from various backgrounds get into contact. Bringing distinct traditions and values, travelers interact with locals, as a result of which both parties are likely to become more tolerant of each other. A Chinese senior wandering around Burj Khalifa is likely to be surprised with how kind Arabs are to the elderly—an aspect that is a mere picture of how cultural exchange bolsters tolerance.
In summary, the intensified international travel is intertwined with both positives and negatives. I hold the stance that, of these two, the former are of greater importance.
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#task2
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Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
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To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Planning for future is often considered a useless habit, so some claim it is more reasonable to shift focus onto the present. I regard this view as firmly invalid and also believe future planning has numerous benefits.
One of these advantages is well-organized career and family goals. With well-rounded plans for future, it takes much less effort to, for example, purchase a luxurious car, pay down a mortgage or aid family members financially. This, in turn, not only leads to stronger familial bonds and higher contentment levels but also cultivates discipline, a valuable trait that is highly relevant in virtually all areas of life.
Another positive is more effective decision-making. When faced with financial challenges, like how to distribute a budget so basic needs are covered and some money is saved up, people are more likely to foresee upcoming living costs and thus avoid wasting resources, such as time and money. Such foresight can also translate into better devised plans, thereby serving as a tool to effectively tackle potential obstacles, like loans or unforeseen expenses.
At a social level, laying out future plans may contribute to higher agility in face of difficulties. Because strategic plans help people remain on track and stimulate better decision-making, it is more likely that these decision-makers would also be more considerate to approach their future goals from multiple perspectives to succeed. A father would definitely seek ways to gain promotion at work if he were to cover his children's prospective college or university fees. For this, he might also turn to friends and relatives to secure a part-time job or senior management to negotiate his salary, seeking various means of income.
In conclusion, some assert planning for future has no benefits and hence a waste of time; they therefore point to present day as a better alternative to focus on. My firm conviction is that this is an invalid statement, as plans offer multiple benefits, from better-organized goals and good decision-making to higher flexibility to achieve goals.
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Let’s pull up chunks and structures
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➖ Today, there is a lot of advertising🚫 (Band 6.0-7.0)➖ In an age of consumerism➕ (Band 8.0-9.0)
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➖ Nowadays, many people stay at home everyday🚫 (Band 6.0)➖ Nowadays, many people lead reclusive habits➕ (Band 8.0-9.0)
#vocab
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