SOP Number: 1
I am a 22-year-old computer science student at the department of Electrical and Computer Engineering at the University of Tehran. As an undergraduate student who actively searched for new technologies and its applications in CS, I became interested in Artificial Intelligence (A.I.), especially Machine Learning and Cognitive Science. My future goal is to pursue my studies towards a Ph.D. which would allow me to become a great researcher in A.I., leading to a career in teaching.
When I was twelve, I was admitted into Allame Helli, which is a school for talented students and is a branch of NODET (National Organization for Developing Exceptional Talents). Years later, at this school, students were introduced to computers and I started writing simple programs which was a fulfilling experience. Soon after, I became very interested in this field and decided to study Computer Science in one of the best universities in Iran. My decision compelled me to have great determination to study for the nationwide entrance exam. I achieved an extraordinary rank of 547th among 350,000 participants and was accepted as a student of Computer Science in School of Electrical and computer Engineering in University of Tehran which is the most prestigious university in Iran.
My studies and courses at the university helped shape my future vision and research interests. When I studied the Artificial Intelligence course, it made me think how computers could act like humans. I was also given a great opportunity to work as a web developer at a company in Iran. My enthusiasm and hardworking mindset made me quite competent at my job and therefore was given major projects on the website such as setting up a Text Message System and designing an Online Game System. This job experience taught me how to overcome the challenges and presented the opportunity to teach my colleagues an iPhone programming course. It equipped me with the ability to communicate technical concepts to a diverse audience. Another project I was involved in at the university was a client-server application. It was used for supermarket delivery and then changed to an online shop. My knowledge in web development greatly improved because I enjoyed my job and spent many long hours trying and testing new and improved things. I became a professional in this field which led to quite a few good work opportunities after one year. Developing was a great experience but Computer Science is not limited only to developing. Due to my interest in the Artificial Intelligence course, which I succeeded at, I decided to write my B.Sc. thesis in this area. I covered how upgraded AI functionalities of social network websites can give recommendations to users on how to make new friends and new friends suggestions on the website.
I take satisfaction in having the ability to make a difference and have a positive impact in the world. This is why I became interested in teaching. One thing I enjoyed tutoring C++ to some of my undergraduate friends in the Electrical Department. They all ended up passing their programming course with high grades. To amplify my enjoyment I decided to become a teacher assistant for Fundamentals of Computers and Programming at the university. After that, I became a TA for Internet Engineering and Database Lab and taught web technologies, web developing languages and database. Since the summer of 2013, I have been teaching PHP, HTML and JavaScript for Web Programming in NODET.
I became a professional in web developing and had a deep knowledge of web technology. Because of this , I was given the opportunity to lecture in a seminar about web and network security. Managing directors of 50 major Iranian IT companies attended that seminar and I expanded their knowledge on web technology and improvement of current web systems.
I am a 22-year-old computer science student at the department of Electrical and Computer Engineering at the University of Tehran. As an undergraduate student who actively searched for new technologies and its applications in CS, I became interested in Artificial Intelligence (A.I.), especially Machine Learning and Cognitive Science. My future goal is to pursue my studies towards a Ph.D. which would allow me to become a great researcher in A.I., leading to a career in teaching.
When I was twelve, I was admitted into Allame Helli, which is a school for talented students and is a branch of NODET (National Organization for Developing Exceptional Talents). Years later, at this school, students were introduced to computers and I started writing simple programs which was a fulfilling experience. Soon after, I became very interested in this field and decided to study Computer Science in one of the best universities in Iran. My decision compelled me to have great determination to study for the nationwide entrance exam. I achieved an extraordinary rank of 547th among 350,000 participants and was accepted as a student of Computer Science in School of Electrical and computer Engineering in University of Tehran which is the most prestigious university in Iran.
My studies and courses at the university helped shape my future vision and research interests. When I studied the Artificial Intelligence course, it made me think how computers could act like humans. I was also given a great opportunity to work as a web developer at a company in Iran. My enthusiasm and hardworking mindset made me quite competent at my job and therefore was given major projects on the website such as setting up a Text Message System and designing an Online Game System. This job experience taught me how to overcome the challenges and presented the opportunity to teach my colleagues an iPhone programming course. It equipped me with the ability to communicate technical concepts to a diverse audience. Another project I was involved in at the university was a client-server application. It was used for supermarket delivery and then changed to an online shop. My knowledge in web development greatly improved because I enjoyed my job and spent many long hours trying and testing new and improved things. I became a professional in this field which led to quite a few good work opportunities after one year. Developing was a great experience but Computer Science is not limited only to developing. Due to my interest in the Artificial Intelligence course, which I succeeded at, I decided to write my B.Sc. thesis in this area. I covered how upgraded AI functionalities of social network websites can give recommendations to users on how to make new friends and new friends suggestions on the website.
I take satisfaction in having the ability to make a difference and have a positive impact in the world. This is why I became interested in teaching. One thing I enjoyed tutoring C++ to some of my undergraduate friends in the Electrical Department. They all ended up passing their programming course with high grades. To amplify my enjoyment I decided to become a teacher assistant for Fundamentals of Computers and Programming at the university. After that, I became a TA for Internet Engineering and Database Lab and taught web technologies, web developing languages and database. Since the summer of 2013, I have been teaching PHP, HTML and JavaScript for Web Programming in NODET.
I became a professional in web developing and had a deep knowledge of web technology. Because of this , I was given the opportunity to lecture in a seminar about web and network security. Managing directors of 50 major Iranian IT companies attended that seminar and I expanded their knowledge on web technology and improvement of current web systems.
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These experiences have led me to believe that a fulfilling and successful future lies in teaching and research, which can be achieved by high standards of education. Therefore, I have decided to apply to University of Texas at Dallas (UTD). I have searched the ongoing projects at UTD and found that they align with my research interests such as Deep Learning, Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning. I have read about pioneering works and various projects on Social Networks, Data Mining and Databases in your university and this is very stimulating and inspiring for me.
It would be a privilege to join UTD’s computer science department and attend classes knowing that your faculty members are highly reputable in the world. I am aware that attending your computer science program will require diligent work, and an energetic and unwavering mindset. I can assure you that I am absolutely motivated and ready for the challenge.
It would be a privilege to join UTD’s computer science department and attend classes knowing that your faculty members are highly reputable in the world. I am aware that attending your computer science program will require diligent work, and an energetic and unwavering mindset. I can assure you that I am absolutely motivated and ready for the challenge.
SOP Number: 2
I have always been passionate about the fundamental principles of how the world works and see that engineering has been responsible for some of the greatest innovations of mankind. It is the usage of the application of physics with engineering principles which rules the world and inventions. These foundational opinions have driven my interest to pursue a degree in Mechanical Engineering. To achieve this goal, I studied relentlessly in high school and for the nationwide university entrance exam. I was able to rank in the upper percentile in the entrance exam which made me among the best students who entered into University of Tehran’s Mechanical Engineering department.
During my undergraduate program, I took various courses which closely aligned with my research interest and dealt with heat transfer and fluid mechanics. After completing many courses, I realized how practical and essential the knowledge of optimization and computational methods is for any student who pursues new things in heat transfer or fluid mechanics. These methods are powerful instruments. After taking related courses, I was fascinated by evolutionary methods like Genetic Algorithm and other modern techniques such as Particle Swarm Optimization (PSO). Solving inverse problems with these methods was a new approach for me in reference to problem modeling.
In the third year of my studies, I designed a battery thermal management system. This is a comprehensive example that I could utilize my thermal, fluid, and CFD knowledge simultaneously. I obtained valuable experience as a junior research scientist at the Environment Research Institute which includes fluid modeling, simulation with Finite Element Method (FEM), and conducted optimized design of the elements in a battery pack. This work has been presented in the most prominent international conferences.
I have done five different projects in the last two semesters. In each project, I collaborated with other students in a team and was a group leader in the majority of these projects. These projects were executed through courses such as Optimization of Thermal Systems, Gas Turbine and Jet Propulsion, and Automatic Control. We carried out three optimization projects in which we had to draw on our own knowledge and experience to solve open-ended problems.
In two projects, which took us two months to finish, there were times we had to work without much guidance since the projects were about inverse heat transfer. This was difficult as this course is taught separately in the graduate program. Our persistence and forward thinking paid off as our work was selected as the best project and our team obtained the top score.
Along with projects, due to my excellent academic performance, I had been selected as a teacher assistant in “Dynamics” and “Thermodynamics I” courses while at the university of Tehran. To compare, usually graduate students are considered and qualified for this task. I believe that these experiences have prepared me to deal with difficult and unprecedented situations.
Since I have been looking forward to studying graduate program in my research interests’ area, I have prepared myself for graduate studies. My goal is to develop my skills. To achieve this goal, I took a course called “Turbomachinery” and consequentially became involved in a project to design a piping network of a cooling system for the hybrid electric bus. In this project, pump sizing was done and validated with simulation software. This work complemented my internship at Pardis Energy Company where I improved my knowledge of piping design. Working with PDMS software led to an increase in my skill and proficiency in the oil, gas, and petrochemical industries. This internship was really an eye-opening experience for me to prepare for this field of study.
I have always been passionate about the fundamental principles of how the world works and see that engineering has been responsible for some of the greatest innovations of mankind. It is the usage of the application of physics with engineering principles which rules the world and inventions. These foundational opinions have driven my interest to pursue a degree in Mechanical Engineering. To achieve this goal, I studied relentlessly in high school and for the nationwide university entrance exam. I was able to rank in the upper percentile in the entrance exam which made me among the best students who entered into University of Tehran’s Mechanical Engineering department.
During my undergraduate program, I took various courses which closely aligned with my research interest and dealt with heat transfer and fluid mechanics. After completing many courses, I realized how practical and essential the knowledge of optimization and computational methods is for any student who pursues new things in heat transfer or fluid mechanics. These methods are powerful instruments. After taking related courses, I was fascinated by evolutionary methods like Genetic Algorithm and other modern techniques such as Particle Swarm Optimization (PSO). Solving inverse problems with these methods was a new approach for me in reference to problem modeling.
In the third year of my studies, I designed a battery thermal management system. This is a comprehensive example that I could utilize my thermal, fluid, and CFD knowledge simultaneously. I obtained valuable experience as a junior research scientist at the Environment Research Institute which includes fluid modeling, simulation with Finite Element Method (FEM), and conducted optimized design of the elements in a battery pack. This work has been presented in the most prominent international conferences.
I have done five different projects in the last two semesters. In each project, I collaborated with other students in a team and was a group leader in the majority of these projects. These projects were executed through courses such as Optimization of Thermal Systems, Gas Turbine and Jet Propulsion, and Automatic Control. We carried out three optimization projects in which we had to draw on our own knowledge and experience to solve open-ended problems.
In two projects, which took us two months to finish, there were times we had to work without much guidance since the projects were about inverse heat transfer. This was difficult as this course is taught separately in the graduate program. Our persistence and forward thinking paid off as our work was selected as the best project and our team obtained the top score.
Along with projects, due to my excellent academic performance, I had been selected as a teacher assistant in “Dynamics” and “Thermodynamics I” courses while at the university of Tehran. To compare, usually graduate students are considered and qualified for this task. I believe that these experiences have prepared me to deal with difficult and unprecedented situations.
Since I have been looking forward to studying graduate program in my research interests’ area, I have prepared myself for graduate studies. My goal is to develop my skills. To achieve this goal, I took a course called “Turbomachinery” and consequentially became involved in a project to design a piping network of a cooling system for the hybrid electric bus. In this project, pump sizing was done and validated with simulation software. This work complemented my internship at Pardis Energy Company where I improved my knowledge of piping design. Working with PDMS software led to an increase in my skill and proficiency in the oil, gas, and petrochemical industries. This internship was really an eye-opening experience for me to prepare for this field of study.
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In my final days of my undergraduate study, I had to complete a project in my area related to my research interests. In this project, I had made numerical simulations for convective heat transfer of turbulent and laminar flows in pipes with different shapes. I learned a lot about turbulence models and convective heat transfer. With this said, I would like to focus on this area and since I like new technologies and science in my field of study, I am very open to new opportunities.
To clearly express my goals, I believe that in order to play an effective role in this competitive world, one should specialize in a specific field. Therefore, I made my strong decision to pursue what I have learnt until now in order to make use of my knowledge efficiently. I think that my knowledge is not profound enough yet and I should study for a graduate degree to do anything significant in my interested area.
As a future perspective, I would like to be a university professor with a holistic and innovative approach to research works. This hope cannot be fulfilled without strong research background which entails a meticulous research in the graduate period. According to my advisors and my own inquiry, New York University provides me with such a competitive atmosphere for research and study. Due to the equipped laboratories and cutting-edge research in a variety of areas, your Mechanical Engineering program has been recognized for its excellence in research.
The history of New York University is full of honors and great achievements of professors who dedicated their lives to science. I wish to be considered for a Graduate Research Assistantship under the direction of prodigious professors like Ponta, Abdolhalik, and Egorova in the mentioned research interests. I intend to pursue my area of study at a well-established university. Therefore, outstanding opportunities at your university encouraged me to apply to this university so as to experience a new world of which I would be proud.
To clearly express my goals, I believe that in order to play an effective role in this competitive world, one should specialize in a specific field. Therefore, I made my strong decision to pursue what I have learnt until now in order to make use of my knowledge efficiently. I think that my knowledge is not profound enough yet and I should study for a graduate degree to do anything significant in my interested area.
As a future perspective, I would like to be a university professor with a holistic and innovative approach to research works. This hope cannot be fulfilled without strong research background which entails a meticulous research in the graduate period. According to my advisors and my own inquiry, New York University provides me with such a competitive atmosphere for research and study. Due to the equipped laboratories and cutting-edge research in a variety of areas, your Mechanical Engineering program has been recognized for its excellence in research.
The history of New York University is full of honors and great achievements of professors who dedicated their lives to science. I wish to be considered for a Graduate Research Assistantship under the direction of prodigious professors like Ponta, Abdolhalik, and Egorova in the mentioned research interests. I intend to pursue my area of study at a well-established university. Therefore, outstanding opportunities at your university encouraged me to apply to this university so as to experience a new world of which I would be proud.
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