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At the end of the ultimate body paragraph, it is advised to write a considerably short and often simple sentence that not only affects GRA but TR on an equal measure.

✈️ GRA: having written complex sentencesβ€”something that lower level students think is a mustβ€”incorporating simple sentences, especially at the end of the argument is a sign that a wide range is used.

πŸ“Technically, range in GRA does not necessarily mean that your essay has to be full of inversions and rare structures; it is rather a call for a blend of simple and complex structures. Focusing solely on complex structures while ignoring simple ones may single-handedly cap your score at a certain level.

πŸ–Œ TRA: a normal, high-level argument almost always follows this framework: πŸ‘‡

idea introduction β€”> explanation β€”> example β€”> conclusion


Most writers finish their paragraphs with an example; though pushing a conclusion is something they should do for their essays live up to the feature: fully extended (look at TR 9)

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Some experts believe that to increase road safety cyclists should be required to pass a mandatory test in order to be permitted to cycle on public roads. Although it can impose an additional financial burden on public finances, I believe by implementing this idea governments are able to ensure road safety and create improved traffic flow where the number of road accidents may decrease significantly.
Opponents of this idea claim that it can require substantial government expenditure to construct facilties where individuals take the exam. If governments intend to require passing a test, there should be buildings where people can show their cycling skills and their understanding of traffic regulations to pass the test. Not only would constructing such buildings, but also recruiting supervisors. examiners and maintenance of these centres are another important consideration. Authority bodies should pay them monthly salaries, and cover other expenses; it definitely costs huge amount of sums. Some people, therefore, oppose to this idea.
I believe, however, it has far more advantages that surpass financial problem, not the least of which is decreasing the number of road accidents. Gone are the days when there were less transportation that did not create huge traffic congestion or caused less traffic casulties. Today, there is an unprecented number of vehicles that has increased number of road-related issues and it has made even riding a bike challenging than it has ever been. With the aim of passing the test, people can increase their experience and learn how to deal with potential road hazards.
Another equally important benefit is improved traffic flow. During the preparation for the test, cyclists are more likely to learn how to behave in traffic signals, use designated lanes, ensuring smoother traffic flow. Poland is a pertinent example, where young cyclists are required both theoritical and practical examination to take a bicycle card so as to be allowed to ride on public areas. Were it not for such a measure, hospitals would have filled with those who crushed their bikes with other means of vehicles. Governments, thus, should implement such an assessment examinations.
In conclusion, constructing dedicated infrastructure could require governments to allocate additional budget. Only through requiring individuals to pass an examination can governments ensure road safety and create better traffic where there could be less crushes.

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The table illustrates changes in daily oil production in four different countries over a 5-year period between 2000 and 2004.

Overall, Nigeria held the lead at the end of the period, even though it was Congo that headed the list at the outset in terms of daily oil production. Equally salient are Chad and Somalia, countries that reached parity following significant growth at the end, despite coming at the lower end of the spectrum initially.

Nigeria and Congo emerged as the leading oil producers, accounting for 205,000 and 275,000 barrels in 2000, respectively. While oil production in these countries followed a broadly similar, declining trajectory to respective numbers of 190,000 and 222,000 in 2002, Nigeria bucked the trend; by 2004, its daily oil production had edged up to 213,000 barrels, whereas that in Congo fell to 203,000.

In contrast, Chad and Somalia recorded lower oil production. The former, in particular, stood out as an outlier in that it did not produce oil until 2002, after which there was a surge to 50,000 barrels in 2004. Meanwhile, Somalia commenced with 5,000 barrels, a figure that grew significantly to 50,000, eventually matching that observed in Chad.

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