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Shaxran bought the third bundle because his writing was around 6-6.5.

I checked 15 pieces of writing and provided feedback and here is his result.

πŸ† - I also need Writing 7.0

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Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school.
Why is this?
What can be done to solve the problem?


An academic transition has always been an area of concern for many, and this is corroborated by a growing view that students find higher education more challenging than secondary education. While this can be attributable to the absence of proper preparation stage and the like, certain measures can combat this problem.

There are a number of reasons behind this growing issue, foremost among these being a lack of proper preparation. Although education systems in most countries provide training sessions, it is no surprise to see the absence of such for school graduates in others. Nowhere is this more apparent than in most CIS countries, where the educational system does not, for the most part, take the significance of an academic transition into account. This is probably why the disparity between high school and university education emerges; by extension, students feel torn apart, given the difficulty of the university education following the completion of high school.

Equally important are educational programs. Higher education exposes school graduates to highly-specialized domains, and the teaching materials used are mostly made of industry-specific terms and cases. Having been subjected to rather general pieces of information throughout school years, new university students thus are mired in tasks and projects beyond their capabilities; mathematics, linguistics, history and art are some of the widely-cited examples, subjects where the disparity leaves students with questions, such as whether their choice of education was the most sensible one.

Cumbersome as this may seem, bridging the academic gap is by no means unmanageable, for certain practical measures have already yielded positive outcomes; among them, what is known as a foundation year stands out, an educational standard that most universities are now following. This is when new university students can take on a course of their choice to see if they thrive academically; even if they falter in so doing, there are a number of courses they can try throughout the first academic year, at the end of which a final decision must be made for the next three years. Some international universities with such a program, for example, gained a foothold in countries, including Vietnam, Malaysia and Singapore, proving the foundation year important than ever. Perhaps most importantly, some local universities are already offering this program, an apparent corollary of which is a smoother academic transition between high school and university education.

Relying on this alone is hardly ever a panacea, however. When paired with a pragmatic solution, the aforementioned measure can be efficient; expectedly so. One such measure is re-designing the materials used for high school education. Schools, for example, can lead their students into specialized domains, some being biology, geography and teaching, for them to explore their interests, thanks to which students can then step into a more familiar major. Not only does this address the academic difference, but it also helps school officials navigate young learners through a seemingly thorny academic world. Coinciding with the foundation year, this measure can either direct students to the academic or vocational world, where they are equipped with necessary skills to, say, understand their domains or climb up the vocational ladder.

In light of the above, one can conclude that the problem stems largely from a lack of proper preparation stage and unsuitable educational programs. Nonetheless, school graduates can still relish a smoother academic transition through the foundation year program and revised educational materials.

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People throw tantrums at officials for an 8% interest rate in student loans in the U.S, whereas laymen here in Uzbekistan are almost always okay to bear interest rates ranging from 28% to 32.8%.

πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡Έ The U.S: standard rate of 7%
πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡Ώ Uzbekistan: standard rate of 22%

Can you see how staggering the difference is ? Even when this is the case, I have no idea why people are okay with borrowing money just for the sake of pleasure or showy things.

Alright, let's talk about education. You gotta pay certain amounts of money for a degree that you don't even use in your life ? Add to that, you pay for a little advanced version of a day-care facility ?

P.S - interest rates are not compliant with Islamic Shariah's rules, though they are widely accepted in capitalistic world, alongside music and consumerism. I highly discourage involvement in any business with interest rates, unless you conduct a thorough research about it.
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You know what ?

It seems to me that AI is involved in writing assessment; it has become more apparent with time that my scores started to go down for absolutely no reason.

An 8.5 in Writing was considerably easy back then but now, even with more effort put in the work, it does not seem to come out.

My last test was an absolute kick primarily because my guts told me it was an 8.5 at the very last in Writing. I got a 7.5 and left fazed. Went for an EOR only to realize that writing score was increased to an 8.0.

7s across the board for an essay I thought I'd get an 8.5 is an absolute kick in the teeth.

What do you say about it ?
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Do you also find IELTS Writing difficult ?
Do you also find it challenging to understand your mistakes in this section ?

This bundle is designed to help you overcome your problems in IELTS Writing. πŸ˜„
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If you find map & process tasks hard in IELTS Writing, watch these video lessons and use these files: πŸ˜„

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Maps & Process - Guide Book 🌱
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When I tell my students I don't understand Uzbek or Russian, they do not believe in me.

Pity.
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At the end of the ultimate body paragraph, it is advised to write a considerably short and often simple sentence that not only affects GRA but TR on an equal measure.

✈️ GRA: having written complex sentencesβ€”something that lower level students think is a mustβ€”incorporating simple sentences, especially at the end of the argument is a sign that a wide range is used.

πŸ“Technically, range in GRA does not necessarily mean that your essay has to be full of inversions and rare structures; it is rather a call for a blend of simple and complex structures. Focusing solely on complex structures while ignoring simple ones may single-handedly cap your score at a certain level.

πŸ–Œ TRA: a normal, high-level argument almost always follows this framework: πŸ‘‡

idea introduction β€”> explanation β€”> example β€”> conclusion


Most writers finish their paragraphs with an example; though pushing a conclusion is something they should do for their essays live up to the feature: fully extended (look at TR 9)

#approach
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Teacher: What does not kill you makes you stronger

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Part 2: Describe a person who loves growing plants βœ…

- to be much into
- snap of fingers
- has a real green thumb
- to be big into gardening
- for as long as I can remember
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- take great pride in
- cut on down his expenses
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- back in the day
- deal with stress
- plug away from the world
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