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The maps show how the town of Dalton changed between 1815 and 2015. Overall, Dalton, a town mainly focused on agriculture and livestock farming in 1815, had become more urbanized and industry-oriented by 2015. It was changed beyond recognition due to the…
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As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems.
What are these problems for young people living in cities?
What are possible solutions for these problems?
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Urbanization is a growing trend around the globe, which also raises concerns, especially among younger people. Although such a change inflates living costs and employment requirements, there are some measures that can be taken.
One major issue is higher living costs, particularly housing. Prices may surge because of urban density, thereby affecting the younger generation considerably. A classic case in point is international students, who scrape by on subsistence-level salaries in megapolises. Despite part-time employment, they might not be able to afford house rentals, leaving them desperate in a survival trap. Though thorny at a glance, governmental subsidies can make a difference and assist the younger generation in mitigating the effects of urbanization.
The problems extend beyond higher living costs, not the least of which is skill deficiency. Major cities are infamous in that fierce competition in the job market weeds out weaker candidates who pale in comparison to others who were taught through a skill-based approach. Lacking necessary skills and qualifications, some younger people may fail to land a position, which makes covering their expenses even more challenging. Shifting from test-based performance assessment to skills-based education can resolve this problem, as it equips the younger generation with practical skills that are highly appreciated in megapolises.
In conclusion, higher living costs and lack of skills may make city life difficult for younger people because of urban density and unforgiving competition within urban labor markets. Taking a two-pronged approach—governmental subsidies and streamlining education towards skills-oriented learning—can address these issues, helping younger people establish a stable life.
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The images show the layouts of rooms used for training sessions by up to ten people and more than ten people.
Overall, the general structure of rooms does not show notable variations, while it is spatial organization that stands out at a glance. While both types of rooms are provided with identical types of facilities, the one for more than ten people places facilities to make use of space more efficiently.
One notable difference can be seen in the vicinity of an entrance door. The presenter’s chair and the whiteboard are located near the entrance door in a room designed for fewer people, which is a stark contrast to the high-capacity arrangement, where the kitchenette for morning tea is placed adjacent to the presenter’s chair. Such a facility, however, is located at the far end of the smaller room, placing it near the students’ tables.
What is also noteworthy are tables designed only for ten people, which is why they are smaller compared to those provided in a room designed for more than ten people: students there are provided with dual-sided seating. This serves approximately 18 people, increasing the capacity of the room.
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Overall, the general structure of rooms does not show notable variations, while it is spatial organization that stands out at a glance. While both types of rooms are provided with identical types of facilities, the one for more than ten people places facilities to make use of space more efficiently.
One notable difference can be seen in the vicinity of an entrance door. The presenter’s chair and the whiteboard are located near the entrance door in a room designed for fewer people, which is a stark contrast to the high-capacity arrangement, where the kitchenette for morning tea is placed adjacent to the presenter’s chair. Such a facility, however, is located at the far end of the smaller room, placing it near the students’ tables.
What is also noteworthy are tables designed only for ten people, which is why they are smaller compared to those provided in a room designed for more than ten people: students there are provided with dual-sided seating. This serves approximately 18 people, increasing the capacity of the room.
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Mr Javokhir, an instrumental figure in Uzbekistan’s environmental cooperation with foreign countries, needed an IELTS certificate to be qualified for a scholarship offer made by Cambridge University.
He initially thought he could not make it to 7.0 across the board but turns out, he is capable after 2 months of individual classes he took.
✅ Listening: 9.0
✅ Writing: 7.5
🔥 Overall: 8.0
Mr Javokhir, good luck on your academic endeavors and your role in shaping Uzbekistan’s future.
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Despite continuous efforts to establish a work-life balance, most people fail to achieve it. While this may incur health risks and weaken relationships, there are a number of measures to be taken.
One implication of an unstable work-life balance has to do with health. As long working hours and forced presenteeism have become normal parts of today’s corporate life, many people falter in taking care of their health; this, by extension, results in fatigue and low energy levels and even chronic sleep deprivation later in life. To counter-act such a problem, nation-wide flexible working hours should be established, with a classic case being Germany: this country has legislated laws to regulate working hours to ease burdens on its citizens.
Another equally alarming result of imbalance between work and personal life is weakened interpersonal relationships. When people fail to spend quality time with their family and friends, this takes a toll on interpersonal bonds, given the importance of continuous connections. For example, people living in developing countries often suffer from misunderstandings because of a lack of communication which is the result of improper work-life balance. Some of those countries, however, are allocating extra days off during national holidays to resolve this issue, demonstrating the importance of actions taken towards improved social cohesion.
In conclusion, health and relationship issues are the direct results of the fact that a proper work-life balance is elusive to attain. Though thorny at a glance, establishing flexible working hours, as seen in Germany, and allocating extra days off can help tackle the implications of such a growing issue, which can be seen in some developing nations.
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One implication of an unstable work-life balance has to do with health. As long working hours and forced presenteeism have become normal parts of today’s corporate life, many people falter in taking care of their health; this, by extension, results in fatigue and low energy levels and even chronic sleep deprivation later in life. To counter-act such a problem, nation-wide flexible working hours should be established, with a classic case being Germany: this country has legislated laws to regulate working hours to ease burdens on its citizens.
Another equally alarming result of imbalance between work and personal life is weakened interpersonal relationships. When people fail to spend quality time with their family and friends, this takes a toll on interpersonal bonds, given the importance of continuous connections. For example, people living in developing countries often suffer from misunderstandings because of a lack of communication which is the result of improper work-life balance. Some of those countries, however, are allocating extra days off during national holidays to resolve this issue, demonstrating the importance of actions taken towards improved social cohesion.
In conclusion, health and relationship issues are the direct results of the fact that a proper work-life balance is elusive to attain. Though thorny at a glance, establishing flexible working hours, as seen in Germany, and allocating extra days off can help tackle the implications of such a growing issue, which can be seen in some developing nations.
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