The vegan health trap - but not a lexical one 🥦🥒🥑

First off, a shoutout to all the vegans out there.

But even if you are not one, you might still want to write about a vegan diet. How many "synonyms" can you think of for "vegan"? Not the easiest word to paraphrase...

Look, here is a list I mined from a New Scientist article:

- Plant-based diet / Plant-based foods
- Plant-based meat alternatives
- Meat alternatives
- The meat-alternative market
- Diet without meat and dairy
- People who avoid meat and dairy in their diet
- People who avoid animal-based foods
- Live without consuming animal-based products
- This diet / Individuals who follow this diet
- This way of eating
- Your eating patterns

This is more than enough for your essay. And note that not all of these phrases are synonyms - there are other techniques to avoid repetitions.

This is just a tiny glimpse of what we do in "Writing with New Scientist" - a course that is designed to keep you in a good IELTS writing shape without the pressure of the format.

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#IELTS Writing Task 2: Paragraph rewrite 🐸

In today's post I want to share my rewrite of a student's paragraph -- a rewrite that was very easy to do because the student originally had solid ideas. What was needed was just a little ... Scroll down to see.

Topic: Some people believe that it is best to encourage children to have a healthy diet at school while others believe that parents should be the ones to teach children to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

1️⃣ Original

The idea that one’s parents should be held accountable for fostering healthy eating habits in their children is based on the premise that it is they who introduce their children - starting from toddlerhood - to a variety of meals. By doing so, they shape a child’s palate and food preferences from the youngest age, long before educational institutions exert any influence on them. Naturally, young children’s psyche is hard-wired to mirror adult behaviour: if they see their parents choose a salad and steamed meals over fried alternatives, they are considerably more likely to perceive such a pattern as normal and adopt it as their own. A further explanation is often related to the assumption that parents provide a larger number of food intakes - at least breakfast and dinner. Therefore,parental food choices play a profound role in what their children consume most of the day, while educational establishments usually provide students with a single midday meal.

2️⃣ Irina's rewrite

Admittedly, there might be reasons to believe that parents can play a profound role in fostering healthy eating habits in their children. First, it is parents who introduce children to food – starting from toddlerhood. By doing so, they shape the child’s palate and food preferences from the youngest age, long before educational institutions can exert any influence. Second, children are hard-wired to mirror adult behaviour, so they are likely to acquire the habits they see daily. For example, if they see their parents choose a salad and steamed meals over fried alternatives, they are considerably more likely to perceive such a pattern as normal and adopt it as their own. Finally, parents are responsible for more meals than any institution: they typically provide breakfast and dinner as well as all meals at the weekend, while schools only serve one meal a day. Thus, parental choices can have a more profound impact than schools.

What was needed was just a little Coherence and Cohesion: we now have the same ideas, but they are clearly signposted, so the paragraph flows better.

Irina Lutsenko 🌸

Writing Incubator - where writing skills hatch 🦋

"Writing Incubator" is a series of workshops by stellar professionals who love writing. Please welcome our second workshop of the season!

🦋 "Poetry in class? Fear not! Give it a hand and pass it on to your students." by Svetlana Kukharevich

Poetry can be joyful, meaningful, and surprisingly simple to write.

Whether you are a newbie to poetry or a seasoned verse lover, you'll discover simple yet powerful ways to bring poems to life.

This practical hands-on session is designed to make poetry accessible, engaging, and enjoyable. We are going to put our pens to paper, give poetry a whirl and flex our creative muscles together.  On top of that, you’ll leave with a toolkit of strategies that can be implemented immediately.

📅 1 March, Sunday, 11:00 am MSK, Zoom

💌 The workshop is free. To join, message me with a meaningful ending to this comment, "Wow, I can't miss this one! I'd love to join because ... ."

❗️ Please note that this is a workshop, not a webinar or a lecture. If you join, you have to write. "Ghosts" will be kicked out. We don't record our workshops, so this is a safe space to participate.

🦋 Svetlana is a treasure trove of creative ideas. Make sure to follow her at https://t.me/lemon_squizzy

Two full worksheets for my "New Scientist" courses ...

... and they are available online FOR FREE!

1️⃣ "Writing with New Scientist" (13 pages!)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JJVxEWgLj8DFA9qb43ZLKUjReUNXrzNYpvB4D3eWhb0/edit?tab=t.0

2️⃣ "Speaking with New Scientist" (12 pages!)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tqn0xkQ38AtbiixHA9hHSfrHvMPT3P16IDOwOuSBSjQ/edit?tab=t.0

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Writing Incubator - where writing skills hatch 🦋

"Writing Incubator" is a series of workshops by stellar professionals who love writing. Please welcome our third workshop of the season!

🦋 "Hedging in C2 Proficiency essays: good or evil?" By Alena Nikitina

Hedging is allegedly familiar to many. (Or is it?) But have you ever found yourself wondering how exactly you should use it? Let's be brutally honest: how many times have you completely forgotten to use hedging in an exam essay?

For CPE candidates, hedging might be a trap. We know we should use "might" or "tend to" , but do we hedge the summary of the input texts? The evaluation? Both? Neither? Get it wrong, and you sound either arrogant or uncertain. Get it right, and you demonstrate C2 precision.

In this 90-minute workshop, we are going to solve the dilemma and practice using this helpful tool in your writing. Stop guessing how to use hedging. Start writing with confidence.

📅 22 March, Sunday, 11:00 am MSK, Zoom

💌 The workshop is free. To join, message me @iraluts with a meaningful ending to this comment, "Wow, I can't miss this one! I'd love to join because ... ."

❗️ Please note that this is a workshop, not a webinar or a lecture. If you join, you have to write. "Ghosts" will be kicked out. We don't record our workshops, so this is a safe space to participate.

#IELTS Writing Task Response mistake ❗️

As usual, before I explain the mistake, I will illustrate it – see if you can notice it.

Topic: “Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.”

I will give short, simplified examples for illustration purposes.

Paragraph 1️⃣: The reasoning behind the view that the punishment must be imposed on parents relies on two arguments. First, the offense might be seen as a direct result of upbringing …

Paragraph 2️⃣: I, however, do not consider these arguments convincing and believe that parents must not face any punishment. The main reason for this is that it is unfair to punish those who did not commit any crimes. More importantly, parents cannot be held accountable for their child’s upbringing because their child might have become susceptible to a negative influence elsewhere – for example, at school. …

Do you see what I did wrong in the second paragraph?

Instead of arguing in favor of the second point of view, I argued against the first point of view; i.e. instead of arguing that children must be punished, I argued that parents must not be punished.

Make sure you argue the actual view in the topic – not the just opposite of another view. ❗️

Lifehack: Look at the actual topic several times as you write.

See my full essay on this topic in a pdf collection of around 100 sample answers:

https://t.me/irinalutsenko/551