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Nowadays , women as well as men work full time. Therefore, women and men should share household tasks equally. (eg cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS
Nowadays , women as well as men work full time. Therefore, women and men should share household tasks equally. (eg cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, there has been a shift away from the traditional gender roles, with men and women increasingly participating in full-time work. It is, therefore, suggested that household chores should be equally distributed between husbands and wives. While this change towards shared responsibility can bring about several issues, I believe a fair distribution of household tasks can contribute to a more balanced and harmonious partnership.

The suggestion that men and women should divide household tasks equally may challenge societal expectations and gender roles. Despite the strides made in terms of bringing gender equality into different facets of our lives, deeply embedded social norms can still influence individuals’ attitude and behavior. These norms can create resistance or conflict when attempting to establish an equal distribution of household chores.

On a more individual level, partners have different approaches and standards when it comes to completing household tasks. One partner may feel that their efforts are undervalued or that the other partner’s work is not up to their expectations. For example, when doing laundry, one partner may focus on getting the laundry done quickly and efficiently, following a basic routine of sorting, washing, and drying, while the other partner takes a more meticulous approach, paying attention to the type of fabric and washing powder and temperature. Overtime, this can lead to disagreements and tension in the relationship.

In my opinion, however, sharing household activities equally brings balance into the relationship. Firstly, when household chores are evenly distributed, both partners share the responsibilities and workload in maintaining the home. This promotes mutual respect and a sense of fairness and equity within the relationship, preventing one partner from being overburdened and overwhelmed.

Apart from this, partners can enjoy the increased quality of life. Once they divide tasks equitably, both of them have more time and energy available for other activities such as hobbies and quality time together. This allows a better work-life balance and more opportunities to engage in shared experiences, strengthening the bond and intimacy within the partnership.

In conclusion, the equal distribution of tasks in the house is a new phenomenon and therefore, challenges societal and gender norms and there is also the problem of partners having to meet each other’s expectations within the relationship. However, this shift helps partners achieve balance and harmony in the relationship as it promotes fairness and it also increases the quality of life.

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More and more people today expect to get what they want instantly (goods, services, news), without having to wait.

Why is this ?

Do you think this a positive or negative development?
Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS
More and more people today expect to get what they want instantly (goods, services, news), without having to wait. Why is this ? Do you think this a positive or negative development?
These days, there is an observable trend towards seeking immediate gratifications in many facets of our lives. While this behavior can largely be attributed to the consumer culture and the widespread popularity of the internet, this development is a negative one.

Consumerism is one of the contributing factors to such a turn of events. Most marketing and advertising strategies are designed to create a sense of urgency and persuade individuals to make instant purchasing decisions. Some of these tactics include an emphasis on limited-time sales and discounts as well as marketing products or service with claims of providing quick results. For example, the weight loss industry heavily promotes lose-weight products promising rapid results. As appealing as it may sound, the desire for quick fix and transformation creates a culture, in which people want to be instantly gratified.

The internet also has a fair share in fostering the desire for immediate results. From communication to shopping, to receiving news, the internet penetrated almost every aspect of our lives. One of the effects it brought is immediacy. People now can connect friends or family, order clothing, reserve a table in a restaurant, or watch events unfold from other sides of the world in a matter of seconds.

When people become accustomed to instantly satisfying themselves, this can have several implications for the other aspects of their lives in the long term. To start, people may become less motivated to work towards goals that require sustained effort and patience. For instance, building a career requires years of dedication and hard work. Those who lack these qualities because they are used to what they want immediately may find it challenging to devote time and effort to patiently develop a career.

Additionally, personal relationships may also suffer. In a culture that values quick rewards and instant satisfaction, people may prioritize instant pleasure and short-term desires over investing time and effort to build and maintain meaningful relationships with others. This approach to relationships can lead to a lack of intimacy and emotional depth in relationships, leaving individuals unfulfilled and disconnected in the long run.

In conclusion, the main reasons behind people wanting almost everything instantly are consumer-driven society and the rise of the internet. This development, however, brings about several long-term negative consequences, making individuals less patient in achieving their long-term goals and affecting relationships.

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The table presents a comparison of teachers' earnings in five different countries, along with the time it takes them to reach the maximum salary. Overall, while Luxembourg stood out as the highest paying country, teachers in the remaining countries earned far less. In addition, Korea, Luxembourg and Japan exhibit a more pronounced discrepancy between the starting and maximum salaries, and achieving the top salary also requires the longest time in these counties.

Looking first of all at Asian countries, teachers in Korea earned an annual salary of $30.500 upon starting their careers, which was considerably more than their Japanese counterparts, who made $28.000. After 15 years of experience, both figures rose to $52.600 and $49.000 respectively. When it comes to the maximum salary, the disparity became even more noticeable, as Korean teachers would obtain an income of $84.500 after 37 years of experience as opposed to teachers from Japan who would make $62.400 after working as a teacher for 34 years.

The difference between teachers’ salaries in the two European countries was staggering. Teachers from Luxembourg were offered $80.000 as a starting salary, well above Danish teachers who made $47.000. Having worked for 15 years, teachers in Luxembourg would generate an income of $112,000, which would then rise to a whopping $139,000 after another 15 years. By contrast, the maximum salary offered to teachers in Denmark was $54,000, which would take only 8 years to reach. This means that teachers with 15-year experience would make the same $54.000.

In Australia, a similar pattern to that of Denmark was observed. The starting salary of teachers was $34.600, and only after 9 years they would reach the maximum salary of $48.000. This remains the same even after 15 years of experience.

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The tendency for news reports in the media to focus on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individual and to society.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS
The tendency for news reports in the media to focus on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individual and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Negative developments such as crime, natural disasters, or terrorist attacks often receive a disproportionate amount of media attention compared to positive news. This has created a concern among the public, who express that this has harmful effects on people and society as a whole. While I understand the concern, I believe it might be an overreaction.

One of the proclaimed negative effects of the media coverage of bad news is that it can create an unnecessary fear among the public. As media can have a significant impact on people’s perceptions and emotions, the constant exposure to negative news can distort the reality for many people. The recent COVID-19 pandemic showed us how vulnerable people are to negative news, even it comes from an unreliable source, as it can create panic among the population.

However, in my opinion, these perceived dangers of media focusing more on negative news are an exaggeration. Firstly, this has been going on for so long that people have come to realize focusing too much on bad news is nothing more than a media stunt. As media outlets are well aware of the intrinsic interest of people in negativity, they tend to sensationalize bad news for attention.

In addition, with the widespread adaptation of smartphones and the internet, people now have a greater control over what news they consume. Some mobile apps and websites allow users to subscribe to specific topics of interest and follow more credible sources. This ability of people to filter news goes to show that they are not as adversely affected by the reports of negative news as some people make it out to be.

In conclusion, the concern regarding the effects of bad news on the media mainly stems from the argument that it can lead to reality distortion. However, this seems to me an overstatement as people now possess awareness of tactics used by the mainstream media and they also have more control over their news consumption.


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Learn to talk about money in Task 1. It is one of the most common topics

Most students keep repeating the word ‘spend’. Show them you are built different.

What other alternatives of ‘ spend money’ do you know?
At this point, it’s getting boring and repetitive
Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS
At this point, it’s getting boring and repetitive
I was sure that I got 8.5 in writing

Let’s wait for the appeal (
Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS
At this point, it’s getting boring and repetitive
I’m pretty sure, my writing score will change to 8.0-8.5 after the EOR
This was my essay topic but the wording was a little bit different.

I’ll recreate the essay I wrote later today
Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS
This was my essay topic but the wording was a little bit different. I’ll recreate the essay I wrote later today
An aircraft releases more contaminants to the air than a car ever could. Therefore, there is a proposal that prohibiting recreational air travel can produce more positive outcomes than limiting car usage. While this argument seems valid, the implementation of this initiative can bring about several practical problems. In my opinion, the government should explore other more viable ways.

Air travel one of the major drivers of air pollution. Despite the technological advancements, almost all airplanes still rely on fossil fuels, emitting a range of pollutants, particularly carbon dioxide. The increased levels of this chemical have long been associated with a host of other problems, ranging from health issues to climate change. If air travel is reduced or banned altogether, people can enjoy an improved air quality.

However, as promising as this proposal may sound, the question of whether it is possible to put such an initiative into practice should be addressed. Firstly, traveling, whether for tourism or other purposes, is a basic human right. Simply taking it away from people for the sake of improving the environment may raise some concerns among people. The public may feel that the effects of environmental degradation are already irreversible or that the contribution of air travel is minimal, as it is not the only and probably not the main culprit.

In addition, trying to improve the environment through this approach may lead to a trade-off in the tourism industry. Tourism is one of the biggest industries, employing millions of people. When the government imposes a ban on air travel, this can lead to a decline in tourism in some countries. This downturn of tourism may deprive people from those countries of a basic income stream, which raises moral questions over whether banning air travel for tourism is the correct step.

In conclusion, air travel no doubt contributes to air pollution. However, I believe anyone should have the right to use the transportation of their choice and imposing restrictions on non-essential flights can have detrimental effects on the tourism industry.
This is the third time I have gotten 8.5 with just 0.5 short of 9.0

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