Here is her answer to yesterday's question 🌷🌹🌷

She got band 7 in speaking last winter. A reference point for others if u want to compare your answers with hers ⚖😎🙋

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امروز میخوایم همچنین تمرین مقدمه Introduction نوشتن داشته باشیم. سوال زیر از کتاب Cambridge IELTS 8 هست. کوشش کنید برای این پرسش Introduction بنویسید و برای من بفرستید تا اینجا منتشر کنم.

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فرمول های گوناگونی برای مقدمه نوشتن هست که میتونید از اونها استفاده کنید. فرمولی که من بکار میبرم این هست:

A short beginning + Paraphrase of the Question + Say what you want to do in the essay

Here is Pouya Abolqasemi's Response

Zahra Bakhtiyari's Response

Behnam's Response

Hussein's Response

Nowadays, there are many attitudes about which type of school are more effective on girls and boys. Some people think separate is better for them. However, others think they should study in mixed schools to acquire more benefits. As a matter of fact, absolutely there are some viewpoint about it which can be significant that I will write their views and opinions in this essay.

Hussein, since you asked, you should try to be more concise especially in last part. Also it's a good idea to check the Collocations in dictionary before writing them down. For instance: aquire benefit.
Is this the best Collocation u can use here? How u can come up with better ones?

Here is Ebrahim's Response

با شناساندن ما به دوستان و دشمنان خود در پراکندن دانش همگام شوید ; )
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Play a part in propagation of knowledge by introducing us to your friends and foes ;)
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یکی از دوستان درخواست کردن به این Cue Card پاسخ بدیم. از دوستان میخواهم برای کمک به ایشون پاسخ های خودشون را تا آخر امشب ارسال بفرمایند. ممنون


Cue Card 1

Talk about national identity. Please say

– What is it?
– Is it important in your opinion?
– Some countries don’t value it. Why?

Here is Pouya Abolqasemi's Response 🌷🌷🌷🌷

Here is Ebrahim's Response to the Cue Card 🌷❤️🌷