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Writing task 1 (a letter)


✍️ A local annual festival will take place in your area soon. Write a letter to the organiser of the festival. In your letter


- Provide feedback on the festival held last year

- Offer some help with organisation of this year's festival

- Inquire about specific details or features of the upcoming festival


Writing task 2 (an essay)


✍️ Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others believe that people should be free to do any sports or activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


✍️ Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


✍️ In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?


✍️ Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,...) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

✍️ Some people think that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

✍️ Some people believe that the effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies which cause these types of pollution. others think that there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion

✍️ Extreme sports such as sky diving and sking very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

✍️ Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work that with their children.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✍️ Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children’s development as other subjects, so they should be compulsory in high school.

Do you agree or disagree?


✍️ Some people think that money spend on space exploration is a waste and could be better used to fund other urgent problems in society.

To what extent do you agree?


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While it is popular trend among some university students to study other subjects beside their main field of study, others think that students must be fully concentrated on their primary major to reach a perfection. In my opinion everyone who have a sense of curiosity should be encouraged to get some information about other academic fields.

Students spending a lot of time of their youth in university, they should take advantage of this time and learn as much as possible. Firstly, being familiar to other disciplines, can be lead to a better understanding of some concepts in their main subject. For example, an engineering student who is studying logic or history, can possess a more comprehensive knowledge about algorithms or history behind machines. Secondly, many jobs right now require more than one skill or education degree, it is essential to improve the CV by learning multiple skills. Finally, being in touch with other major's students and teachers will prevent your mind to be isolated in a merely one way of thinking. Math students for instance, will try to solve every problem like formulas and numbers, while dealing with people is different from the numbers.

On the other hand, some people emphasize on focusing on just one major and spend all the time and energy to be perfect on that field rather than being typical in various disciplines. This perfectionists believe that doing a perfect job in finishing in any scientific area will gurantee a bright future. Thus, spending any time in learning other subjects is unnecessary and some how a waste of time. You will never get a high-level knowledge about anything by studying it in prat time in compare to the student who spent his or her full time on that very subject. Spending this time will not only be useless but also will prevent you to make progress in your own work of study.

In conclusion, both sides have concerns about the future of students. Personally, I rather to pursue a number of goals in my life by satisfying my sense of curuiosity.
It is said that, the most noticeable target of science is enhancing the quality of people’s lives. I completely agree with this, as it has made our lives healthier, more comfortable and enjoyable, however it might have some drawbacks.

Science has significant role in improving people’s lives in various ways. First of all, science influence our lives, especially in healthcare. There are people who suffer from specific diseases and are waiting for their remedy or drugs to be discovered by scientists. In this case, new explorations and creations in remedy’s field can rescue a large numbers of people in the world. Secondly, the educationalists innovate new technology devices on a regular basis which make people’s lives easier. For example, individuals are able to utilize the-state-of-the-art equipments and technological devices which have provided with the aim of people’s convenience such as smartphones.


On the other hand, some authorities and scientists abuse of science for their profits. In this cases, they do not care about others or what drawbacks they might have for them. As an example, I could point to military and war equipments. Although they might be needed to guarantee the security of a country, it might become a tool to treat other countries as well. Otherwise, some of these innovations and explorations can damage other creatures unintentionally. For instance, X-rays which are created through atoms’ explorations and use for different purposes, can have negative impacts on humans, animals, plants and hurt them.


In conclusion, although some people might use science as a tool to access their negative requirements, I think improving people’s lives is a priority and a principle way to progress people’s lives.
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Science has always been a wonderful tool during the human story but its ultimate functions is still a topic for debate. While is it argued that its final goal ought to be the betterment of human life since it is simply a tool to be utilized, I put forward the view that prioritizing human life is wrong as it might lead to abuse. 

Science can simply be a useful tool for human being to be better the quality of their life and it has been an inseparable part of our success story since the dawn of civilization. It still can be regarded as such and if it is applied properly and its undesirable outcomes are kept in check, science can still help us prosper and flourish. For instance, new threats to our survival such as global pollution or looming threat of nuclear catastrophes can only be addressed using the very science that has given birth to them in the first place. I firmly believe if we attempt to engineer the science out of this equation, we will always end up in an inferior and perhaps more dangerous situation.

However we should not lose the sight of the contribution it has had to our current problems. Many including me believe the pattern of two steps forward and one step back is an inherent and unchangeable nature of science and therefore, it can be easily used to one's advantage and abuse. So, in this regard, we better consider a rather more philosophical approach to our modern challenges than relying solely on science and technology. As an example, instead of placing too much faith on state-of-the-art technology as a panacea, we might just have to come up with an alternative worldview in which we consume less and feel satisfied with a simpler life.

In conclusion, while I admit that science is a useful tool that can always surprise us when we expect little in tackling our problem and in giving us more comfort and hence its usage should be somehow prioritized in that regard, there are compelling arguments that it cannot be trusted with blind faith since the solutions might be found elsewhere.

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✍️ این دوره از
#سطح نمره 5.5 تا 6 آیلتس شروع میشه و شما رو تا سطح 6.5 تا 7.5 آیلتس میرسونه. (تعیین سطح)

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#آنلاین_ویدیویی در اسکایپ هست و هر 4 مهارت آیلتس (رایتینگ، اسپیکینگ، ریدینگ و لیسنینگ) + لغت و گرامر رو شامل میشه.

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Science is considered to develop people’s lives in all parts in life. I completely agree with this statement. in my opinion, it has many advantages for people’s lifestyle. Because today we can see its effect on all aspects of life.


To begin with, in the health and treatment, the development of science rescued many humans and animals. In history we can see if it had not developed over time, we would have lost many significant humans. As a result, scientist has devoted more time and budget to improve science in this major. For instance, some years ago, in the period of coronavirus, the only thing which was able to cure and save people was vaccinating. We could see how effective it was and after that the death rate dropped dramatically.


Furthermore, science plays a crucial role in the convenience of people’s lives. It not only enhances the transformation, but also it saves more time for people to spend their time on other important things. In other words, educated people do not spend much time to go other places as it was before, they can research about other aspects of science to find an answer in order to make people’s lives better. Also, one of our important sources to survive is food, due to the improvement of agricultural facilities, our food has been advanced in quality and quantity. For example, in developed country, owe to accessible and high-qualified food and facilities, the people’s life span has increased.


In conclusion, science was able to save people and make their life better to be more comfortable and convenient. In my perspective this outcome is the most important goal of science.
There are two viewpoints about subjects which are presented at universities. some students believe that it is better that university students should be taught some subjects in a framework related to their majors or they can have some extra schedules related to the other subjects. While it is a good idea that students expand their information in numerous areas, it can add some pressure to their tasks and they can not concentrate on the main subjects.

On the one hand, when students have developed their knowledge about some subjects further, they will be more skillful in the future.Moreover, if they can not find an occupation related to the subjects that are taught, they will have other opportunities due to their knowledge has been expanded. Furthermore, this approach is radically efficient in preventing a phenomenon is named monotony. For instance, most students nowadays are eager to experience diversity in the environment which are trained, and creating diversity in subjects can be really helpful for this matter, such as some universities in Germany that not only present main subjects but also have some extra classes for students who are interested in other subjects.

On the other hand, students have a determined potential. Hence, it is obvious that if they are taught many different subjects, they will be frustrated. Meanwhile, the capacity of student's brains is limited and they can solely learn some of the main subjects properly. Also, this approach may lead to some illnesses because the diversity in information that is present in the universities increases the pressure on students significantly. For example, there are some universities in South Asia which are presenting some subjects in addition to the main subjects but some students have left their courses because they do believe that, the pressure, they have experienced is more than their tolerance.

To sum up, presenting some additional subjects in universities may lead to developing the knowledge of students. However, there are some pros and cons, and in this case drawbacks overweight the advantages and may have some negative implements on the health of students circumstances.
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There are two viewpoints about subjects which are presented at universities. some students believe that it is better that university students should be taught some subjects in a framework related to their majors or they can have some extra schedules related to the other subjects. While it is a good idea that students expand their information in numerous areas, it can add some pressure to their tasks and they can not concentrate on the main subjects.

On the one hand, when students have developed their knowledge about some subjects further, they will be more skillful in the future.Moreover, if they can not find an occupation related to the subjects that are taught, they will have other opportunities due to their knowledge has been expanded. Furthermore, this approach is radically efficient in preventing a phenomenon is named monotony. For instance, most students nowadays are eager to experience diversity in the environment which are trained, and creating diversity in subjects can be really helpful for this matter, such as some universities in Germany that not only present main subjects but also have some extra classes for students who are interested in other subjects.

On the other hand, students have a determined potential. Hence, it is obvious that if they are taught many different subjects, they will be frustrated. Meanwhile, the capacity of student's brains is limited and they can solely learn some of the main subjects properly. Also, this approach may lead to some illnesses because the diversity in information that is present in the universities increases the pressure on students significantly. For example, there are some universities in South Asia which are presenting some subjects in addition to the main subjects but some students have left their courses because they do believe that, the pressure, they have experienced is more than their tolerance.

To sum up, presenting some additional subjects in universities may lead to developing the knowledge of students. However, there are some pros and cons, and in this case drawbacks overweight the advantages and may have some negative implements on the health of students circumstances.
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#آنلاین_ویدیویی در اسکایپ هست و هر 4 مهارت آیلتس (رایتینگ، اسپیکینگ، ریدینگ و لیسنینگ) + لغت و گرامر رو شامل میشه.

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#تصحیح_رایتینگ کاملا منطبق با فرمت رایتینگ های آیلتس و #فیدبک بر روی 50 فایل صوتی ارسالی بخش #اسپیکینگ هست.

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#مدرس این دوره مهندس ابوالقاسمی با نمره 8 آیلتس آکادمیک و بیش از 15 هزار ساعت تجربه تدریس هستند. (بررسی رزومه و مدارک) - (نمونه تدریس)

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