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✍️ some people feel young people should follow traditions of their societies, others believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.



✍️ Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


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Many countries are debating whether it's better to spend a lot of money on building new fast trains between cities or improving the public transportation that already exists. Both ideas have good points, and this essay will discuss about both viewpointbefore sharing my opinion.
 
On the one hand ,Supporters  of the investing money on high speed trains argue that it offer several benefits. This is because,it can make traveling between cities faster, help people connect better, and be better for the environment. For example, when people try to travel with fast trains ,they will have a high quality and fast travel ,which communicate with individuals there ,and also without brining their own car out they would help reduce air pollution and traffic congestion. As a result, They believe this can make people more productive,  and make life better for travelers.
 
However, others think that it's better to improve the public transportation that already exists. They believe that making buses and trains more efficient and reliable can give similar benefits as new fast trains, and also helps people who live in cities and need public transportation every day. For instance ,governments couldn’t establish new railways in some areas in cities with old structures and people should use other public transports . this could result other public transport improvement can make peoples lives as much easer as fast trains.
 
In conclusion ,I think that countries should try to do both things. It's important to invest in new, fast trains to connect cities, but it's also important to improve the public transportation that people use every day. By doing both things at the same time, governments can make sure everyone has access to good, sustainable transportation.
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Question: Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.



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Different stages of life including teenage years and adulthood are considered to be the happiest ones by different people. While during teen years there is less responsibility to shoulder which means more fun, adults enjoy much more independence which contributes to one's satisfaction. (43 Words)

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is said that the most crucial purpose of the science is enhancing people’s lives. I agree with that because science has been honing people’s lives by inventing transportations and virtual world.

One of the purposes of science which causes life improvement is transportation. Transportation is always essential in everyone’s lives. In the past people were not able to transport or convey their tools easily. They had to ride horses or camels to transfer from one city to another. Sometimes, their trips were so long-term and time-consuming that many of them die in the middle of it. However, these days, as can be seen, there are different sorts of vehicles such as air plane, subway and cars. If transportation had not improved, people would have been in same trouble as past. All of these enhancements influence on the quality of life in terms of traveling and transportation. They are all account for science to people’s improvement.

The other aim which has fantastic impact on quality of people’s life is cyber space. Due to the dramatic change in terms of communication, there are myriad smartphones, computers and the centerpiece one, internet have converted people’s life so comfortable. People used to write letters and use telegraphs when there were no such changes. The period of time that had been happening for receiving massage was too long, however this time has decrease sharply. Therefore, transferring way of communication is another factor for making people more convenient.

To some up, I agree that the most critical aim of the science have to be enhance people’s lives.
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Writing task 1 (a letter)


✍️ A local annual festival will take place in your area soon. Write a letter to the organiser of the festival. In your letter


- Provide feedback on the festival held last year

- Offer some help with organisation of this year's festival

- Inquire about specific details or features of the upcoming festival


Writing task 2 (an essay)


✍️ Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others believe that people should be free to do any sports or activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


✍️ Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


✍️ In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?


✍️ Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,...) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

✍️ Some people think that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

✍️ Some people believe that the effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies which cause these types of pollution. others think that there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion

✍️ Extreme sports such as sky diving and sking very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

✍️ Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work that with their children.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✍️ Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children’s development as other subjects, so they should be compulsory in high school.

Do you agree or disagree?


✍️ Some people think that money spend on space exploration is a waste and could be better used to fund other urgent problems in society.

To what extent do you agree?


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While it is popular trend among some university students to study other subjects beside their main field of study, others think that students must be fully concentrated on their primary major to reach a perfection. In my opinion everyone who have a sense of curiosity should be encouraged to get some information about other academic fields.

Students spending a lot of time of their youth in university, they should take advantage of this time and learn as much as possible. Firstly, being familiar to other disciplines, can be lead to a better understanding of some concepts in their main subject. For example, an engineering student who is studying logic or history, can possess a more comprehensive knowledge about algorithms or history behind machines. Secondly, many jobs right now require more than one skill or education degree, it is essential to improve the CV by learning multiple skills. Finally, being in touch with other major's students and teachers will prevent your mind to be isolated in a merely one way of thinking. Math students for instance, will try to solve every problem like formulas and numbers, while dealing with people is different from the numbers.

On the other hand, some people emphasize on focusing on just one major and spend all the time and energy to be perfect on that field rather than being typical in various disciplines. This perfectionists believe that doing a perfect job in finishing in any scientific area will gurantee a bright future. Thus, spending any time in learning other subjects is unnecessary and some how a waste of time. You will never get a high-level knowledge about anything by studying it in prat time in compare to the student who spent his or her full time on that very subject. Spending this time will not only be useless but also will prevent you to make progress in your own work of study.

In conclusion, both sides have concerns about the future of students. Personally, I rather to pursue a number of goals in my life by satisfying my sense of curuiosity.
It is said that, the most noticeable target of science is enhancing the quality of people’s lives. I completely agree with this, as it has made our lives healthier, more comfortable and enjoyable, however it might have some drawbacks.

Science has significant role in improving people’s lives in various ways. First of all, science influence our lives, especially in healthcare. There are people who suffer from specific diseases and are waiting for their remedy or drugs to be discovered by scientists. In this case, new explorations and creations in remedy’s field can rescue a large numbers of people in the world. Secondly, the educationalists innovate new technology devices on a regular basis which make people’s lives easier. For example, individuals are able to utilize the-state-of-the-art equipments and technological devices which have provided with the aim of people’s convenience such as smartphones.


On the other hand, some authorities and scientists abuse of science for their profits. In this cases, they do not care about others or what drawbacks they might have for them. As an example, I could point to military and war equipments. Although they might be needed to guarantee the security of a country, it might become a tool to treat other countries as well. Otherwise, some of these innovations and explorations can damage other creatures unintentionally. For instance, X-rays which are created through atoms’ explorations and use for different purposes, can have negative impacts on humans, animals, plants and hurt them.


In conclusion, although some people might use science as a tool to access their negative requirements, I think improving people’s lives is a priority and a principle way to progress people’s lives.
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Science has always been a wonderful tool during the human story but its ultimate functions is still a topic for debate. While is it argued that its final goal ought to be the betterment of human life since it is simply a tool to be utilized, I put forward the view that prioritizing human life is wrong as it might lead to abuse. 

Science can simply be a useful tool for human being to be better the quality of their life and it has been an inseparable part of our success story since the dawn of civilization. It still can be regarded as such and if it is applied properly and its undesirable outcomes are kept in check, science can still help us prosper and flourish. For instance, new threats to our survival such as global pollution or looming threat of nuclear catastrophes can only be addressed using the very science that has given birth to them in the first place. I firmly believe if we attempt to engineer the science out of this equation, we will always end up in an inferior and perhaps more dangerous situation.

However we should not lose the sight of the contribution it has had to our current problems. Many including me believe the pattern of two steps forward and one step back is an inherent and unchangeable nature of science and therefore, it can be easily used to one's advantage and abuse. So, in this regard, we better consider a rather more philosophical approach to our modern challenges than relying solely on science and technology. As an example, instead of placing too much faith on state-of-the-art technology as a panacea, we might just have to come up with an alternative worldview in which we consume less and feel satisfied with a simpler life.

In conclusion, while I admit that science is a useful tool that can always surprise us when we expect little in tackling our problem and in giving us more comfort and hence its usage should be somehow prioritized in that regard, there are compelling arguments that it cannot be trusted with blind faith since the solutions might be found elsewhere.

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