🟢 The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as poor people become poorer and rich people become richer.

What problems could this situations cause? what are the solutions to address those problems?

🔴 Latest IELTS Writing questions from India - September 2024 (General)

Writing task 1 (a letter)

You recently found a small object and you think that it might hold some historical value. Write a letter to the management of a museum about the object. In your letter

- Describe the object
- Explain where you found it
- Ask for some information about the object.

Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir / Madam,

Writing task 2 (an essay)

One of the major environmental issues today is the littering of public spaces with packaging materials such as plastic wrappers and cardboard boxes.

What are the reasons for this? What are some effective ways to reduce litter from packaging materials?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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🔴 Some people think that government should invest in wildlife projects and protect them. Other people think it is better if government invests money in other projects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

کسایی که سمپل نمره 9 برای این تاپیک میخواین 👍

اما پاسخ صحیح:

مشکل این جمله این بخش هست: are needed to apply که یکی از بچه ها هم اشاره کردن. نمیتونه معلوم باشه بایدحتما مجهول باشه چون فاعلی وجود نداره

پس فرم درست میشه: are needed to be applied

اما چطور میتونیم از 7 بیاریمش مثلا 8؟

🤓 To tackle this problem, new techniques are needed to apply in terms of modernalization.

😎 To meet this challenge, novel techniques specifically devised to address such setbacks need to be considered/provided.

دقت کنید این یکی صد ها حالتی هست که میشه این جمله رو بازنویسی کرد که به طور کاملا طبیعی(نه جایگزین کردن هم معنی ها) اما در سطح بالاتر حرف رو بزنه و مخاطب رو قانع کنه.

مورد آخر اینکه ساختار in terms of modernalization اصلا در زبان انگلیسی نیست. اگر کسی در دیکشنری معتبر دیده بگه. فکر کنم زاییده ذهن نویسنده است تا اینکه واقعا انگلیسی زبان ها استفاده کنند.

🔴 دوست خوبم 🖐

On the one hand, there are many advantages in visiting such difficult places for travelers.

On the other hand, there are numerous disadvantages, associated with visiting these places,

این مدل جمله ها رو اول پاراگراف هات ننویس. یه بار در مقدمه به این موارد اشاره شده. مستقیم برو سر اصل مطلب و بگو چه مزیتی و چه معایبی.

❌ هیچ نمره ای بابت تکرار این موضوع به شما داده نمیشه اما اگر خطایی از شما سر بزنه نمره رو درجا از شما کم میکنن.

⌛️❌ مورد بعدی هم اینکه تایم و جا برای نوشتن حرف های مهم و خوبی که میتونه نمره رایتینگ شما و بالا ببره از دست میره. این چند دقیقه رو بده به نوشتن حرف های مهم نه این مدل جمله ها.

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🔻ویژگی های یک پاراگراف خوب در رایتینگ آیلتس

یک پاراگراف خوب در رایتینگ آیلتس باید به وضوح ساختار و محتوا را به صورت منسجم و مرتبط ارائه دهد. ویژگی‌های اصلی یک پاراگراف خوب به شرح زیر است:

🔸🔹موضوع مشخص (Topic Sentence):

جمله‌ای که ایده یا موضوع اصلی پاراگراف را معرفی می‌کند.

🔸🔹پشتیبانی با جزئیات (Supporting Details):

توضیحات و دلایل که موضوع اصلی را با مثال‌ها و شواهد تقویت می‌کنند.

🔸🔹منطق و انسجام (Coherence):

جملات باید به‌طور منطقی به هم مرتبط باشند و از واژگان ربط مانند "however", "for example" استفاده شود تا جریان متن حفظ شود.

🔸🔹خلاصه و نتیجه‌گیری (Concluding Sentence):

جمله‌ای که پاراگراف را خلاصه کرده و به موضوع کلی مقاله مرتبط می‌شود.

این ویژگی‌ها به پاراگراف کمک می‌کنند تا منسجم، شفاف و متمرکز باقی بماند و نمره بالاتری در آزمون رایتینگ آیلتس کسب کند.

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🔴 خیلی راجع به جمله پیچیده در رایتینگ و اسپیکینگ ایلتس میشنویم اما چطور میتونیم این جمله ها رو بسازیم؟


✍️ جمله پیچیده (Complex Sentence) از یک بند یا جمله مستقل (independent clause) و حداقل یک بند یا جمله وابسته (dependent clause) تشکیل شده است. بند وابسته به تنهایی معنای کاملی ندارد و نیاز به بند مستقل دارد تا جمله کامل شود. بند وابسته با استفاده از حروف ربط وابسته (مانند: because, although, since, if, when) به بند مستقل متصل می‌شود.

🔻فرمول کلی:

[جمله وابسته] + [جمله مستقل]
یا
[جمله مستقل] + [جمله وابسته]

🔸🔹مثال‌ها:

Although it was raining, we went for a walk.
(با اینکه باران می‌بارید، ما به پیاده‌روی رفتیم.)

جمله وابسته: Although it was raining (با اینکه باران می‌بارید)
جمله مستقل: we went for a walk (ما به پیاده‌روی رفتیم)

I will call you when I arrive home.
(وقتی به خانه برسم، به تو زنگ می‌زنم.)

جمله مستقل: I will call you (من به تو زنگ می‌زنم)
جمله وابسته: when I arrive home (وقتی به خانه برسم)

Because she studied hard, she passed the exam.
(چون سخت درس خواند، در امتحان قبول شد.)

جمله وابسته: Because she studied hard (چون سخت درس خواند)
جمله مستقل: she passed the exam (او در امتحان قبول شد)

🔸🔹در هر جمله پیچیده، بند وابسته با حرف ربط شروع می‌شود و معنای کاملی به تنهایی ندارد، اما به کمک بند مستقل جمله کامل می‌شود.

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✍️ یک نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس نمره 9 با توضیح جزئیات رسیدن به این نمره:

Some people believe that technological advancements have greatly improved our communication, while others argue that it has led to a decrease in personal interaction. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Introduction:

In recent decades, technological advancements have significantly transformed the way people communicate. While some argue that these innovations have greatly enhanced our ability to connect with others, others believe that they have led to a decline in face-to-face interactions, causing isolation. This essay will discuss both views and ultimately argue that, despite the negative impacts on personal interactions, the benefits of improved communication tools outweigh the drawbacks.

Body Paragraph 1 (Discussing View 1):

On the one hand, it is undeniable that technology has revolutionized communication in a positive way. One major improvement is the ability to communicate instantly with people across the globe. Social media platforms, such as Facebook and WhatsApp, allow users to send messages, make video calls, and share content in real-time. For example, during the COVID-19 pandemic, these platforms enabled people to stay connected with family and friends despite physical distancing measures. Moreover, technology has enabled businesses to thrive globally by allowing employees and clients to communicate efficiently without geographical barriers, increasing productivity and fostering international collaboration.

Body Paragraph 2 (Discussing View 2):

On the other hand, there are valid concerns that the rise of digital communication has reduced personal, face-to-face interactions. With the convenience of texting and online messaging, many individuals now prefer virtual conversations over meeting in person. This shift has led to a decrease in the quality of relationships, as in-person interactions allow for better emotional connection through body language and facial expressions. For instance, a study by Harvard University found that individuals who rely heavily on social media for communication report higher levels of loneliness and social isolation. Therefore, while technology has made communication more accessible, it may have negatively affected the depth and quality of human relationships.

Body Paragraph 3 (My Opinion):

In my opinion, although digital communication can reduce the frequency of face-to-face interactions, the overall benefits far outweigh the disadvantages. The ability to connect with people from all over the world, particularly in professional and educational contexts, is invaluable. Furthermore, technological solutions, such as video conferencing, can simulate face-to-face interactions more effectively than text-based communication, allowing for a greater sense of connection even at a distance. As technology continues to evolve, there are also advancements in virtual reality and artificial intelligence that may bridge the emotional gap often associated with digital communication.

Conclusion:

In conclusion, while the concerns regarding the decline in personal interactions due to technology are valid, the advantages of improved communication capabilities cannot be overlooked. Technology has provided us with unprecedented opportunities to connect across borders and foster relationships both personally and professionally. As society continues to adapt, it is important to strike a balance between embracing digital communication and maintaining meaningful face-to-face interactions.