✍️ 7 تاپیک جدید رایتینگ آیلتس تسک 2

🔴In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

🔴The probability of an offender committing a crime after serving the first punishment has increased. What is the reason for this and how can this problem be tackled?

🔴In some countries, the numbers of children aged 15 and younger are increasing dramatically. What are the current and future effects of an ever-increasing population?

🔴These days in some countries an increasing number of young adults are choosing their whole weekends inside homes. Why do you think it is happening ? Is this a positive or negative development

🔴More and more countries have a problem with plastic waste, polluting the countryside and ocean. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?

🔴In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

🔴Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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🔴 The only reason people work hard is to earn money, there are no other reason to do that.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

چطور اولین‌ پاراگراف یک مقاله آیلتس رو شروع کنیم؟

موضوع:
Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries.

Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community?


قدم اول: بازنویسی (Paraphrase)

✅nowadays : currently
✅extended opening hours : long opening hours
✅almost : virtually
✅every day of the week : every week day
✅in many countries : in many parts of the world
✅shoppers : customers

قدم دوم: پاسخ به سوال (Thesis Statement)

Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community?
This is a positive step for customers and the local area
Reason 1: this is a positive step for customers as they can have greater access to goods and services
Reason 2: this is a positive step for the local area as it will bring more people into the town centre

پاراگراف کامل (Introduction Paragraph)

Currently in many parts of the world, shops have long opening hours virtually every week day. In my view, this is a positive step for customers as they can have greater access to goods and services, and the local area as it will bring more people into the town centre.

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🟢 The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as poor people become poorer and rich people become richer.

What problems could this situations cause? what are the solutions to address those problems?

🔴 Latest IELTS Writing questions from India - September 2024 (General)

Writing task 1 (a letter)

You recently found a small object and you think that it might hold some historical value. Write a letter to the management of a museum about the object. In your letter

- Describe the object
- Explain where you found it
- Ask for some information about the object.

Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir / Madam,

Writing task 2 (an essay)

One of the major environmental issues today is the littering of public spaces with packaging materials such as plastic wrappers and cardboard boxes.

What are the reasons for this? What are some effective ways to reduce litter from packaging materials?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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🔴 Some people think that government should invest in wildlife projects and protect them. Other people think it is better if government invests money in other projects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

کسایی که سمپل نمره 9 برای این تاپیک میخواین 👍

اما پاسخ صحیح:

مشکل این جمله این بخش هست: are needed to apply که یکی از بچه ها هم اشاره کردن. نمیتونه معلوم باشه بایدحتما مجهول باشه چون فاعلی وجود نداره

پس فرم درست میشه: are needed to be applied

اما چطور میتونیم از 7 بیاریمش مثلا 8؟

🤓 To tackle this problem, new techniques are needed to apply in terms of modernalization.

😎 To meet this challenge, novel techniques specifically devised to address such setbacks need to be considered/provided.

دقت کنید این یکی صد ها حالتی هست که میشه این جمله رو بازنویسی کرد که به طور کاملا طبیعی(نه جایگزین کردن هم معنی ها) اما در سطح بالاتر حرف رو بزنه و مخاطب رو قانع کنه.

مورد آخر اینکه ساختار in terms of modernalization اصلا در زبان انگلیسی نیست. اگر کسی در دیکشنری معتبر دیده بگه. فکر کنم زاییده ذهن نویسنده است تا اینکه واقعا انگلیسی زبان ها استفاده کنند.