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Some people think that people commit crime because of poverty and social problems, while others think it is because of their bad nature.

Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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🔴 Research indicates that nowadays some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past.

What are the reasons?
Is it a positive or negative development?

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✍️ 7 تاپیک جدید رایتینگ آیلتس تسک 2

🔴In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

🔴The probability of an offender committing a crime after serving the first punishment has increased. What is the reason for this and how can this problem be tackled?

🔴In some countries, the numbers of children aged 15 and younger are increasing dramatically. What are the current and future effects of an ever-increasing population?

🔴These days in some countries an increasing number of young adults are choosing their whole weekends inside homes. Why do you think it is happening ? Is this a positive or negative development

🔴More and more countries have a problem with plastic waste, polluting the countryside and ocean. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?

🔴In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

🔴Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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🔴 The only reason people work hard is to earn money, there are no other reason to do that.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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موضوع:
Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries.

Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community?


قدم اول: بازنویسی (Paraphrase)

✅nowadays : currently
✅extended opening hours : long opening hours
✅almost : virtually
✅every day of the week : every week day
✅in many countries : in many parts of the world
✅shoppers : customers

قدم دوم: پاسخ به سوال (Thesis Statement)

Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community?
This is a positive step for customers and the local area
Reason 1: this is a positive step for customers as they can have greater access to goods and services
Reason 2: this is a positive step for the local area as it will bring more people into the town centre

پاراگراف کامل (Introduction Paragraph)

Currently in many parts of the world, shops have long opening hours virtually every week day. In my view, this is a positive step for customers as they can have greater access to goods and services, and the local area as it will bring more people into the town centre.

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