تاپیک های جدید رایتینگ آیلتس تسک 2

🔴 It is sometimes said that modern technology brings people more free time. However, some people say that instead technology is making people even busier.

to what extent do you agree or disagree


🔴 The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

🔴 Some people say that what individuals do to protect the environment cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect the environment.

Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

🔴 Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that the main interest is in world business.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.


🔴 It is a good thing for people in senior management positions to get a higher salary than other workers in the same company.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

دوستانی که این پادکست رو خواستن لطفا حمایت کنن ببینیم چند نفر نیاز دارن اصلا 🫶👍❤️

✅ اینم توضیحاتی که درباره پاراگراف نویسی رایتینگ های آیلتس نوع سوال Discussion قول داده بودیم.


🔴 در این پادکست پاسخ دادیم:

✍️ چطور باید به این مدل سوال ها جواب داد؟

✍️ آیا باید هر دو طرف رو بنویسیم یا بهتره فقط راجع به یک طرف بنویسیم؟

✍️ وقتی هر دو طرف رو مینویسیم باید مزیت و معایب رو با هم بگیم یا فقط مزیت ها رو؟

✍️ تو هر پاراگراف باید 2 دلیل بگیم یا 3 دلیل؟

✍️ مثال زدن تو پاراگراف ها اجباری هست یا نه؟


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امروز جلسه اول برگزار میشه

Band 7.5+ Answer 🤩

People have different views as to whether team sports serve as the most effective means of promoting collaboration among children in schools. While there are legitimate concerns regarding the potential drawbacks of engaging in team activities, I believe it is the best way to teach children how to cooperate.

Critics of team sports cite various reasons to support their stance. When children play team sports such as football and basketball, they tend to experience heavy pressure to outperform others and fear the possibility of falling behind their opponents. This environment can lead to heightened competition, fueling frequent disagreements and conflicts, which may undermine mutual respect and strain friendships. In a context where younger students already navigate challenges related to constant social comparison, immense parental pressure, and intense competition for academic success, the additional competitiveness inherent in sports might exacerbate their difficulties in forming supportive peer relationships.

Despite these criticisms, in my view, schools should prioritize integrating team sports into physical education programs. If children are encouraged to pursue team activities like hockey, they learn to collaborate effectively, pooling their skills and resources to achieve shared objectives, whether it be winning a game or improving team performance. Such collaboration fosters an atmosphere of mutual support and encouragement, potentially promoting a deeper sense of unity and camaraderie among peers from different walks of life. Although skeptics raise pertinent questions about the competitive nature of these activities, it is essential to recognize that they play a crucial role in cultivating a coherent and inclusive school culture where children can come together to put their physical abilities to the test.

In conclusion, while valid concerns exist surrounding the impact of team sports on children's social dynamics, I contend that they are the most effective method for enhancing cooperation. Only through the promotion of team activities in school settings can we create a collaborative environment that empowers children to flourish.

❤️Types of IELTS Writing Task 1
(Academic)
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Below are the six types of tasks that can appear in IELTS Writing task 1. You can also get a combination of two tasks together. You will find MODEL ANSWERS and SAMPLE PRACTICE TASKS linked below for each type of writing task

1️⃣Bar Charts

Charts that compare and contrast data. Data is divided into columns representing categories and compared with between two groups, such as men and women.

2️⃣Line Graphs

A graph that shows trends of two lines over a period of time. The lines represent numbers in two or more categories. This shows increases, decreases and other changes.

3️⃣Tables

A table containing data that can be complex with many categories divided into rows and columns.These could be compare / contrast or change over time.

4️⃣Pie Charts

These show proportions of a whole divided into different categories. Sometimes compare / contrast and sometimes change over time.

5️⃣Diagrams

It could be a process of how something works or how it is made. Or it could be a cycle such as a life cycle or water cycle. or a cycle. Diagrams contain stages and steps.

6️⃣Maps

A map of a town/ city or report or a floor plan of a building. Describing the layout, position of places and special features on the map.Sometimes there are two maps to compare in different time periods.

✅ یه سمپل خوب تسک ۲

🔴In some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables.

Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?


🟢In some cities, public parks and open spaces are being transformed into gardens where city dwellers can cultivate their own fruit and vegetables. Although this initiative may reduce areas for recreational activities and may not appeal to everyone, I believe that the benefits of providing space for gardening far outweigh these drawbacks.

On the one hand, a significant downside of converting public parks into gardens is the potential reduction in open space available for other recreational activities. These areas are often used for a wide array of outdoor pursuits, such as sports, picnics, and children's play. If these spaces are repurposed, residents might find themselves with fewer opportunities to engage in these activities. Another disadvantage is the possibility of unequal benefits. Not all citizens have the knowledge or interest in gardening, which could lead to underutilization of these transformed areas. However, these issues can be mitigated by creating multi-use spaces that accommodate both gardening and recreation. Additionally, offering educational programs to teach gardening can help more people develop an interest and skill in growing their own food.

On the other hand, the primary benefit of converting green spaces into gardens is the promotion of a healthy lifestyle. Growing one's own fruit and vegetables ensures access to fresh produce, which can contribute to a healthier diet. In contrast, store-bought products are often less fresh and may contain preservatives that are less beneficial for health. For example, in some regions of Iran, individuals who grow their own produce tend to enjoy healthier lives and longer lifespans compared to those who rely on store-bought goods. Moreover, community gardens can strengthen social bonds by bringing people together to share resources and experiences, thereby fostering a sense of community that may have been lacking before.

In conclusion, while the conversion of public parks into gardens may pose challenges, such as reduced recreational space and unequal use, I believe that the advantages, including the promotion of a healthier lifestyle and the strengthening of community ties, far outweigh the disadvantages.
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👉 Orient (n)= the countries of the East, especially East Asia.

👉 Orient (v) = align or position (something) relative to the points of a compass or other specified positions.

👉 Oriental = of, from, or characteristic of Asia, especially East Asia.

👉 Orientation = the action of orienting someone or something relative to the points of a compass or other specified positions.

👉 Disorientation = the condition of having lost one's sense of direction.

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✍️ یه روش خوب برای پارافریز مقدمه در رایتینگ تسک یک آکادمیک :

میتونید به جای ' before and after ' میشه از ' prior to and following ' استفاده کرد.

برای مثال ممکنه سوال زیر رو بهتون بدن:

Question: The bar chart below shows the average daily sales of a local coffee shop before and after introducing a loyalty card program.

در مقدمه میتونیم جمله زیر رو بنویسیم:

The provided bar chart illustrates a comparison of the average daily sales at a neighborhood coffee shop prior to and following the introduction of a loyalty card program.

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❤️ تاپیک های جدید رایتینگ تسک 2

🔴 Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels continue to rise at alarming rates.

What problems are associated with this, and what are some possible solutions?
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🔴 Some People Think That It Is Best To Live In a Horizontal City While Others Think Of a Vertical City.

Discuss both views?
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🔴 Some people think that people commit crime because of poverty and social problems, while others think it is because of their bad nature.

Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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🔴 سومین ثبت نام دوره مقدماتی مهرماه هم امروز انجام شد.

از لحظه پرداخت، منابع و روش انجام کار با توجه به تعیین سطحی که میکنیم انجام میشه و میتونید تا روز استارت کلاس که 5 مهرماه هست ارسال تکالیف رو برای بررسی و تصحیح داشته باشید.

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