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Many people try to look younger than their age.

Why do you think people do this?

What are the consequences of this?


قدم اول: بازنویسی (Paraphrase)

✅️try = Trying
✅️younger = as young as possible


قدم دوم: پاسخ به سوال (Thesis Statement)

Why do you think people do this?
the main reason for this is vanity

What are the consequences of this? the possible consequences of this might be insecurity and unhappiness

پاراگراف کامل (Introduction Paragraph)

Trying to look as young as possible is something that many people do these days. In my view, the main reason for this is vanity; however, the possible consequences of this might be insecurity and unhappiness.

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🔴 It is sometimes said that modern technology brings people more free time. However, some people say that instead technology is making people even busier.

to what extent do you agree or disagree


🔴 The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

🔴 Some people say that what individuals do to protect the environment cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect the environment.

Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

🔴 Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that the main interest is in world business.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.


🔴 It is a good thing for people in senior management positions to get a higher salary than other workers in the same company.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Band 7.5+ Answer 🤩

People have different views as to whether team sports serve as the most effective means of promoting collaboration among children in schools. While there are legitimate concerns regarding the potential drawbacks of engaging in team activities, I believe it is the best way to teach children how to cooperate.

Critics of team sports cite various reasons to support their stance. When children play team sports such as football and basketball, they tend to experience heavy pressure to outperform others and fear the possibility of falling behind their opponents. This environment can lead to heightened competition, fueling frequent disagreements and conflicts, which may undermine mutual respect and strain friendships. In a context where younger students already navigate challenges related to constant social comparison, immense parental pressure, and intense competition for academic success, the additional competitiveness inherent in sports might exacerbate their difficulties in forming supportive peer relationships.

Despite these criticisms, in my view, schools should prioritize integrating team sports into physical education programs. If children are encouraged to pursue team activities like hockey, they learn to collaborate effectively, pooling their skills and resources to achieve shared objectives, whether it be winning a game or improving team performance. Such collaboration fosters an atmosphere of mutual support and encouragement, potentially promoting a deeper sense of unity and camaraderie among peers from different walks of life. Although skeptics raise pertinent questions about the competitive nature of these activities, it is essential to recognize that they play a crucial role in cultivating a coherent and inclusive school culture where children can come together to put their physical abilities to the test.

In conclusion, while valid concerns exist surrounding the impact of team sports on children's social dynamics, I contend that they are the most effective method for enhancing cooperation. Only through the promotion of team activities in school settings can we create a collaborative environment that empowers children to flourish.