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✅ In some countries, the numbers of children aged 15 and younger are increasing dramatically.

What are the current and future effects of an ever-increasing population?


✅ The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


✅ Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others say that the amount of time spent watching television influences their behaviour.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


✅ Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

✅ Some people believe that economic progress is the only factor that can be used to measure a country’s success. Some others argue that there are some other factors. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

✅ It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

✅ Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio- diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

✅ In some countries, young people are not only richer, but also healthier and safer than before, However they are less happy.

What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?


✅ Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience.

Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

✅ It is sometimes said that modern technology brings people more free time. However, some people say that instead technology is making people even busier.

To what extent do you agree or disagree


✅ The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✅ Some people say that what individuals do to protect the environment cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect the environment.

Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

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موضوع:

Many people try to look younger than their age.

Why do you think people do this?

What are the consequences of this?


قدم اول: بازنویسی (Paraphrase)

✅️try = Trying
✅️younger = as young as possible


قدم دوم: پاسخ به سوال (Thesis Statement)

Why do you think people do this?
the main reason for this is vanity

What are the consequences of this? the possible consequences of this might be insecurity and unhappiness

پاراگراف کامل (Introduction Paragraph)

Trying to look as young as possible is something that many people do these days. In my view, the main reason for this is vanity; however, the possible consequences of this might be insecurity and unhappiness.

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👍Do's :

1️⃣Make sure your ideas are directly related to the question  

2️⃣Use ideas and examples that you are familiar with, and that relate directly to the topic 

3️⃣Extend your answer to include a number of ideas that will support the question.  

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1️⃣Include irrelevant information

2️⃣Over-generalise  

3️⃣Produce a memorised essay  

4️⃣Present ‘recent’ research or statistics related to the topic “At least 41% of all men…”