There is an argument between people who believed that it is more efficient to pay for significant and valuable data, and people who are in favor of reaching a large variety of different information about academic, scientific and similar majors freely. I agree with this view as the importance of authentic information.
On the one hand, some people hold the view that valuable content should not be released for free because it may be underestimated, additionally important documents may be neglected on free media and loses their target aspect in plenty of information. For instance purchasing a course makes people to pay more attention and obsession on that subject at least for the money they spend. Although this has been proven psychologically. The more you pay, the more you value to something like data.
On the other hand, the world of data and Internet becomes drastically intricate as result of the availability of information dissemination. Consequently, it is so imperative to establish sufficient data and help people in any grade to distinguish efficient documents. Moreover, this action could be very effective to enhance general knowledge of society. First aid is a notable example of this approach which should be taken more serious and make people aware of this subject freely is necessary. I agree with this view as true information and knowledgeable individuals is determine of valuable society.
In conclusion, valuing important information is good, but I agree with the opinion that useful and accurate information should be provided to people for free
On the one hand, some people hold the view that valuable content should not be released for free because it may be underestimated, additionally important documents may be neglected on free media and loses their target aspect in plenty of information. For instance purchasing a course makes people to pay more attention and obsession on that subject at least for the money they spend. Although this has been proven psychologically. The more you pay, the more you value to something like data.
On the other hand, the world of data and Internet becomes drastically intricate as result of the availability of information dissemination. Consequently, it is so imperative to establish sufficient data and help people in any grade to distinguish efficient documents. Moreover, this action could be very effective to enhance general knowledge of society. First aid is a notable example of this approach which should be taken more serious and make people aware of this subject freely is necessary. I agree with this view as true information and knowledgeable individuals is determine of valuable society.
In conclusion, valuing important information is good, but I agree with the opinion that useful and accurate information should be provided to people for free
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Cambridge15 Test1
In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is an undeniable fact that in some regions people tend to have their own houses and they do not like to live in a rental house, while it is good for some people to be in a rental house but I suppose that owning a house is a better idea.
There are many reasons why we should have a house for ourselves, for example, if we have a house, it will not be necessary to pay a deposit or money each month to the person who has the house. Meanwhile, we are not to live in a house with some rules that may do not like to perform them or the worst thing is that we are annoyed by these rules. Furthermore, some people like to change the decoration of the house and in some rental houses, it is not available or allowed. In addition, if a person had a house for herself, he would rent some part of this, therefore make money in this way, some of the eldery people speacially are made money by renting their own house.
In my opinion, living in a rental house is not ideal, but it might has some benefits, for example, it is not essential to worry about the properties of the home or if something destroyed, it would not relate to you and the owner should fix it anyway. Another reason that being in a rental house is good due to tax, the owner should pay tax of the house every year and you should not be concerned about it. What is more, a rental house includes some disadvantages for example, you are not in a stable situation and your house would be changed in some duration if the owner wanted his house.
In a word, buying a house is an important issue for some people all over the world due to owning a house is made life situation more convenient.
In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is an undeniable fact that in some regions people tend to have their own houses and they do not like to live in a rental house, while it is good for some people to be in a rental house but I suppose that owning a house is a better idea.
There are many reasons why we should have a house for ourselves, for example, if we have a house, it will not be necessary to pay a deposit or money each month to the person who has the house. Meanwhile, we are not to live in a house with some rules that may do not like to perform them or the worst thing is that we are annoyed by these rules. Furthermore, some people like to change the decoration of the house and in some rental houses, it is not available or allowed. In addition, if a person had a house for herself, he would rent some part of this, therefore make money in this way, some of the eldery people speacially are made money by renting their own house.
In my opinion, living in a rental house is not ideal, but it might has some benefits, for example, it is not essential to worry about the properties of the home or if something destroyed, it would not relate to you and the owner should fix it anyway. Another reason that being in a rental house is good due to tax, the owner should pay tax of the house every year and you should not be concerned about it. What is more, a rental house includes some disadvantages for example, you are not in a stable situation and your house would be changed in some duration if the owner wanted his house.
In a word, buying a house is an important issue for some people all over the world due to owning a house is made life situation more convenient.
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The table and charts share the information about the police budget for two time periods 2017 and 2018. The table and charts illustrates where the money came from and display how it was distribution respectively.
Overall, the highest police budget was 177.8m in 2018 that source is national government, also regarding the lowest budget in 2017 was 38m that’s was other sources. While how the money was spent in 2017 and 2018, The highest amount is related to salaries ( office and staff ) which is 75 and 69 percent respectively. Also the 8% and 14% of money has spent for technology during 2017 and 2018, that amount is lowest percent we can see in charts.
On the one hand, in 2017 and 2018, about the local taxes the police budget is 91.2m and 102.3m respectively. Likewise the budget of police in 2017 was 175.5m which is lowest from 2018 about national government. The total of police budget during this two time periods was 304.7 and 318.6m which is show the amount of total money in 2018 was high rather than 2017.
On the other hand, regarding the amount of money how that spent for building and transport was equal from 2017 and 2018, it was about 17 percent of all money. Also that charts show the spent money in 2017 was 6 percent higher than 2018 for salaries, while about the technology they have spent 6% much money in 2018 Compared to the year 2017.
Overall, the highest police budget was 177.8m in 2018 that source is national government, also regarding the lowest budget in 2017 was 38m that’s was other sources. While how the money was spent in 2017 and 2018, The highest amount is related to salaries ( office and staff ) which is 75 and 69 percent respectively. Also the 8% and 14% of money has spent for technology during 2017 and 2018, that amount is lowest percent we can see in charts.
On the one hand, in 2017 and 2018, about the local taxes the police budget is 91.2m and 102.3m respectively. Likewise the budget of police in 2017 was 175.5m which is lowest from 2018 about national government. The total of police budget during this two time periods was 304.7 and 318.6m which is show the amount of total money in 2018 was high rather than 2017.
On the other hand, regarding the amount of money how that spent for building and transport was equal from 2017 and 2018, it was about 17 percent of all money. Also that charts show the spent money in 2017 was 6 percent higher than 2018 for salaries, while about the technology they have spent 6% much money in 2018 Compared to the year 2017.
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Q: Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
According to investigation that has been conducted by a statistic, many a species of food and drink prepare the ground for encounters the health problem, owning to high levels of sugar. So there is a measure to reduce the consume sugar that is to more expensive the kind of edible. I wholeheartedly disagree due to the disadvantages of any type of manufactures.
Although, sugar which be used in products accounted for many diseases, by making it more expensive, Will not people purchase less sugar. The matter of fact, it is unlike that measure work. Never do restricts work as well as over the last few years that not only it didn't work, but also people have been more encourage. Because it seems they have been more valuable to have.
Moreover, providing that prices rise, all seller will lose either in buying their manufactures or selling them. Eventually, implements increasing the cost of sugar programs is just violation of laws. In addition, over the last year, the diet industry has been improved and people are going on a diet. Since sugar should be removed in this routine program, this measure does not require. Best suggestion to address illness is as follows to promote the education and information about the sides effects of sugary food.
The last but not least. There are a significant number of poor family who cannot effort to pay in this price of food and drinks which contain the sugar, so they should be helped and providing some food or also cake for their children's birthday instead of enhancing the price of products.
To sum up, in my opinion, it is not necessary to increase the price. Maybe it bring out the reserve results. Not only sugary food has got loads of inferior nutrition but also it leads to problems in your body and health. Only through own will can give people motivation to consume less sugar.
Q: Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
According to investigation that has been conducted by a statistic, many a species of food and drink prepare the ground for encounters the health problem, owning to high levels of sugar. So there is a measure to reduce the consume sugar that is to more expensive the kind of edible. I wholeheartedly disagree due to the disadvantages of any type of manufactures.
Although, sugar which be used in products accounted for many diseases, by making it more expensive, Will not people purchase less sugar. The matter of fact, it is unlike that measure work. Never do restricts work as well as over the last few years that not only it didn't work, but also people have been more encourage. Because it seems they have been more valuable to have.
Moreover, providing that prices rise, all seller will lose either in buying their manufactures or selling them. Eventually, implements increasing the cost of sugar programs is just violation of laws. In addition, over the last year, the diet industry has been improved and people are going on a diet. Since sugar should be removed in this routine program, this measure does not require. Best suggestion to address illness is as follows to promote the education and information about the sides effects of sugary food.
The last but not least. There are a significant number of poor family who cannot effort to pay in this price of food and drinks which contain the sugar, so they should be helped and providing some food or also cake for their children's birthday instead of enhancing the price of products.
To sum up, in my opinion, it is not necessary to increase the price. Maybe it bring out the reserve results. Not only sugary food has got loads of inferior nutrition but also it leads to problems in your body and health. Only through own will can give people motivation to consume less sugar.
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Cambridge 10 Test1
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is an undeniable fact that distinguishing between helpful and harmful things is crucial for young children. At first glance, it seems difficult to make a spontaneous decision about punishment, because it includes advantages and disadvantages either, but with serious consideration, this approach is more beneficial than harmful.
One of the main reasons that I agree with punishment is that we live in a fast-paced and hazardous circumstance and if children are not aware of the positive and negative points of each issue, it will have undesirable consequences for them. For instance, if children do not have information about trust, they will think that all individuals are reliable and this belief can be too dangerous for them. Let me give a real example, I know a girl who relied on a man that buy some candies for her but after that, he stole her accessories which were gold.
In my opinion, utilizing punishment would be efficient for some goals and it can be helpful, training children to detect the differences between right and wrong things but we should have some guidelines for punishment, I mean that there should be some restrictions for families about punishment. I think that a physical penalty is one of the worst things that individuals can consider for their kids. For example, I read in a newspaper that a man, the father of a child, hit his child and the outcome of this behavior was irreparable, the Child is deaf now. On the other hand, verbal penalties and teaching them through videos are very effective ways for our kids and it can be helpful for them when they are in society and have interactions with individuals.
In conclusion, I think that it is vital for kids to know about the differences between correct and wrong things, we should consider appropriate penalties for them and avoid physical punishments.
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is an undeniable fact that distinguishing between helpful and harmful things is crucial for young children. At first glance, it seems difficult to make a spontaneous decision about punishment, because it includes advantages and disadvantages either, but with serious consideration, this approach is more beneficial than harmful.
One of the main reasons that I agree with punishment is that we live in a fast-paced and hazardous circumstance and if children are not aware of the positive and negative points of each issue, it will have undesirable consequences for them. For instance, if children do not have information about trust, they will think that all individuals are reliable and this belief can be too dangerous for them. Let me give a real example, I know a girl who relied on a man that buy some candies for her but after that, he stole her accessories which were gold.
In my opinion, utilizing punishment would be efficient for some goals and it can be helpful, training children to detect the differences between right and wrong things but we should have some guidelines for punishment, I mean that there should be some restrictions for families about punishment. I think that a physical penalty is one of the worst things that individuals can consider for their kids. For example, I read in a newspaper that a man, the father of a child, hit his child and the outcome of this behavior was irreparable, the Child is deaf now. On the other hand, verbal penalties and teaching them through videos are very effective ways for our kids and it can be helpful for them when they are in society and have interactions with individuals.
In conclusion, I think that it is vital for kids to know about the differences between correct and wrong things, we should consider appropriate penalties for them and avoid physical punishments.
Cambridge 18 test1 Question:
The most important aim of scince should be to improve people's lives.
to waht extent do you agree or disagree.
Answer:
There has been a heated controversy in the academic world regarding the ultimate goal of science. Some individuals, emphasize on improvement of public life quality as the main aim of scientific activities. In my opinion knowledg is an infinite sphere and should not be limited to merely practical sciences.
Generally, mankind is curious and thends to explore as much as possible, whether for instructive purposes or just joy. While some sciences have direct impact on improving life standards, other fields have less concrete and immediate effect on everyday life. For example, majors such as medicine or engineering, directly impact healthcare advancement and industrial developement. In contrast, there are some academic disciplines like history and philosophy that do not present an observable results, yet have as important role as technical or medical sciences. Unfortunately, some people belittle humanities due to its intangible incomes and accuse it of being impractical.
Although the practical majors possess irefutable consequnces, but without guidance of intellect and appropriate management, these scienses can lead to a catastrophe. If an evil intention takes the political power, the invention of mass killing weapons or dangerous viruses will be the result. There are a lot of evidence in the historical experience in regard of powerfull countries attemts to achieve detrimential devices in order to serve evil intentions, like Nazies who used chemical science to genocide the Jews. The way to avoid such disasters is to rely on logical argument, and comprehensive knowledg about humans that can be traced in the so-called impractical fields, the humanities.
To conclude my points, every science will serve in a way and there is no useless scientific area. Deviding sciences to pragamtic and non-pragmatic sections will lead to hazardeous situation.
The most important aim of scince should be to improve people's lives.
to waht extent do you agree or disagree.
Answer:
There has been a heated controversy in the academic world regarding the ultimate goal of science. Some individuals, emphasize on improvement of public life quality as the main aim of scientific activities. In my opinion knowledg is an infinite sphere and should not be limited to merely practical sciences.
Generally, mankind is curious and thends to explore as much as possible, whether for instructive purposes or just joy. While some sciences have direct impact on improving life standards, other fields have less concrete and immediate effect on everyday life. For example, majors such as medicine or engineering, directly impact healthcare advancement and industrial developement. In contrast, there are some academic disciplines like history and philosophy that do not present an observable results, yet have as important role as technical or medical sciences. Unfortunately, some people belittle humanities due to its intangible incomes and accuse it of being impractical.
Although the practical majors possess irefutable consequnces, but without guidance of intellect and appropriate management, these scienses can lead to a catastrophe. If an evil intention takes the political power, the invention of mass killing weapons or dangerous viruses will be the result. There are a lot of evidence in the historical experience in regard of powerfull countries attemts to achieve detrimential devices in order to serve evil intentions, like Nazies who used chemical science to genocide the Jews. The way to avoid such disasters is to rely on logical argument, and comprehensive knowledg about humans that can be traced in the so-called impractical fields, the humanities.
To conclude my points, every science will serve in a way and there is no useless scientific area. Deviding sciences to pragamtic and non-pragmatic sections will lead to hazardeous situation.
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