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Some individuals consider saving money a positive action for everyone, especially youngsters, and I totally agree with this notion due to having financial security. Moreover, it helps them to be independent.

One of the perks of saving money is that it gives people a sense of security in the financial stages of their lives. The future is unpredictable and nobody knows what situation might they face later So saving an acceptable amount of money might rescue them from challenging situations. Saving money helps them stay stabilized in hard situations whether things get tough financially. For example, when I was a high school student we were supposed to bring an extra charge to participate in a tournament but my dad went to a business travel that day. I had some savings at home and finally, I was able to participate in the event.

Another advantage of saving money is that helps the younger generation to be independent. They are in an important stage of their lives. I mean there is a lot of things that they want to do or buy. It is only possible when they have an acceptable amount of funds, to help them do anything with that, not the thing others want from them. for example, when my family and I, traveled to Malaysia I brought my savings and exchanged them for dollars. During our vacation, I bought everything I wanted. When i think about it I was proud of myself that I didn't ask my father for money. I felt a mix of confidence and freedom that time.

In conclusion, Saving money is essential, especially for young people. It equips them with independence and a sense of security, In my opinion, It is crucial for going through life’s challenges.”

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Some individuals insist on reducing working hours and expanding weekends. I believe that increasing days off might be beneficial due to the rise in the rate of job satisfaction and if people have enough leisure time their creativity at work will increase.

One of the significant impacts of reducing work hours in a week is that it enhance their satisfaction in work. As they don't have to work every day without enough time to rest, they value this situation which is provided to them to spend some days with their loved ones or take a break from work. This leads people to have job satisfaction in the workplace and makes them think that they aren't stuck behind a desk. For instance, when I was at college the university authorities published a regulation about increasing the off days in a week. So we only attended college four days a week. Afterward, most of the students were satisfied that they had spare time to work on their abilities and unfinished assignments.


In addition, People are not robots, they can't work for long hours continuously. there are a lot of things that they want to do but can't due to working unstoppably. If people have enough time for the activities that they are keen on doing, they became more creative. By having extra time in their weekly schedules they enjoy themselves and come up with more creative ideas in the workplace and their daily life. For example, Some well-known companies like Apple and Meta, decided to increase the non-working days for the developers to only work three days a week. Therefore, they have enough time to work on their ideas and enhance their creativity. Their efficiency grew significantly and the ideas popped up in their mind one after another.


In conclusion, by decreasing the work hours in a week, people enjoy working and it brings them a sense of satisfaction also they become more creative and can work more efficiently in their workplace. people have favorite activities to do if their time gets full with only work, it will kill their new ideas and make them unsatisfied with their working journey.

📌 روش های توصیف اعداد و درصدها در رایتینگ تسک یک آیلتس آکادمیک:

💠 A large number of ....
🔶 Over a quarter of .... (26%)
💠 A small minority of ....
🔶 A significant number of ....
💠 Less than a fifth
🔶 80% : four-fifths
💠 75% : three-quarters
🔶 70% : seven in ten
💠 65% : two-thirds
🔶 60% : three-fifths
💠 55% : more than half
🔶 50% : half
💠 45% : more than two fifths
🔶 40% : two-fifths
💠 35% : more than a third
🔶 30% : less than a third
💠 25% : a quarter
🔶 20% : a fifth
💠 15% : less than a fifth
🔶 10% : one in ten
💠 5% : one in twenty

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• Similar opinions: share the same views, have aligned perspectives, think alike, hold similar beliefs
• Differing opinions: have contrasting views, hold different perspectives, think differently, have divergent beliefs
• Healthy debate: engage in discussion, partake in argument, involve in dialogue
• Conflict resolution: resolve disputes, settle disagreements, manage conflicts, navigate tensions
• Strengthen friendship: build bonds, enhance relationship, solidify friendship, deepen connection
• Personal growth: foster self-improvement, encourage development, promote growth, facilitate evolution
• Broaden horizons: expand viewpoints, widen perspectives, increase awareness, enhance understanding
• Constructive feedback: provide criticism, offer advice, give evaluation, share insights
• Open-minded approach: adopt flexibility, maintain receptiveness, stay open to new ideas, embrace diversity
• Mutual respect: show regard, demonstrate admiration, uphold respect, foster appreciation
• Echo chamber effect: reinforce beliefs, amplify opinions, circulate viewpoints, confirm biases
• Encourage diversity: promote variety, support differences, champion heterogeneity, advocate for multiplicity
• Reach consensus: find agreement, achieve harmony, come to a consensus, establish unity
• Accept differences: embrace diversity, tolerate opposing views, respect individuality, appreciate divergence
• Critical analysis: apply reasoning, engage in evaluation, conduct analysis, perform critique

📌 Task 2: Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

🔴 فوری: متقاضیان محترم آزمون آیلتس
همراهان گرامی موسسه عصر دین و دانش
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به آگاهی شما می رسانیم که خوشبختانه با تایید موسسه محترم IDP استرالیا و سازمان محترم ملی سنجش آموزش کشور، آزمون های آیلتس کامپیوتری از ۲۲ جولای مورخ اول مرداد ماه مجددا آغاز می شود.
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