In recent years, children spend a huge amount of their time on mobilephones each day. This is mainly because a wide range of applications is offered to children by entertaining cooperation. I see this trend more negative as it may bring about some problems for new generation in long run.

There are two key reason why children are spending a lot of time on their smartphones. Firstly, children are used to have sedentary lifestyle and it is more convenient for them to just seat on a chair and gaze for several hours at the screen of their smartphones watching different series and movies or playing online game than doing some phisical activities. Secondly, they have an overwhelming number of applications on their phones which can entertain them. Take, for instance, my cousine ,who is just 10 years old, has about twenty applications on her smartphone just for playing game.

In my opinion, spending too much time on smartphones is a detrimental trend which may have negative consequences for children’s future. Scrolling through social media, children attention would wander and their concentration would waver. So, when they want to study, they need more time to understand a topic. They also could not excel at school and ,consequently, they will lost their interest in education which could be problematic for their future as adults when they want to find a appropriate job. Another reason is that the more children spend their daily time on their handies, the less time is available for communicating with their friends and family. Little do they learn about interpersonal skill, they would have troubles not only in their personal life, but in their professional lives when they grown up.

In conclusion, although many children may enjoy playing or searching on the Internet with their smartphones, I believe this trend would have damaging effects on their communicational and educational skills.

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Some individuals insist that competing in the workplace and daily life is beneficial, while others prefer cooperating. being a competitive person could help people improve their abilities and grow their talents, While cooperation leads people to help each other and solve problems together in less time.

Being a competitive person in life or the workplace has some benefits. when people have a chance that everyone is looking for, they don't want to miss any opportunities so they work harder to improve their abilities, which leads them to more efficiency in work and their lives. As everyone knows, Improvement happens in hard situations. For instance when I was in high school, me and my friend were in one of the most competitive periods of our lives. We used to compete with each other regularly in who would get the best grade in exams and it made us study harder and take it seriously.

Cooperating is an essential feature of human beings. It's a positive behavior whether it's in the workplace or daily life. It makes people work with each other and find solutions together. Cooperating it's more about reaching a goal together and it leads people to learn from others. Not only it has considerable effects on saving time but also it increases kindness and trust in social life. For example, in college, I was supposed to be a part of a research team, if anyone faced a question or problem everyone was keen on helping and we all found the answers together. then the process continued noticeably faster than we expected.

In conclusion, working and living in a competitive framework makes people work efficiently due to working harder. Cooperation leads people to help one another and reach an aim faster. I believe that being competitive can lead to anxiety and a sense of unfulfillment in life. Instead, we should take things easier and savor the present moment(295 WORDS)

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