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This is a very good piece of work with clear main ideas and meaningful support in a logical and coherent way.

I hope you could use better words in the future but I think this is one of the best works that has been produced in your class

❌to do these issues✅to deal with these issues
❌more happier life ✅happier life
❌direct relationship in✅direct relationship with
❌vital ingredient✅crucial factor

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❌my life is completely changed✅my life has completely changed since my marriage
❌stressless environment✅peaceful environment
❌often no✅not often
❌are belongs to ✅Belongs to
❌I am confident about their secrecy✅I know they are trustworthy

❤ تعیین رایگان نمره #اسپیکینگ شما(از خرداد ۱۳۹۵) + #فیدبک
❤️ تعیین رایگان نمره #رایتینگ شما (از شهریور ۱۳۹۶)

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🔴 Do you think early retirement is good? Why?


🔴 What is the employment rate in your country?


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🌹نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط دوستی که امروز نمره هاشون رو اعلام کردند و 6.5 را در رایتینگ و overall 7.5 دریافت کرده بودند 👆👆👆

✌️پرسش های امروز ظهر #ایرسافام گزارش شده توسط وردان، دیگر زبان آموز کلاس نیمه گروهی روزهای زوج مهرماه که زحمت کشیدند گزارش کردند(از نظر دستوری تصحیح شده) 👇👇👇
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First part
After introducing myself,
asked about work or study ?
What is your idea about work from home?
what is your feeling about sunshine?
what do you do in sunshine?
What is your favorite pop star?
Have you seen a pop star?
Who is your role model?

Second part
Describe a work that you wanted to do but haven’t done yet
What is that
Why you didnt
Why you want to do
What are the problems

Third part
What is the role of parents in raising children?
What should parents do to raise their children in the best way?
What responsibilities governments have toward children's upbringing?

🤨 به گزارش وردان برگزاری آزمون در مرکز ایرسافام بسیار منظم بوده اما اگزمینر آقا چهره بسیار خشکی به خود گرفته بودند، لهجه غلیظی داشتند و از پاسخ ها خود را متعجب نشان میدادند و آخر اینکه تعداد زیادی پرسش از ایشان پرسیده اند.
@ielts2com

🤞برای وردان آرزوی پیروزی داریم 🙏🙏🙏

❤ تعیین رایگان نمره #اسپیکینگ شما(از خرداد ۱۳۹۵) + #فیدبک
❤️ تعیین رایگان نمره #رایتینگ شما (از شهریور ۱۳۹۶)

@ielts2com در

🔴 فقط به یکی از پرسش های زیر (دست کم 60 ثانیه) پاسخ داده و با استفاده از یک Recorder پاسخ را در فرمت #mp3 ضبط کنید و برای ما به این نشانی بفرستید. 👇👇👇
@PouyaAbolghasemi


🔴 What is the role of parents in raising children?


🔴 Who is your role model? Why?


@ielts2com

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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5

#feedback

The biggest problem with your voice sample is the grammatical mistakes you have. Moreover you should work on both your fluency and pronunciation.

❌parents plays✅parents play
❌children's lifestyle✅children's lives
❌can accelerate the proxces of growing✅can optimize the normal development

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 7 to 7.5

#feedback

Generally this is a fine answer but you have to work on your fluency and try to talk faster with right intonation.

second point is you have to work on your pronunciation because you have quite a few mistakes in your pronunciations and

finally you have to be careful about the words or sentences that you translate directly from your first language

❌when they are infancy✅when they are infants
❌launch them on the path or antisocial behavior ✅encourage them to show antisocial behavior
❌logivpcally✅check the pronunciation
❌return you what you are✅reflect your characteristics