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❌womens✅women
❌make their own position ✅have a better place in society
❌make connections with different people ✅communicate with others
❌Womans✅women
❌Can being ✅can be
❌childrens✅children
❌put children in right way✅ take care of their children
❌feel boring and unvaluable ✅feel bored and worthless

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❌we can access to ✅we can access
✅will totally change ✅✅will dramatically altered
✅will be dominant in the future✅✅will become the mainstream in decades to come

❤ تعیین رایگان نمره #اسپیکینگ شما(از خرداد ۱۳۹۵)
❤️ تعیین رایگان نمره #رایتینگ شما (از شهریور ۱۳۹۶)

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🔴 What is the difference between modern and traditional objects

🔴 Do people use boats as means of transportation in your country?


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Try to talk faster
Try to be clear when you pronounce each word.

✅I really like cooking✅✅I adore cooking/cooking is my passion
❌don't cooking✅don't cook
❌your mood affected on your cooking✅your mood affects your work

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6 to 6.5

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This is a very good piece of work with clear main ideas and meaningful support in a logical and coherent way.

I hope you could use better words in the future but I think this is one of the best works that has been produced in your class

❌to do these issues✅to deal with these issues
❌more happier life ✅happier life
❌direct relationship in✅direct relationship with
❌vital ingredient✅crucial factor

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❌my life is completely changed✅my life has completely changed since my marriage
❌stressless environment✅peaceful environment
❌often no✅not often
❌are belongs to ✅Belongs to
❌I am confident about their secrecy✅I know they are trustworthy

❤ تعیین رایگان نمره #اسپیکینگ شما(از خرداد ۱۳۹۵) + #فیدبک
❤️ تعیین رایگان نمره #رایتینگ شما (از شهریور ۱۳۹۶)

@ielts2com

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@PouyaAbolghasemi


🔴 Do you think early retirement is good? Why?


🔴 What is the employment rate in your country?


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🌹نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط دوستی که امروز نمره هاشون رو اعلام کردند و 6.5 را در رایتینگ و overall 7.5 دریافت کرده بودند 👆👆👆