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❌Can to do ✅can do
❌To each other person ✅to other people
❌at other hands✅on the other hand
❌I don't get married✅I am not married
❌I'm very young to get married✅I'm too young to get married
❌I'm a child myself✅I'm not mature enough yet

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#Feedback

Try to pay more attention to intonation, which is the way your voice rises and falls like natuve speakers.

Work on your pronunciation for less frequesntly used words.

Try to use wider range of grammatical structures as much as possible.

❌target place✅destination
❌relationship of countries✅relationships among countries
...
❌many of people ✅many people
❌Hard to them✅difficult for them

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❌womens✅women
❌make their own position ✅have a better place in society
❌make connections with different people ✅communicate with others
❌Womans✅women
❌Can being ✅can be
❌childrens✅children
❌put children in right way✅ take care of their children
❌feel boring and unvaluable ✅feel bored and worthless

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❌we can access to ✅we can access
✅will totally change ✅✅will dramatically altered
✅will be dominant in the future✅✅will become the mainstream in decades to come

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🔴 Do people use boats as means of transportation in your country?


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@ielts2com

#feedback

Try to talk faster
Try to be clear when you pronounce each word.

✅I really like cooking✅✅I adore cooking/cooking is my passion
❌don't cooking✅don't cook
❌your mood affected on your cooking✅your mood affects your work

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6 to 6.5

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This is a very good piece of work with clear main ideas and meaningful support in a logical and coherent way.

I hope you could use better words in the future but I think this is one of the best works that has been produced in your class

❌to do these issues✅to deal with these issues
❌more happier life ✅happier life
❌direct relationship in✅direct relationship with
❌vital ingredient✅crucial factor

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