🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 7

#feedback

Vocabulary 6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy 5.5
Coherence and cohesion 5.5
Task response 6

You need to write with a pencil and your bubble diagram should be present.

There are quite few grammatical mistakes so you need to check the dictionary for every word or structure.

The main idea in each paragraph is clear but support is insufficient. You need to develop your support in a logical way.

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#feedback

Vocabulary 7
Task response 7
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Coherence and cohesion 6.5




Extreme climate
Are likely to attack
Have not been accustomed
Exceeds 50'c
Has effect on
Will lead to dehydration
Is changed 😳😳😳
pluses and minuses 😳😳😳
Increase the capacity of bearing problems....sounds Farsi

In first paragraph, 2 main supports are not separated. For example by first of all and secondly.

#advice
Try to minimise your introduction and conclusion, preferably keep them to 40 words and write longer body paragraphs.

🔴 نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط زبان آموزان کلاس روزهای جمعه - پرسش این هفته Cambridge 12 General Test 1 👆👆👆

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6 to 6.5

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample 7 to 7.5

#Feedback

Vocabulary 6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Coherence and cohesion 7
Task response 7

Advices....😳

#Ways_for_improvement

You need to use a higher level vocabulary and try to include passive voice, conditionals and more complex sentences wherever possible. Try to have a more clear picture of the question on your mind and discuss only points mentioned in the question and say nothing more. Don't include any new idea at the end of the main paragraphs. Keep introduction short and write more creative hooks. Avoid unnecessary fixed structure in your conclusion. They won't do you any good

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🔴 125. Has the rate of crime been on the increase in your country in recent years? Why?


🔴 126. What can the government do to deter criminals?


🔴 127. Should be government abolish the law of capital punishment? Why?

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