#feedback

Writing is far more than 250 words especially introduction and conclusion are too large

The vocabulary and grammatical structures are limited.

The ideas presented in each paragraph do not have convincing support and therefore lose point related to coherence and cohesion.

There are 2 ideas in the question and as a result 2 main paragraphs are enough to support the. The 3rd main paragraph is unnecessary.

There we several spelling and punctuation mistakes.

🔴 Estimated Score is 6.5 to 7

The second body paragraph is not supported well and it is not convincing and u may lose points for coherence/cohesion and task response.

The paragraph which expresses your opinion and conclusion should be separated and u may lose point for mixing them in real exam.


Higher level of vocabulary and grammatical structures could be attempted for a higher score.

🔴Estimated Score for this writing is 6

Support and developing the ideas is not enough in body paragraph 1. This paragraph could be longer with more coherent support.

In second paragraph main idea is presented and repeated but support is not very convincing and although this paragraph is too long, it is not coherent.

You need one short paragraph for your personal opinion or u may lose point for not having it.

The level of vocabulary and grammatical structures keeps the essay from reveiving higher scores.

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6 to 6.5

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 5 to 5.5

Your sample sounds monotonous and it seems you are reading from text though

#feedback

This is a very good work. At this level try to write a rather shorter introduction by avoiding repetitive sentences. U also have repeated rather same structure several times.

In both main paragraphs, u have a short support for second reason. Try to talk more and avoid repetition.

When u have a separate paragraph for Your Opinion, it's fine to write 90 words or even less provided that you be consice without repeating anything.

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🔴 Estimated Score for this writing is 6

#feedback

First body paragraph has attempted to address one side of the question but the coherence could be improved. Reasons were presented to support the first main idea but there was limitation in development.

The second main paragraph is simply too short to be able to support the main idea and thus it is neither coherent nor well developed.

Since question specifically asks for "your opinion" it needs a separate short paragraph.

The range of vocabulary and collocation are limited and there are several grammatical mistakes all over the essay.

Conclusion fails to provide a review of main ideas and only presents a new notion.

🔴 Estimated Score for this writing is 6

Without clear paragraphs you may lose considerable point. For instance 1 point

The introduction and first paragraph are inseparable, which makes main idea of first paragraph unclear and difficult to find.

The introduction is too long with unnecessary details and reasons.

The first paragraph lacks support and has not been developed in a logical manner.

It appears that the second paragraph is off topic. The idea presented in the question is not covered in the 2nd paragraph. Moreover, the second paragraph is too short to respond effectively to the question.

The vocabulary related to this topic and grammatical range of structure are both limited to band 6 and needs to be improved.

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